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Mother Celestia

by jl7895
Princess Celestia becomes the adoptive mother of a young colt. But where did he come from and what happens when he learns the truth?

"Everything scared me. The thunder, the twisted trees, and the darkness. The darkness was the worst. Everywhere I ran, it followed. No matter how fast or in what direction it was there....I cried out for my mother, but there was no response. Every cry was ignored, until she came."

While on her way back to Canterlot, Princess Celestia must stop in Ponyville for the night while a storm blows over. She finds a young colt crying for his mother in the Everfree Forest. He only remembers some basic spells and his age. She takes him back to Ponyville, only to learn that no one has even seen him before. The Princess takes him back to Canterlot and tries to find him a home, but something happens that changes all of that.

This is my first story so please be honest with me and help me become a better writer.

Featured on 7/2/2014 and 10/17/2014 and 6/17/2015 WE DID IT! Thanks to everyone who's been reading since the beginning and to everyone who has even glanced at the story.

Teen
Complete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Alternate Universe
Romance
Anthro
 
POOPD

168320 words: Estimated about 14 hours to read
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39 Chapters:

  1. Prologue 2013-08-03 06:38:16 UTC
    479
  2. Chapter 1: Mommy 2013-08-03 05:45:15 UTC
    1352
  3. Chapter 2: Canterlot 2013-08-04 19:04:25 UTC
    2161
  4. Chapter 3: Nightmares 2013-08-06 02:55:13 UTC
    1933
  5. Chapter 4: Mom 2013-08-07 18:35:26 UTC
    1915
  6. Chapter 5: School 2013-08-10 23:51:13 UTC
    1977
  7. Chapter 6: Cutie 2013-08-12 02:29:30 UTC
    2728
  8. Chapter 7: Lessons 2013-08-14 14:45:49 UTC
    1820
  9. Chapter 8: Sick 2013-08-18 09:56:05 UTC
    4298
  10. Chapter 9: Freshmen 2013-08-24 01:30:38 UTC
    6120
  11. Chapter 10: Arrival 2013-09-03 23:32:01 UTC
    7869
  12. Chapter 11: Birthday 2013-09-27 20:37:37 UTC
    5494
  13. Chapter 12: Departure 2013-10-03 08:12:21 UTC
    2695
  14. Chapter 13: Sophomore 2013-10-18 00:23:24 UTC
    5316
  15. Chapter 14: Dread 2013-10-28 19:16:02 UTC
    3390
  16. Chapter 15: Suitors (Cadence) 2013-11-15 04:23:14 UTC
    3375
  17. Chapter 15: Suitors (Golden) 2013-11-15 04:22:54 UTC
    2772
  18. Chapter 16: Truth 2013-12-16 23:00:52 UTC
    6485
  19. Chapter 17: Decision 2013-12-29 08:02:35 UTC
    7438
  20. Chapter 18: Junior 2014-01-16 18:06:44 UTC
    5016
  21. Chapter 19: Talk 2014-01-20 06:33:15 UTC
    2591
  22. Chapter 20: Senior (Part 1) 2014-02-18 00:45:08 UTC
    8652
  23. Chapter 21: Senior (Part 2) 2014-03-23 08:43:41 UTC
    7820
  24. Chapter 22: Academy 2014-05-02 18:17:55 UTC
    1625
  25. Chapter 23: Training 2014-05-25 17:53:42 UTC
    2392
  26. Chapter 24: Summer 2014-06-13 17:35:47 UTC
    7650
  27. Chapter 25: Captain 2014-07-02 19:46:13 UTC
    2852
  28. Chapter 26: Plan 2014-07-23 22:39:25 UTC
    8065
  29. Chapter 27: Gala 2014-08-02 17:30:11 UTC
    6762
  30. Chapter 28: Discord 2014-08-11 04:38:06 UTC
    5058
  31. Chapter 29: Vacation 2014-10-17 18:39:00 UTC
    6721
  32. Chapter 30: Wedding (Part 1) 2014-11-10 15:34:58 UTC
    5573
  33. Chapter 31: Wedding (Part 2) 2014-12-25 01:28:29 UTC
    6339
  34. Chapter 32: Pregnancy 2015-02-09 01:45:10 UTC
    5381
  35. Chapter 33: Crystal 2015-06-18 01:22:04 UTC
    3600
  36. Epilogue 2015-06-18 01:22:25 UTC
    418
  37. Author's Note 2015-06-18 01:22:34 UTC
    520
  38. Bonus Chapter: Letters 2015-06-19 02:46:00 UTC
    785
  39. Bonus Chapter: The Prince 2015-11-14 01:48:08 UTC
    10883