Curing Immortality

by DVAN56

Curing Immortality

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Curing Immortality

It had been centuries since Twilight Sparkle first became an immortal alicorn. At first she thought it as the greatest blessing she could have been given. But eventually as years rolled on her friends and family started to pass on. Leaving her to live on with only their memories, but she pushed on into the future living in the light of the memories she had made. However she eventually grew tired of the cycle of make new friend just to be left with their memories. Now she wanted rest of her own, to break the cycle her life was now repeating over and over again.

But there was a problem, immortality is not something that can be easily removed. Twilight dare not bring the subject up with Celestia or Luna as the two would undoubtedly try to stop her. She had thought about going to Discord for help on the matter but dismissed it. Knowing him he would have Twilight do something completely silly and chaotic saying to would work and in the end doing nothing.

Seeking for an answerer she went to the royal archives. Books was something she knew best, however she felt a pang in her chest as she entered remembering why she tried to avoid them now-a-days. Memories of her number one assistant started to flood her thoughts and she couldn’t help but shed a tear. She quickly shook the thoughts from her head and with vigor started looking through the books for a way to remover her immortality and become a simple unicorn once more.

She spent days searching the archives, but she eventually found a lead. As she read the pages her face began to blush and her mouth slowly started to open wide in disbelief. She rubbed her eyes and read the pages again to make sure she was reading them correctly. After the fifth time reading them she was sure that the pages said exactly what was written on them. She now wanted to see if Discord knew of another way or not as she closed the book and put it back on the shelf.


Unfortunately for Twilight Sparkle, Discord did tell her that it could be removed in a very unorthodox way that turned out be be false. And after she finally got the spaghetti noodles out of her ears she went back to the archives and retrieved the book. Part of her told her it was wrong, and even if it was the only way could she live the rest of her life with the shame it would bring. However it was the only lead she had to remove her immortality and she wasn’t going to ignore the chance to be mortal again.

She snuck out of the Castle of Canterlot that night. Flying in the night sky with the moon and stars lighting her way to the Everfree Forest.


The forest was cool and the night air crisp on the wind. Twilight landed within a clearing near the stream she crossed so many years ago.

‘Am I really going to do this?’

She looked into the water and memories of when Rarity calmed the serpent of the river came to her. She was so happy then. Back when things were simple. She then looked up at the moon and with a sigh started to charge her horn with magic. The purple aura started to envelop her and the magic started to work, in a moment she would smell just like a manticore... that was in heat.

She sat there next to the waters edge. Minutes turned to hours as she waited. she knew the spell was right so there was no question a manticore would come, it was when that was the questions. While she was waiting however another thought came to mind. What would she do after this. She couldn’t go back to Canterlot as throwing away her immortality was also the same as throwing away her right to be a Princess of Equestria. She thought of going back to Ponyville and running the library again, or maybe moving to Manehatten and becoming an author. Many road would lay ahead of her after she was done here.

The Morning sun began to raise in the sky and Twilight let out a yawn, tired from the sleepless night she had just had. The rays of warm light felt good after the long night of waiting. Twilight was a little surprised that it was taking so long for a manticore to find her. However her patients payed off in the end. As if drawn by the morning light itself a manticore did came with the morning light.

‘Alright Twilight it’s now or never.’

The manticore’s surprise was apparent when it saw a purple alicorn instead of the mate it was expecting. It was even more surprised when Twilight offered herself up as female manticora would. The sent and the movements Twilight was performing overcame the manticore, and instinct kicked in.

The manticore first began by sniffing Twilights marehood, he wanted to make sure this scent was indeed fresh so his seed would not be wasted and his cold wet nose would bump into her a few times causing her to flinch. After he was satisfied with it, he proceeded right to business.

Within a second the manticore was on top of Twilight. She let out a sharp squeal as his hard shaft entered her marehood. In one quick thrust he penetrated deeper than she had expected and yelped in pain. The manticore started to thrust in and out at a snow rhythm.

‘I’m actually doing this...’

Twilight bit her lip and shut her eyes tight, not wanting the experience to last more than it had to. Keeping the reasoning for why she was out here fresh in her mind was making the feelings of each thrust uncomfortable and unsatisfying. She didn’t even realizing she was grunting in disapproval with each thrust from the manticore.

Then without warning the Manticore stopped.

‘No! He hadn’t ejaculated yet! It won't work if he doesn’t!’

Twilight's mind was racing trying to figure out was wrong. Why did the Manticore stop, and how could she get him started again? Then something happened she was not expecting. The Manticore, while still inside her, leaned forward and started to lick the side of her face.

‘What?’

The Manticores actions had baffled Twilight. What was the manticore doing? This was never a part of any mating section Twilight had read of. And yet she found the licks on the face comforting in an odd way. Twilight's mind races as she tried to find an answer in her mind on what was happening.

“You sense my uneasiness don’t you?”’

The manticore stopped licking her face and gave a nod. Twilight closed her eyes for a moment.

‘Come on Twilight it’s the only way to become mortal again. No one has to know, and besides Its been ages since you last been rutted, just... just enjoy it.’

Twilight opened her eyes and gave a sigh as a smile came across her face. She then turned her head to look straight at the manticore and kissed him on the forehead as a sign, saying she was ready now.

The manticore began thrusting his shaft into her again starting at a slow rhythm again. Twilight started ignoring the feeling of the mind and started listening to her body with each thrust. Now instead of grunts, she let out throaty moan with each thrust as he went deeper and deeper. He was now clearly enjoying herself as she felt his move inside her. The manticore could sense the change in Twilight and let out an approving roar.

The manticore now satisfied with Twilight started to thrust faster, and Twilight was taken by surprise as the sudden shock of pleasure coursed through her body like electricity. Her moans changed to screams of pleasure at the sudden change. The area was soon filled with the sounds of the twos screams and roars as they continued.

The thrusts only became faster, and faster. Each speed increase sending a more intense wave of pleasure through Twilights body. Her knees started to shake with weakness as the moment intensified and it eventually became too much and she fell to her front knees. She didn’t care though, she was lost in the heat of the moment. She just wanted all the manticore could give.

“Don’t... stop... more,” she panted

The manticore was all too happy to meet her request.

Twilight’s body started to get warmer the more he thrusted. Her eyes started to roll in in the back of her head from the pleasure as her hips began to tighten, and she felt her wall’s tremble as she reached her climax and she let out a scream of pleasure, the sound echoing in the forest. Then with one last thrust the manticore reached his. Her eyes went wide and a smile plastered her face as she felt the warmth of his orgasm enter her womb.

She had attended her goal but the results would have to wait. Between the sleepless night she had and the “morning activity”, she was exhausted and passed out into a slumber before the manticore even had a chance to pull out of her.


“And... yeah, that's about it really I guess..." Twilight chuckled sheepishly, rubbing the back of her head with her hoof.

“Oh,” Luna was blushing hard after hearing Twilights story. She was not expecting Twilight to tell her what happened that day let alone go into such detail about that days event. Twilight just let out a giggle at Luna’s reaction.

“Sorry if I made you feel uncomfortable.”

“Yes, that was a bit awkward, but enlightening to say the least.” She said now learning how Twilight became an unicorn once again. “But now I’m even more curious on why you moved this far away from Canterlot and why you have stayed hidden? I found you today by dumb luck.”

“Oh, I have my reasons.”

Luna’s face flared with blush again at the possible thought.

“You mean you still... with the Manticore?”

Heavens No!” Twilight cried out, a blush on her face.

“Oh...”

“However it is somewhat related, care to with come walk with me for a moment.” Twilight said as she walked out of her cottage.

Luna, now curious of what she meant by “related”, followed Twilight through the town. It was a small town on the border of Equestria, and it showed it as well. The few residents that were seen walking about were not only just ponies but a fair number of them were griffons, minotaurs, and even diamond dogs. The whole time Twilight call them by name and greeting them as she walked along.

Luna followed Twilight to what look to be a school house and they arrived right when the bell rang that ended that day’s classes. The doors burst open and children started leaving the building, glad that that day was over. Luna couldn’t hide a smile at the site as she saw not only pony foals leaving but children belonging to the other races leave the building as well. Then her eyes lock onto a creature she had never seen before.

It looked like a filly, no older than five at first glance with a sky blue coat and navy blue mane. She had the bat like wings that her night guard had, wings that only she could grant which puzzled her on how this filly had them, and a scorpion like tail. Lastly it had two sharp fangs coming out of her mouth. Luna’s mind was in a state of confusion, surely it can’t be.

“Mommy!” Yelled the pony hybrid as she trotted up to Twilight and the two nuzzled.

“Luna, this is Lily Fang, and she is my daughter,” Twilight proudly announced to Luna.

Luna blinked a few time at the sight, then gave a soft smile now understanding Twilight’s answer. She never would have guessed that a foal could be born from a manticore father, and the fillies appearance showed why Twilight chose a location where appearance matters little to raise her.

“Twilight, it was good to see you again, but i must be off now. May the rest of your life be filled with happiness,” Luna then spread her wings and took off into the sky.

“Momma, who was that? And where did she go?” Lily Fang asked looking up at her mother with curious eyes

“Just an old friend that I haven’t seen in awhile, and she went home” Twilight then grabbed her daughter with her magic and placed her on her back. “which is exactly what we are doing, your have chores that still need finished”

“Awwww.”

Twilight let out a chuckle as she and her daughter began the walk back to their home, a small smile of content on her face.