A Griffon's Fate

by TheCamel

The Beginning of the End

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Never before had a single piece of news spread across Equestria faster than what was being spread now. Not even the news of the griffons declaring war on Equestria moved this fast. But this was dire information that needed to be spread as quickly as possible; the griffons were on the move for an all-out attack.

As Celestia’s main courier, you were one of the first to learn of the bad news. Twilight came flying as fast as she could over to Rainbow’s house to inform you of the letter she got from Princess Celestia. No matter how many times you reread the letter the words always said the same thing; the entire griffon army was on the move, and they were headed for Los Pegasus.

Since you were the pony who knew the sick, twisted mind of Captain Ray the best, Celestia had ordered you back to Canterlot immediately. You raced back to Rainbow Dash’s room to retrieve your saddle pack, but as you pack what few items you have here Rainbow Dash asks where you’re going.

You tell her the truth and tell her that you’re needed back in Canterlot immediately. Tears instantly fill her eyes as she realizes that you may be leaving her alone, but you calm her by telling her that she can come with you. Minutes later you and Rainbow Dash exit her room, only to find that Soarin and Spitfire are also packed and ready to go. Of course, being officers for the Wonderbolts they too were ordered back to Canterlot, and without any further delay all four of you take off and fly for Canterlot as quickly as possible.


By the time you all land in Canterlot, it is well past dark. You bring everyone to your spacious apartment to spend the night before you meet with Princess Celestia tomorrow. Spitfire and Soarin go off to the guest room while you and Rainbow Dash adjourn to your bedroom.

You climb into bed, ready to go right to sleep, but Rainbow has other plans on her mind. She gets on the bed after you but climbs on top of you. “Master…” she says, looking straight into your eyes. You can feel her hind legs quivering slightly in anticipation of what she wants. You nod, causing her to smile .

“Thank you, master.” she says, giving you a quick kiss before she starts. Moving down slowly, she kisses your body all over, starting with another long, sensual kiss to your lips. Once she breaks free she lightly kisses your chest and stomach, letting her fore hooves caress your sides and legs. Finally her lips are hovering above your crotch, and you feel your cock beginning to harden as you feel her hot breath on it.

Drooling slightly in anticipation, a small strand of saliva fell from Dash’s mouth onto your cock. She extended her tongue and quickly lapped up the small bit of fluid she let slip. With each lick her tongue stroked more of your now completely hard erection, and after a dozen licks she was running her tongue the entire length of your shaft.

“Mmm, master, you taste so good.” she murmured. With no warning she takes the first few inches of your cock into her mouth, moaning loudly as she does so. You can’t help but groan as you feel her hot, wet mouth envelope your sensitive member. She lets your cock slip from her mouth for a moment, kissing the tip before throwing her head back down and taking your entire length into her throat. She holds her head down for a few seconds, her throat milking your cock as she gulped. Finally she slowly lets your member go, slowly drawing her head back up. With a soft wet pop your cock is released from her mouth, and she looks up at you with an excited look on her face.

“Master, I did it! I took it all without gagging!” she says proudly, smiling at you in search of praise.

You smile back and say, “Good job, Dash.”

She keeps looking at you with her beautiful pink eyes. “Can I have your cum now, master. I promise I’ll swallow every drop of your cum.” she begs.

You nod again and she eagerly takes your cock back into her mouth, sucking it with vigor. You lean back as her blowjob sends waves of pleasure through your body. She presses her tongue against the bottom of your shaft to try to get you to cum sooner, and it works. You feel your orgasm beginning to build, and you don’t hold back at all, knowing that the sooner you cum the sooner Rainbow will stop acting so submissively. You buck your hips up slightly as you feel yourself getting closer and closer, and with one last jerk you finally release your cum. Rainbow is slightly caught off guard by your orgasm but recovers quickly, greedily swallowing your cum as soon as it shoots into her mouth. When she feels your cock stop twitching she begins to suck hard on your dick, trying to draw out every last drop of sperm from your body. Once she finishes she delicately licks your cock all over, cleaning any drops of cum she may have missed as well as any excess saliva she left.

Once she is finished, she lifts her head back up and looks at you for your approval. A small dribble of your cum escapes from the corner of her mouth, and before she can lick it back into her mouth it breaks free and falls on your stomach. You barely notice it, but Dash freezes when she realizes that she failed to swallow every drop like she said she would.

“Master, no, I’m sorry! I didn’t mean to!” she says as tears build in her eyes.

“Dash, it’s okay, forget about it.” you say, trying to calm her. You know what she’s thinking; she has to be punished. She’s been like this ever since she was raped by Iron Rook. If she fails to please you or if she thinks she didn’t do something perfectly, she will start to panic and beg to be punished. The first time she begged for punishment you refused to do so, but doing nothing caused Dash to take matters into her own hooves. You barely managed to stop her from breaking her own wings later that day, but she firmly stated that if you wouldn’t punish her then she would do it herself.

Dash lowers her gaze, waiting to hear what her punishment will be. Despite begging to be punished Dash found no joy in the pain, but she was willing to do whatever it took to save her pet’s life. “Please, hurt me, just don’t touch Tank.” she begged.

You hate having to do this, but you know Dash will hurt herself much worse if you don’t. “Show your ass to me.” you command.

Dash whimpers but obeys, facing away from you and bending over. She grabs her flank with her forehooves and pulls her ass open, exposing her tightly puckered rear hole to you. You press your cock up against her anal opening, causing her to whimper once again. With no warning to her you force your cock in, sinking your entire length into her body. Dash lets out a loud gasp before biting down on the bed sheets to stop from screaming.

You wince at the sound of her gasps and muffled cries. You wish you could stop now and cuddle with her but this is the least painful way you can think of punishing her. You’ve tried gentler, easier methods to try to punish her but none of them proved painful enough for Rainbow Dash, and with her threatening to punish herself you were left no choice but to hurt her. You pause for a moment to let Dash adjust to the sudden intrusion before drawing your cock out. Her ass is left agape once you withdraw your cock from her rear hole, waiting until it finally clenches back shut on its own. Once it does, you push yourself back in, receiving another muffled groan from Dash as she’s split back open. You hear her try to choke back a sob from the pain and decide just one more thrust should suffice for her punishment. You slowly draw your cock back out, once again staring down at her gaping ass.

“Just one more, Dash.” you whisper softly to her.

“Y-yes, master.” she replies, bracing herself for the final impalement.

You line your cock back up with her ass, waiting until her hole once again closes before thrusting forward. Rainbow cries out loudly as she had her sphincter tightened in anticipation, causing her to feel more pain as you slide your cock into her for the final time. Though she’s in pain you can’t help but savor the tightness of her ass as it grips your dick, and it takes almost all your will power to stop from pounding her tight ass.

You pull your cock out of her as gently as you can. She winces as your cock finally pops out of her sore anus but wastes no time. Turning back to face you, she engulfs your penis with her mouth, ignoring the rancid taste of her own ass as she licks your cock clean. The entire time she gently sucks your cock she looks up at you, hoping that her service is to your liking.

She finally releases your dick from her mouth and sits back. “Did… did I do good, master? Please forgive me.”

“You did fine, Rainbow.” you reply, weakly smiling at her.

She grins widely as she hears your praise. “Thank you, master! I won’t disappoint you again!”

Allowing yourself to be pushed back by her, you lay on your back as she climbs up and positions her pussy over your still erect member. She lowers herself so your cock is pressed against her wet opening, causing her to slowly grind against you in anticipation.

“Ooh, master, I want you so bad. Please, fuck me. Use me. I promise to make you cum quickly. Please.”

You feel your heart ache as she says those words, but you can’t deny that she looks extremely tempting in her current position. You nod slightly and she immediately begins to slowly lower herself onto your erection. She bites her lower lip to stop from squealing in pleasure as her pussy is stretched open by your shaft, and she takes your entire length inside of her with ease.

“Mmph! Thank you, master! It feels so good.” she moans as she bottoms out. She leans forward to kiss you as she begins to move up and down on your cock. You feel her tightening her pussy each time she sinks onto your shaft, squeezing your shaft with her tight twat in an attempt to get you to fill her with your seed as quickly as possible. Coupled with the fact that your prick is still extremely sensitive from cumming just moments ago, her trick works and you can’t stop yourself from throwing your head back as another orgasm hits you, your cum erupting from your dick and into her body.

“Yes, yes! Fill me with your cum. Give me all of it.” Dash gasps, not caring at all that she was nowhere close to cumming herself. Ever since that night that Iron Rook attacked her something snapped in her head, and despite many attempts she only cared about making you cum…

Breathing heavily, you let Dash kiss you once more before she slowly lifts herself off of you. Before you can sit up she once again carefully licks your entire shaft clean, finishing by sucking the tip of your softening dick to retrieve any cum still left. Once done, she finally crawls up and cuddles against your body. You feel her nuzzle your neck as she softly speaks.

“Did you like that? You forgive me for that first mistake, right? I didn’t mean to… just don’t hurt anypony else for it, please? Punish me, just please don’t leave me… don’t leave me with that griffon again. I can’t lose Tank again. I’ll do whatever you want me to, master. Don’t leave me. Please, don’t.” she sobs.

You tightly hug her against you, promising to never leave her again. But she still begs for forgiveness over and over until she falls asleep in your hooves. Once she’s asleep you kiss her forehead as the tears you’ve been trying to hold back finally fall down your face. Each night you promise to never leave her side again, but she always says the same thing; she begs you not to leave her as she is scared that you leaving means that she did something wrong. And if she’s abandoned by you, surely the griffons will come back to reclaim her…

Still, you can’t help but feel some guilt towards her current state of mind. Had you accompanied her back to Ponyville, you would have been able to at least buy time for Rainbow Dash to escape and get help before that griffon could lay a claw on her. But instead you were miles and miles away, powerless to do anything. Looking down at your sleeping lover, you know it’s only a matter of minutes before her nightmares begin. You kiss her once again and hold her tight.

“Rainbow… I’m so sorry. This whole mess, this whole war… it has to end now. I don’t know how, but I’ll make this right somehow. Nopony will ever hurt you again, I swear.” you whisper before falling asleep.


The next morning you and Dash regroup with Spitfire and Soarin. After making a quick breakfast for everyone, you lead the way to the castle and finally to the throne room. Inside you find Princess Celestia and Princess Luna both waiting for you.

“Thank you all for coming so quickly.” Celestia says. “There’s a matter of grave importance that I must address with you.”

“The attack on Los Pegasus, correct?” you say.

Celestia nods her head. “Yes. Well, kind of. The griffons are on their way to attack, and we have mobilized almost the entire guard to protect the city. However, there is a troubling piece of information I couldn’t trust on paper. Captain Ray and a small group of griffons are headed in the opposite direction, towards the Crystal Empire. There’s no way such a small group could penetrate the protective shield around the city, but their movements are nonetheless troubling.”

You can’t help but be completely baffled by what Celestia just said. Why would Ray want to send his entire force to a major Equestrian city when he’s not even going to oversee possibly the greatest conquest in griffon history? From your previous dealings with the monstrous leader, he must have some sort of hidden agenda, but no one in the room could guess what it may be.

“We know you have been through so much already, but we have a favor to ask of you.” Luna says. “We have no guards to spare, and you are the one pony who knows Ray the best. Will you take on the task of following Captain Ray and finding out what he plans to do?”

You hear Rainbow Dash audibly gasp at the request, as well as Spitfire grinding her teeth at just the griffon’s name. You’re still trying to digest all the information that’s been thrown at you the past 24 hours, but one thing is clear; Ray is up to something.

You feel a light tug on your tail. Looking behind you, you see Dash looking at you, shaking her head no as her eyes water. Spitfire stomps her hoof in frustration as Soarin whispers for her to calm down. But no matter what your three companions want, not only are the two princesses in the room are counting on you, but perhaps every pony in Equestria is counting on you…

What do you decide?

-Agree to track and spy on Captain Ray
-Refuse and return home with Rainbow Dash


Author's Note

Did you read the instructions and prequels? I hope you did...

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