Ooops, Ooops, and Other Pegasus Sayings

by Scootaloogirl16

Rating: everyone
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Rainbow Dash, Comedy
Length: 1101

Equestria has changed, and Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash have swapped places- Rainbow Dash is rubbish at flying! So one day, when she tries to do a few trick, she ends up saying a lot of 'Ooops!'

Equestria has been spun round-for the worse. Fluttershy is now an amazing flyer, and Rainbow Dash... well, she is now a Fluttershy. So, when she tries to do some tricks.... She ends up saying alot of 'Ooops', 'Oooops' and more 'Ooops!'

My first fanfic- I don't mind critisism. I hope you like it!

Published 2013-07-31 20:00:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-08-05 17:16:16 UTC

Ooops! Sorry!

OOPS, OOPS, AND OTHER PEGASUS SAYINGS

OOOPS! SORRY!
"Hey, Rainbow! Wakey wakey!" Fluttershy shook Rainbow Dash. Her eyes flashed open. All that she could feel was the immediate pain in her wings and back.
"Wh-what happened?" She asked. Twighlight came in, carrying a box of chocolates.
"Oh, darling! I said you would fall. Poor you, you fell unconsious when Fluttershy caught you. But also lucky you, because if she hadn't, you wouldn't be alive!"
"You were going so fast that your wings folded out the wrong way when she caught you. It would have been better with a cloud, but in these surcumstances you did the best you could." In came nurse redheart with an ice pack. "Now turn over ont your back, Rainbow Dash. This will be a shock, but it will help your back heal. your bruise was pretty big, and I've already bandages your wings in place, so you should be going through pain. but that is just the brocken bones heaing. You sould be here for around 12 days at this rate. Your amube system is extremely well built, Rainbow Dash."
"Never fear, you're friendly nieberhood hero is always ready to help!" Fluttershy said, puffing out her chest and punching her hoof in the air. They all grinned, even Rainbow Dash.

12 DAYS LATER

"Finally! This rootin' an' a tootin' hospital was makin' mah tummeh feel sick!" Pinkie Pie said. Applejack giggled.
"I wish I could throw a party! You know what? I will! Sugarcube corner, sunset. It can be a sleepover party!" Rainbow Dash smiled weakly.
"Thanks... Fluttershy, can I have some... er... practice?" Fluttershy grinned, and flew in the air.
"Catch me first!" Rainbow flapped her wings, and went after her yellow buddy.
Suddenly she looked down. So... High... Her wings locked in again. Fluttershy, above her, gasped. Rainbow Dash fell down... and onto a cloud. I big one. A bad one. A grey one. Which caused rain all over Ponyville.

"Ooops! Sorry!"

The Last Ooops!

OOOPS, OOOPS, AND OTHER PEGASUS SAYINGS

THE LAST OOOPS!
"That was Awesome! Well, not as awesome as me, of course!" Fluttershy dived down to where Rainbow Dash was sitting on the cloud, gaping. Fluttershy gave her a pat on the back.
"I... Ponyville...Rain..." Rainbow Dash whimpered. Fluttershy grinned.
"The weather team will deal with it. Don't worry! Anyways, It's sunset. Let's get down to Sugarcube Corner."
Rainbow Dash gave a weak smile, and started to glide down with her best friend.

AT SUGARCUBE CORNER

"Everypony!!! Tonight we are celebrating Rainbow's departure from hospital! PARTAY TIME!!!!" Applejack shouted, and all of her friends shoved sweets in thier mouths- except for Rainbow. She snuffled into her sleeping bag, trying block out the world.
"Shucks, this is soooo tasty!!" Pinkie Pie whispered, eating a cupcake.
"Hey, Rainbow! Are the animals keeping out of mischief?" Fluttershy asked. "Pinkie and AJ went out to get food for that all while you were in hospital." Rainbow Dash looked up.
"They... are OK..."
Fluttershy laughed. "Soo.... wanna have a lesson on flying tommorow?" Rainbow smiled.

THE NEXT DAY

"Hey! Time for lessons!" Fluttershy shook her feathered friend, Rainbow Dash, who snapped awake in seconds. "First I'll teach you to get your courage thicker. Slowly hover up with me. Don't close your eyes." Fluttershy filed out, closely followed by Rainbow Dash. Suddenly Rainbow Dash whisked herself in the air, bashing all the clouds in ten seconds flat, doing a rolly polly trick, and landing softly on the ground.
"You have talent..." Fluttershy said. Suddenly Rainbow hovered a tiny bit, and then fell flat on her bottom. They laughed. This was good.

"Ooops! Sorry!"

THE END

Ooops!

OOPS, OOPS, AND OTHER PEGASUS SAYINGS

OOPS

"Applejack! You are so random!" Fluttershy laughed, leaping up into the air and flying in circles. Pinkie Pie turned her head in confusion.
"I don't think she's random! Just because she throws parties all the time doesn't mean she's random. Hey, where's Twighlight? I thought that dress she was making was going to be short! I left the farm to my llittle sis for this!"
Suddenly a purple alicorn flew towards them, and laughed.
"What on earth do you want us to see, Rainbow?" Rainbow Dash made a weak smile.
"Um, Rarity isn't here yet... She should be closing the library right about now... um..." Suddenly they heard the trot of hooves, and Rarity was in front of them. Rainbow looked at her friends.
"Here. What is this, then, Rainbow? Opalesense is having to look after the library." Rarity asked. Rainbow muttered something.
"What's that, sugercube? I ain't hearin' what you is sayin'" Pinkie Pie asked. Rainbow muttered something again.
"Did you say, IMPAGONNATODATRICKS? Because that means 'PARTY TIME!'" Applejack leaped up and down.
Rainbow smiled weakly again. "I said, I'm gonna do some tricks." All of her friends gasped.
"Oh, darling! You'll fall!" Twilight said. Fluttershy gave a half-hearted smile. "You should really have some practice first..." But Rainbow Dash just stretched.
"I want to at least have a go..." and she leaped in the air, closing her eyes, and flapping her wings.
Up, up, up, she went. Suddenly Rainbow heard a voice. It was Fluttershy.
"Rainbow! what are you doing?!?!?" Rainbow opened her eyes, and looked down. She couldn't even see her friends. Her wings locked in, and she fell. Down, down, down... Suddenly she felt something holding her, and she looked up. There was Fluttershy's face, and she was lying in her arms.

"Ooops..."

Author's Note

My first fic. Hope you like it!

A Little Scoot

Dear Readers,
Hey! I'm Scootaloo! Did you like this story? I hope you did! I think you did. So how are you doing? Speak to me, audience! Oh... interesting... I didn't know it was so bad... Ah! That's nice! Well, I hope you have had a good time over the past few days, or will do in the next week! As I was saying, I haven't told you how I'm doing. I've been pretty down in the dumps. That's because I have suddenly found a book all about my parents' lives writen by my mother. She was abused by my father, and I am an illegitimate child. Oh well. It's all in a story called Harsh Memories. I'd love it if someone made a cover! That would be awesome, but not as awesoe as Rainbow Dash. Seeya! I hope you loved this story!
From Scootaloo.

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