Finding a Lost Cutie Mark
The One and Only Crimson Flame
Previous ChapterNext Chapter“Are you SURE you are okay?” Tiwlight and Cadance hadn’t stopped worrying about ShiningArmor since they had found him with the mysterious stallion.
“Yes, I’m FINE.” He smiled at the girls, knowing they meant well with their worrying, but it was starting to get annoying. It was true that he was still a mess when they first found him, but he looked much better, and could now talk coherently again. “I’m sure I could walk if we just stop long enough to let me down.”
“No way punk.” The stallion he was riding shook his head. “If Discord was involved, there is NO telling what side effects might occur.”
“I don’t know, I think if anything is going to happen it already would have happened.” Twilight frowned. She didn’t trust discord much either, but from what he had said the few time he talked, she could tell this pony REALLY hated Discord. She took another look at the big Stallion. Under the cape She couldn’t see much, but his mussel was a deep maroon color, and every now and then she got a glimps of his auburn eyes. As he walked, long skinny legs came out from under the cape, leading he to believe that even though he was large, he wasn’t very muscular.
As she was noting all this, he saw her starring at her, and smiled “Sorry miss, you are cute and all, but I’m afraid you are not my type. I know it’s hard to stop staring at such a handsome stallion, but I’m afraid you must refrain from looking for your own good.”
“W-what?” Twilight was surprised he came to the conclusion that she found him handsome. “I was just wondering what you look like, that’s all.”
“What I look like?” he them examined himself, “OH right! I forgot I was wearing this. Come to think of it, I never introduced myself either, did I?” He let Down ShiningArmor and took of his cape. All three of them gasped when they saw what was underneath. Like his mussel, his coat was a deep maroon, and as Twillight guess, his was of a very sleek build. What she could NOT have guess what that under his cape, on his back, were two giant wings folded neatly along his sides, and that his red mane was like Celestia’s and flowed around him. Though his was much shorter, and looked more like dancing fire. He looked down and noticed their reactions to him. “Oh dear, it seems I’ve gained three new admirers. Sorry, but as I said, you girls just aren’t my type.” He looked over and ShiningArmor, “And you sir, are DEFINATLY not my type. But enough of that, I’m CrimsionFlame, But everyone just calls me flames.”
“You- You’re an ALICORN?!” Twilight was the first to speak.
“huh?” Flames frowned when he realized they were staring at him in shock and not admiration. “oh yeah… that IS sort of a big deal I guess. But you girls are alicorns too, Shouldn’t you be used to it by now?”
Cadance frowned as well, “I’m used to being an alicorn, but I thought I had already known all the other alicorns. I’ve never even hear of you.”
Flames shook his head, “You MUST be joking, I’m sure Luna must have talked about me hundreds of times! I mean I’m sure Lune misses me, I know I sure miss Luna. I mean you must talk to Luna right? Luna is so nice, and pretty, and I honestly can’t say anything bad about Luna. I mean even just Luna’s name is amazing, I can’t say it enough, LUNA~!”
The three exchanged glances. That must be the most ANYONE had ever said Luna’s name so many times in a single train of thought. Then Cadance giggled slightly. “Say flames, you were mentioning your type earlier… Luna wouldn’t happen to be your type, would she?”
“Well, yeah, you… well you COULD say that.” He blushed slightly and hooved the ground.
Twilight caught in to what Cadance was hinting at, “You wouldn’t happen to have a CRUSH on Luna, would you Flames?”
He immediately perked up. “Did Luna tell you that?”
“Just a lucky guess.” The two girls laughed.
“anyways,” He looked around the area again. “Do you girls know where Luna is? I heard there was a new princess-or-rather, and I thought it would be a good excuse to see her.”
“Well, I’m not sure where Luna is, but you are welcome to come with us to the castle.” Twilight was a little upset she was being used as an excuse from this pony to see his crush, but he didn’t seem to mean any harm by it.
“The castle huh?” he thought about it. “yeah I wanna see Luna really bad… but I’m not sure I wanna see her bad enough to brave Princess kill-joy.”
“Prinsess kill-Joy?” the three of them replied in confused Unison.
“Yeah I guess you would know her by Celestia.” Flames shrugged. “I call her Princess kill-joy. She NEVER lets me have fun with Luna, and whenever she is around I have to do WORK.” He groaned and he said work, as if it was the worse thing in the universe. “I hate working! That’s why I never come here, I’d rather just run all over the place and play then sit in some boring castle doing paper work or standing guard. I can’t even imagine how those guard ponies sit there all day doing nothing.”
“Well, I’m sure we can ask those guard Ponies if Luna is inside the Castle before we even go inside. Then you won’t have to see Celestia if you are trying to avoid her that badly.” Cadance encouraged him with a smile.
“Really?!” he got even more excited as they nodded in agreement. “Then what are we waiting for?!” and with that he levitated all three of them alongside him as he galloped full speed to the Castle.
Author's Note
sorry, i don't know what happened to the origonal chapter, but i rewrote it anyways, so hopefully this works.
also, i drew CrimsonFlame (using a base) and this is the link -> http://mechan25.deviantart.com/art/Crimson-Flame-386037638?q=gallery%3AMeChan25&qo=0
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