Platinum Sword is a unicorn that was orphaned after a small band of dragons destroy the town he was born in. his mother did everything she could do to save him, and when a Captain of Canterlots Royal army saves him and decides to raise him himself Platinum's life gets to start now.

I would like some feed back on the story to see if its worth keeping up and continuing on. If it is I will send it to a friend to fix my horrible grammar but before that happens I would like to see if it is worth it.

Please don't be too cruel on comments but be truthful.