Rare Submission

Rarity woke up long before Twilight the next morning, packed the French maid outfit into a stylish pair of saddlebags she'd brought with her, and almost left before deciding to check her thighs before venturing out. She was lucky that almost no one came to the library in Ponyville, though she often did think that a little reading might elevate the general class of the town. After all it couldn't possibly hurt.

"Oh dear," Rarity thought to herself, "these welts- no bruises - everypony will see them if I walk through town like this. They'll know. They'll know what I've been doing with Twilight. Wait! I have just what I need to take care of this!"

Rarity dug into the depths of her saddle bags and pulled out her foundation. She'd covered up enough dark circles under her eyes (after all, even if she did have to be up all night making dresses that didn't mean she had to look like she'd been up all night) so covering up a few light bruises on the insides of her thighs should be simple.

"Mmmm, bite me back harder, Rarity," Twilight murmured in her sleep, startling Rarity for just a moment.

Rarity smiled as she thought about the game they'd played last night.

After about thirty minutes, Rarity had covered the bruises well enough that she was sure somepony would have to be deliberately staring at her inner thighs for a very long time to even notice them.

"Of course, that's not completely impossible. I am, after all, one of the prize mares in Ponyville. Hmph! In all of Equestria for that matter. Lots of ponies look at me all day," she said to herself as she smiled into the bathroom mirror.

She tiptoed through the library, trying desperately not to wake up Twilight. Their Monday nights always seemed to wear out her friend for the majority of the next day. She wondered if Twilight ever wrote about what they did to Princess Celestia, but decided that even Twilight would have some sense of decorum. She slowly opened, slipped through, and closed the front door without a single sound, not even the squeaking of hinges, and started trotting back to her home smiling and greeting everypony along the way. After all, trying to sneak back would only raise suspicion, this way everypony would come up with their own simple reasons for why she was walking back from this side of town early in the morning and most wouldn't even think about it long enough to come up with a story.

"Good morning, Rarity."

Rarity looked around, the voice was nearly a whisper, but it seemed to slide past the other voices of the town and slip gently into her ear. After a moment, she spotted Fluttershy waving from across the street. The yellow pegasus was carrying no fewer than fifteen tiny wooden cages in her hooves, strapped to her sides, and a few threatening to spill out of her saddle bags. Rarity soon also noticed the sound of crickets chirruping and had a reasonable idea of what her friend was up to this morning. She quickly made her way to Fluttershy and beamed a bright smile at her.

"Cricket overpopulation again?" she asked.

"Oh my, yes. How did you know?"

"Well, you were doing this same thing last month. Taking them to the tall grass just outside of East Ponyville again? Do you need any help, dear?"

"Oh, no. No thank you Rarity. I've got it all under control."

"Well, if you're sure," Rarity said.

"I'm sure," Fluttershy said, but looked down and paused as if she wanted to say more.

"Is something wrong? You really do need some help, don't you? Here, let me take a few of those."

"No. No, that's not it. I just- Well- you see-" and then her voice trailed off into that mumbling squeak of hers. Once, Rarity had found it exasperating, but lately it only made her smile.

She leaned in close to the Pegasus, "Would you like me to come over tonight?"

"Oh!" Fluttershy jumped back a little, "Yes please. I mean, if you don't mind and you have time."

"But of course!" Rarity said, "I'll be there around seven."

"Thank you," Fluttershy said and then scurried off blushing.

Rarity smiled and turned to head to her home. Opal would be waiting for her breakfast and there would soon be customers to pick up finished orders and place new ones.

The day passed mostly uneventfully. Mrs. Cake stopped in for a refit of her wedding dress. She and Mr. Cake were planning to renew their wedding vows next month and Mrs. cake wasn't exactly the same size she was when they'd first married. Between running a bakery and birthing twins it was no real surprise, but Rarity assured her that she was still a beautiful mare, and she meant every word of it.

As the clock neared five, Rarity locked up the front door of her shop a little early and slipped away to her bathroom for a quick bath and some personal tidying up. She knew she'd be out late tonight and she wanted to be clean and refreshed, at least at the start of the night.

After her bath, hair styling, makeup, second and third mirror checks, Rarity took a leisurely stroll down to Fluttershy's house, just at the edge of Ponyville and the Everfree Forest. Some ponies were surprised that such a seemingly timid young lady like Fluttershy would live so close to the terrifying forest, but Rarity understood her reasons. The gentle pegasus loved being near her animal friends and preferred the quiet birdsong of the forest over the hustle and bustle of main street. Given the way their little games often turned out, Rarity as well was rather glad her friend lived as far out as she did.

"Come in, Rarity," Fluttershy said in her breathy whisper like voice. She'd opened the door before Rarity had even had a chance to knock. The first time she'd done this, Rarity was a little startled, but she had grown accustomed to the fact that her friend waited and watched for her whenever they had plans.

"Hello, darling, what do we have planned for tonight?"

"Oh, well, I thought that maybe we'd just have a quiet night in. Unless of course you want to go to the spa or something else," Fluttershy said as she stepped aside to let Rarity in.

"Well, I do love a good trip to the spa, but I think I'd prefer a night in as well," Rarity said, thinking that the spa would make it hard to hide the bruises that Twilight had left the night before, even though they'd faded quite a bit already.

"That's just wonderful. Isn't it Angel? Isn't it wonderful that our good friend Rarity is here to visit us?"

Angel responded by stomping his foot a few times, scowling, and then hopping off to hide in a pile of loose yarn near the kitchen.

"Well, I'm sure he's happier to see you than he seems," Fluttershy said.

"Don't worry about it, I completely understand. So, what would you like to do on our night in?"

"Well... ummm..." Fluttershy looked at the floor and kicked at imaginary dirt while she fussed over the right words to use, "Well, I was thinking that we might play that game, again..."

"Well, I'm not sure I'm up to it," Rarity started to search for an excuse. She wasn't sure what Fluttershy's reaction to Twilight's love bites would be, though she figured it would at least be a quiet reaction... probably.

"Oh, that's oka-- Rare?"

"Yes, Fluttershy?" Rarity asked as she noticed that Fluttershy had started to look back up from the floor but had stopped short.

"Are those... Are those bruises?"

"Well, you see, um..." Rarity searched frantically for the best way to explain, "Twilight wanted to play a new game and-"

Fluttershy darted forward and placed her nose inches from Rarity's inner thigh to get a closer look at the bruises. Had it been just a few months ago, Rarity would have scolded her about personal space, but they were well past that now.

"I think she plays too rough with you." Fluttershy said and almost seemed to pout, "Would you like me to put an herbal compress on them? It'll help take down the bruising."

"Please, if it's not any trouble for you."

"Oh, it's none at all, really. And then, I mean if you feel up to it afterwards, would you like to play that game?" Fluttershy asked softly.

"Okay." Rarity said and climbed onto Fluttershy's couch to wait for the pegasus to prepare the herbal compresses.

After a few moments, Fluttershy returned from her kitchen with a small bowl full of a liquid that smelled like summer flowers and spring rivers all in one. After she set it on the floor, she pulled out one of several scraps of cloth that were soaking in it and used it to wipe away the foundation that Rarity had used to try to hide the bruises. Fluttershy was completely immersed in cleaning away the makeup and didn't seem to notice Rarity almost purring with each gentle stroke of the soft and cool cloth on her thighs.

"We could start playing Hush now, if you like," Fluttershy said as she set down the cloth she'd used to brush away the makeup and picked another one out of the bowl.

"I don't know if I remember the rules," Rarity said and then took in a breath sharply as the cool cloth touched her skin.

"Oh, you remember," Fluttershy said teasingly, "One pony has to stay very quiet while the other pony teases, tickles, and... umm... does other things to try to get her to make noise. I get to be the teaser first this time, since I won last time."

"You win every time," Rarity said a little petulantly.

"I'm the world champ you know," Fluttershy said and smiled as she covered the last of Rarity's bruises with a cool cloth.

"Oh, believe me, I know," Rarity teased, "Okay, let's play!"

"Okay," Fluttershy said nervously, "Now remember, from now on you can't make any noise or you'll lose and... I'll stop teasing you. You understand?"

Rarity nodded her head yes and took a few deep breaths to calm herself as she waited for Fluttershy's first move.

Fluttershy climbed up on the couch next to Rarity and she could feel the pegasus' eyelashes bat against her cheeks as she blinked her soft blue eyes. Fluttershy and Rainbow dash always felt incredibly light next to her, as if they were more air than pony, and for all she knew they were.

"I hope you're ready. I'm going to be a big meanie," Fluttershy breathed the words into her ear and then flicked her tongue around the sensitive outer edge, spiraling inward before deftly pulling back at just the right moment and sucking the lower part of her ear into her mouth to gently nibble on.

Rarity almost lost the game right there. Almost. However, she was a refined lady. She was used to holding back when the need arose. She wouldn't be undone by just this much.

"Oh, someone is getting a lot better at this game than the first time we played," Fluttershy teased as she let her hoof trace circles on Rarity's chest and tight tummy.

It was true. Rarity recalled clearly that the first time they'd played this game she'd lost after the very first touch of Fluttershy's eyelashes on her cheek. She'd giggled. Then giggled some more. Then laughed- excessively, for a lady. It was all more than a little embarrassing, but also so much fun.

"I'll get you with this next one," Fluttershy promised as she slid down to Rarity's thighs and then peeked back over to look deep into the Unicorn's sharp blue eyes before turning to the side slightly. Fluttershy used her teeth to take hold of the corner of one of the small strips of cloth that were on Rarity's bruises and slowly began to remove it, letting the loose threads of the cloth trail on her thigh as she dragged it towards the bowl and dropped it back in. Then again, with another and another, each slow and deliberate motion building on the ones before. Rarity felt like her thighs were ready to erupt in pleasure, she wanted to beg Fluttershy to touch her, to stop getting so close, but only letting the herb soaked cloth touch her skin. Before she knew what was happening a soft moan escaped her lips.

Fluttershy looked up and arched one of her well trimmed eyebrows, "Was that a noise?"

Rarity shook her head no emphatically even though they both knew she was lying.

"Well," Fluttershy said and pretended to think it over, "I guess I'll let you have that one, but you'd better stay extra quiet, or you're going to lose. Okay?"

Rarity nodded yes and shifted her legs so that Fluttershy was nestled snugly between her thighs, though not so tightly that she couldn't easily move.

"You think you're ready for the real teasing? Okay then," Fluttershy whispered hotly.

The pegasus started by slowly running her deft tongue up the length of one of Rarity's thighs, then stopping just short of her now nearly aching and burning desire, only to start again near her knee and then slowly wind her way back up, never quite giving in to what she knew Rarity desperately wanted.

She placed slow, hot, wet kisses on Rarity's soft mound, on the delicate skin between her legs and the sweet crevasse of her passions, to the right, the left, below, above, but never quite letting her be satisfied.

Rarity struggled to stay quiet, though a few sharp exhalations and shuddering breaths worked their way out from time to time. She felt her legs and hips start to move on their own, as if trying to catch hold of Fluttershy's evasive lips. Sweat and desire blinded her for a moment and then suddenly Fluttershy's kisses were gone. She'd stopped.

Rarity looked down to see Fluttershy blushing, but looking up, waiting to catch her eyes before she darted forward and placed her lips on Rarity's ready and opening flower. A kiss. Just a kiss. Slow and graceful and with the perfect amount of pressure. Just a kiss, that exploded in her body and forced Rarity to cry out while flailing and reaching for anything to hold onto, tightening her legs around Fluttershy's head as if mad with the need to keep her there.

"Oh yes! Yes! YES!" Rarity screamed then caught herself and regained her composure after a moment, "Eh-hem, I believe I've just lost this round. Is it my turn now?" she said primly as she could manage.

As Rarity slowly loosened her thighs and let her go, Fluttershy started giggling, tried to stifle it with a hoof, then two hooves, and then fell to the floor letting out a torrent of bubbling giggles for what seemed like at least a full five minutes to Rarity before she finally sat back up and dried the tears of her laughing fit away from her eyes.

"Yes, it's your turn now."