An Outer Perspective

by Queen Cookie

Chapter 1

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     "Aaron, what's going on?" the young space traveler said into her speaker, trying to regain control of her spacecraft.

     "Your engine's blown." Aaron said, panic in his voice, "You're going down fast. It seems you're landing in-"

     "Aaron? Hello? Aaron!? Rats." Wren tried desperately to steer her vessel away from the planet.

     Wren was, commonly known as, an Incedential . Through they came in multiple colors. Wren was a dark blue one, with brown hair, and sparkling red eyes. Incedential's had wings, so did Wren. Her ears were alike to those that inhabited the planet she was crashing on.

     Incedetials were travelers. Their home world was a tourist attraction. Their homes were there, but adventure was what most craved.

     Wren knew the crash could kill her. But that wouldn't be fun, considering she plays a major part in this story. Wren had just crashed into the planet known as Mythanica, in the region of Equestria.

     "Have it's injuries treated, and when it awakes, bring it to me." Wren heard before passing out again.

     "This creature is unlike anything I've seen before." another voice, "What is it?"

     "I think it's an alien."

     "Look, it's waking up. Hello." a stallion said, "Do you speak English?"

     "Strange, I didn't think so many planets called it English." Wren said.

     "Ah, so it speaks. What is your name?"

     "I'm Wren."

     "Tell me, Wren, are you a colt or a filly?"

     Wren racked her brain. Colt meant... boy? And filly meant... girl?

      "Um, does filly mean girl?" she asked.

      "Alright, the Princess wanted to see you when you awoke. Follow me." the stallion trotted out of the room.

      Wren shakily go up. She was badly injured.

      "Are you coming?" the stallion asked.

      Wren walked down the hall with the stallion. "So what's your name?" she asked, looking at the mosaics on the wall.

      "I'm Shining Armor, captain of the Royal Guard, and brother to the Element of Magic." he said.

      "So you have a sister?" Wren asked.

      "Yes, she's very successful. She's a princess now. Is something wrong?" he noticed the creature looked sad.

      "Sorry, it's just, I have two brothers." she said. You have three brothers. he mind told her.

      "The Princess is in here." Shining Armor opened the door.

      "Your Highness, this is Wren, a female." he said.

      "Thank you, Shining Armor. You are dismissed. Please send the Elements of Harmony in." a regal looking pony said.

      "Right away your highness." Shining Armor saluted, then ran outside.

      "So, I know you are Wren. I am Princess Celestia. It's a pleasure to meet you."

      "You too." Wren replied. Then six ponies came in.

      "Princess, is this the creature you were talking about?" a pink one said, "It looks funny! What's it's name? What is it? Does it drink chocolate rain?"

      "This is Wren." Princess Celestia said, "She is from another planet. I would like you six to watch over her while she stays in Ponyville."

      "Wait, what?" Wren said.

      "I've already had a home readied for you."

      "Princess are you sure this is a good idea? An unidentified creature roaming the streets of Ponyville? That just doesn't sound very safe. She could be dangerous and-" a purple unicorn was cut off.

      "Twilight, I have had encounters with this kind before. She is perfectly safe." Princess Celestia said.

      "I don't like this one bit." a rainbow maned Pegasus said.

      "I don't think you guys are giving her a chance." a yellow Pegasus said.

      "Ah think she could be of use." a farm pony said.

      "She seems not to know of fashion." a unicorn said, pointing to Wren's sleeveless green hoodie and jeans.

      "Y'all aren't giving 'er a chance!" the farm mare said.

      "I agree with Applejack. She could be very useful, and fun."

      "Yeah, I'm with those two!" Wren said.

      "I trust you to follow Fluttershy and Applejack's examples." the princess said, "You are dismissed."

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