Chapters Thunder With A Splash of Color
Breaking the Sound Barrier, and Failing
It was about 7:30 A.M. Rainbow Dash barley woke up. She loked at her alrm clock in shock. "Aw, what! Only 7:30! Might as well get up." Rainbow Dash showered and headed for the skies. She remembered what had happened last night and went back to the same location. On her way over, she noticed the place was pretty much deserted. She saw a light and smoke from the ground. She quickly went down before the pony got up.
Thunderlane was recovering from his crash landing. "I'm trying to break the sound barrier." He was trying to sound like he had it under control, but Rainbow Dash obviously knew that he was having trouble. Thunderlane wanted to break the sound barrier to see what it would look like. He was having trouble, because he wasn't focused. He also wanted to do it so he could show his little brother, Rumble. Rumble said that he wanted to see a pony break the sound barrier, and Thunderlane wanted to be the one to do it.
Thunderlane had a worried look on his face when Rainbow Dash said this. He's had a crush on Rainbow Dash since summer flight camp. Rainbow Dash was the pony at the camp who actually talked to Thunderlane. Of course, she made fun of him occasionally, because she had a reputation to keep, supposubly. "Alright, fine." Thunderlane went into position and took off. Rainbow Dash had a smile on her face, because she knew he was going to have trouble. A white cone formed around Thunderlane, he kept thinking about everything instead focusing on the barrier. At that point, he was flung backwards. He was now looking up at Rainbow Dash. "I need help."
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"Okay. Thunderlane you have to focus. Focus on something that would make you want to fly faster than ever."
Thunderlane and Rainbow Dash both took off. Thunderlane was thinking of the scenario, and almost broke the barrier. He turned his head saw Rainbow Dash almost breaking the barrier too. Then, he was stuck and was flung backwards again. Rainbow Dash on the other hand (or hoof), Did her legendary sonic rainboom.
Thunderlane wanted to know a lot about Rainbow Dash. He hasen't seen her in forever! He could tell she wanted to know about him as well. "So... how've you been?"
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"Hey Thunderlane."
Thunderlane was explaining to Midnight what had happened earlier that morning. He was telling about Rainbow Dash, and how he had a plan. Midnight, of course, didn't think he should go through with it. Every plan that Thunderlane has ever had has ended the same way, failure. "That won't happen this time." Thunderlane try to reassure his friend so that he could get help for his plan.
*Meanwhile*
"Hey Rainbow Dash."
Rainbow Dash was laughing at Twilight. She was about to tell Twilight why she dare be up so early, when she was suddenly hit by a pink blur.
Rainbow Dash was explaining to Twilight what had happened. Once She mentioned Thunderlane's name, Twilight actually became interested in Rainbow Dash's story. "So, that's pretty much what happened." Rainbow Dash "accidentaly" left out a few details of her story. Twilight kept asking Rainbow Dash questions. Some were just a little too personal. "I think we should go help Pinkie with her party."
Author's Note
Chapter 4 woo! This is a rather short chapter, so bear with me. I had no idea what to write. I am still open for ideas on this next chapter. So you will find out fully Thunderlane's plan is hopefully in the next chapter. Tell me if you like it... or don't. Please give me an idea of what you want Thunderlane's plan to be in the comment box below.
Kay thanks for reading!
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Tonight was like any other night. The moon shining, stars out, owls whoing. All ponies in bed, all except one. This pony was unlike all the others. She was a pegasus and she loved flying. She won the Best Young Flyers Competition, and is the fastest flyer in Equestria. If you haven't guessed already, it's Rainbow Dash.
She wasn't at her cloud home, because she couldn't sleep. She needed to clear her head, so she went out for a late night fly. She knew everypony was asleep, so she couldn't really do any of her tricks. She was already upset about what happened in Canterlot a few months ago, so she just wanted it to be morning to get her mind off of it. The same words she heard that day were still ligering in her mind like an annoying echo that wouldn't go away. She didn't tell any of her friends, because she didn't want them to get 'involved' in anything.
Rainbow Dash saw a small glint of light and something, or somepony, getting flung in the opposite direction. "What is that?" Rainbow Dash flew as fast as she could to see what the mystery object or pony was.
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Just as Rainbow Dash got to the location, it was obvious that it was a pony. She flew towards the ground to see who it was, when the pony flew out of sight. Rainbow dash squinted her eyes,"Who is that?" She let out a big yawn,"I'll find out tomorrow."
Author's Note
Hey guys so this is my very first story, yay! So I would greatly appreciate some criticism. Oh ya and you guys can give some suggestions for future chapters, characters, anything. I will give credit to whosever idea I choose. Thanks for reading!
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"Okay, so do you understand the plan?"
Midnight had taken an early nap while Thunderlane was explaining his "master plan." He had explained this to Midnight almost three times already! He started to get annoyed, so he tried one last time.
Midnight wasn't so sure if that was true. He was often forgetful, and he wasn't the best at making friends on the spot. If he screwed this up he just knew Thunderlane would hate him forever.
Author's Note
Hey guys! As promised here is the new chapter. It is short being this is only phase I, and I was short on time. Also I am working on a new story that should be out soon so thanks for reading!
