My Little Carmines

by PsYcHo_HuNt3r

First published

*As much as it pains me to do this I must cancel this story. This is due to the fact that I cannot find the motivation to continue this story. Not only is it far behind the actual series but the plot is just to random and hasn't been revised the way I would like it to be. I apologise to those who wish me to continue it but I'd rather have a quality story over a rushed, poorly planned out and random one. Hopefully you understand and thank you. I'll keep the story up just for the sake of people being able to read it.*

Benjamin Carmine, the young rookie from Delta Squad, was supposed to have died that day from falling into the Riftworm. But fate had other ideas. Now stuck in a strange new world, Benjamin attempts to figure out what's going on and how he ended up in the Utopian world named Equestria.

However, two deadly enemies slowly reek havoc upon the land. Under the command of the seemingly chaotic leader and dictator, Discord, Ben soon finds himself back in action against the new Locust army as well as the new Lambent creatures that he has never seen before. Ben, as a rookie, knows that he is going to need to remember his training if he is going to help the ponies and save Equestria.

Can our 'green as grass' rookie survive the new war against the Locust? Can the sudden arrival of Ben's brothers be the help he needs to win the new battle against the Locust?

Cover art by: TheRenaissanceMuffin
Link to his page here: http://therenaissancemuffin.deviantart.com/