Fluttercrinkle
The Hospital Part 1
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Twilight look down smiling at her friend, she appreciated every aspect of her friends face, suttle stuff no one would ever notice. Beyond the yellow mares slightly cracked smile, Twilight noticed how little her friends tongue was. What struck her most odd however was with every little joyful giggle or squee the pagasus’s nose twitched a bit.
The alicorn’s body rested a moment longer before snapping out of her fixated reality on her friend’s adorable face. Her smile turned a frown; she knew that in her heart helping Fluttershy’s fantasies seemed wrong. Her mind flooded full of possible ridicule the pagasus would receive if any other pony were to catch word of her foalish behavior.
Twilight shed a small tear, beyond the illusion she kept building for her ‘foal’ she knew that there must be something causing Fluttershy to do this; to desire to be a baby, to desire to mess herself, to desire to want someone to hold on to her.”
It was overwhelming, terrifying, and yet with a small hug around Fluttershy’s fragile waist everything seem not so bad. Twilight leaned over and whispered softly to her friends ear, “Please, do know… I love you. In my arms you’re safe, please believe me.”
Twilight waited hugged the mare a few seconds before Fluttershy loosened her grip. Twilight hugged her friend a moment longer before the pagasus’s leg started twitching a bit. Twilight looked at her friend concerned. Fluttershy whined underneath a smile she made, Twilight listened closely as she heard a faint “hiss” admitting from the Yellow foal.
Twilight stared a moment before feeling the top of her own lap warm up, the radiance was coming from the bottom of her friend’s diaper. Twilight examined her friend’s condition, after the hissing had stopped Fluttershy made a few subtle whimpering noises.
The yellow mares leg’s fidgeted a bit more, kicking her right leg in the twice more before the alicorn settled her down in a hug, “Don’t worry honey, everything is going to be just alright” the friend said cradling the pagasus’s head into her chest.
Twilight sat there a moment bouncing her friend up and down on her lap, stoking her pink mane, humming softly. Twilight kept at in a moment longer until she felt the front of her chest get slightly dense at it slowly got dampened.
Twilight started hearing some light sobbing, in her haste she found herself pecking the top of her friend’s forehead. Twilight was desperate to calm her friend down; she raised her front hoof which she was using to cradle the pagasus in and started nudging her friend’s shoulder.
Twilight heard the crying intensify, “Fluttershy? Fluttershy baby, please calm down.” Twilight pleaded. Fluttershy still crying unresponsively caused her friend to panic, Twilight pleaded “Please, Fluttershy honey, wake up! Please Fluttershy dear, mommy loves you!” she finished her statement using her arms to once again put her ‘foal’ into a hug.
Fluttershy’s eyes cracked open “Uh, wha?” she blinked a few times trying to clear the tears from her eyes. Fluttershy stared a moment at her friend until her sight came back full resolution. Fluttershy with a concerned face looked up at Twilight, “Oh, Twilight what happened? How long was I asleep”?
Twilight cracked a smile, her friend’s worried expression and blush looked adorable. The alicorn unwrapped her right fore hoof from her friends back and wiped a tear out of the pagasus’s face. Twilight stared intently into her friend’s eyes, “Oh, you were just a bad dream; mommy was just worried is all.”
Fluttershy blushed “Oh, haha. Thanks, umm I think I was having a bit of a nightmare, I was falling in a weird void. Umm… It was weird because there was almost a pulling sensation on my head. I don’t know… I’m sorry it’s hard to explain, it felt like the monsters in my dream were actually interacting with me physically”.
Twilight blushed a bit too, “Umm, yeah sorry about that. I just got really worried about somethi…” Twilight cut the conversation short. Twilight phased back and smiled at her friend “I was just consumed with a dumb thought of mine, and then I hugged you.”
Fluttershy looked confused “But what does that have to do with what I said?” Twilight took a second to take what her friend just said in, “Oh, well I’m sorry I gave you a nightmare; Not intentionally of course. You just looked really adorable, and you had an accident. I thought you would get worried, so I hugged you, you started crying, I got really scared, I started panicking and started brushing your mane and really anything I could think to comfort you” Twilight started breathing in and out trying to catch her breath.
Fluttershy smiled; it was such a relief to her to have an explanation. Although hopefully next time she in cuddled like that she won’t have the same experience. The pagasus stared upwardly at her smiling ‘mother’ until she fully grasped what Twilight had mentioned. The pagasus asked “Umm, mommy could you please take me off your lap?”
Twilight smiled and nodded in agreement “Anything for you sweetie”. Fluttershy felt Twilight’s purple aura engulf her body as she was uplifted from the warm confines of the blanket and unto the free space right of Twilight on the couch.
Fluttershy looked at her bottom hoofs swinging off of the couch as she swung them, Twilight admired Fluttershy’s behavior, swinging of her legs off the chair seemed like something a foal would do. On a closer note however, Twilight noticed a tear drop from Fluttershy’s snout.
Twilight put her front hoofs on her lap and leaned in to confront her friend. Twilight took a deep breath closing her eyes preparing herself for the situation, “Is everything alright hon?” Fluttershy’s With a gentle sigh asked, “I had another accident, didn’t I?” Fluttershy climbed back onto the couch in an urgency to have her question answered.
Twilight went in for a hug “Fluttershy, I’m so sorry.” Fluttershy took a second to comprehend what she just heard. Bursting into tears she laid her weary head in Twilights lap.
Twilight started brushing Fluttershy’s mane with her front hoof, “Fluttershy, know that whatever is causing this we will get to the bottom of it. Don’t you worry about a thing honey I’m going to be there every step of the way with you, I promise”.
Fluttershy sat up and nodded her head, “Just please- don’t tell!” Fluttershy dug her head back into Twilight's lap. Twilight started petting her head “No-no why would I tell any other pony about your little problem? Now were going to have to tell Dr.Feelgood about this, are you alright with that?”
Fluttershy’s sobbing stopped, “Yes, I can do that.” Twilight smiled “D’awh, you’re such a big girl, come here!” Twilight picked up Fluttershy and hugged her, Fluttershy smiled and hugged back.
Fluttershy’s sobbing eventually died down, “So when are we heading to the doctor? It’s not too late is it?” Fluttershy said regaining her usually elegant compositor. Twilight grinned “No, silly! It’s only two in the afternoon, if we head out soon we can be back by dinner time.”
Fluttershy turned to Twilight and smiled, “Alright mommy!” The Pegasus went in to peck her friend on the nose. Twilight blushed, “Down you go!” Twilight said before gently levitating her ‘foal’ from the surface of the couch on to the carpet down below. Twilight did a quick hop of the couch narrowly avoiding the coffee table on her way down.
Fluttershy began to speak up, “So, umm… could you change my diaper?” The Pagasus sitting obediently on her rump did a little shake in an attempt to identify her behind. Twilight pranced by her, “Why of course hon, it’s no problem.”
Fluttershy stared a bit longer; it appeared to the pagasus that Twilight wasn’t being 100% genuine like this was almost a forced behavior. Before Fluttershy could surmount the thought she was interrupted by a lively cheer from across the house, “Fluttershy honey? Do you need me to take you to the nursery?”
Fluttershy zoned back in, “Oh, no it’s quite alright! Just give me a second” The Pagasus then pranced into the hallway, and eventually through the nursery.
Instinctively the moment Fluttershy moved through the door, she felt the alicorn’s force overcome her body. Before Fluttershy knew it, she was being effortlessly flown through the air by some Twilight’s magical force.
Staring up steadily at the ceiling Fluttershy started to sigh, this scene was both relaxing and concerning. Fluttershy felt almost guilty in making her friend do this for her. Fluttershy knew it was her own fault, she just knew it, and Twilight shouldn't have to go through all of this just for her.
Twilight by this point had finished cleaning and re-diapering her friend, “So sweetie, let’s head to your room to pick out a nice out fit for you alright?”
Fluttershy gave a halfhearted voice “okay” she let out using her own 4 hoofs to land herself on the ground. Fluttershy made followed her overly –cheery friend outside of the nursery’s sticker covered door.
It took Twilight until her friend slouched her way through the door to ask, “Fluttershy hon, what a matter? Did I not clean you enough? Did you have another accident?” Fluttershy sighed again speaking sorrowfully as she looked at the floor, “Twilight, if it’s alright with you could we both cut out of the method acting for a moment here?”
Twilight looked hurt as the pagasus started posing in-front of the mirror trying to find a visually analyzing how well each of her dresses could hide the diaper.
Twilight looked shocked at her friend, she couldn't quite grasp why but that really hurt her. Twilight thought to herself “Was I to abrasive? Did I hurt her? Doesn’t she understand how much I- I care? I just didn’t want her to feel as awkward about acting like foal.” Thought’s put aside Twilight said slowly backing out of the room “Umm, sure. I-I… I’m sorry.”
Fluttershy audibly sighed; she didn’t know what she wanted? The mare eventually stumbled out of the room; she was wearing a light pink dress. The dress of itself was a rather nice design, nothing too elegant like her dress from the gala, but I nice dress to stroll around in. It was simple in design, it wrapped around the bottom of her chest and arched over top of her back, the bottom of the dress was even primed with a nice white lace.
Fluttershy walked into the main living room walking rather elegantly as usual, aside from her rump which insisted on swaying back in forth due to the diapers bulge. Fluttershy walked up to her Alicorn friend who was sitting on the couch with a sank expression on her face.
Fluttershy wrapped her fore hoofs around her friend’s neck pecking her on the cheek, “So how do you like my dress?” Fluttershy asked with a small grin. Twilight rubbed her snout where the yellow pagasus had just kissed her, “What Fluttershy? I don’t understand are you mad at me?”
Fluttershy got a little less confident with that statement, “No; I was just a little flustered about the whole diapering thing. I mean… I’ll talk about it on the way to the doctor’s alright?”
Twilight shook her head, “Oh yeah, and you look amazing Flutters. Also don’t worry about anyone seeing your diaper, I’ve got your back alright?” Fluttershy smiled, “I know Twily, I’m just a bit nervous about the trip is all. It’s been days since I’ve talked to anyone but you, but I have trust that you will get me out of any awkward situation, Right?” Twilight giggled, “Haha, I can try but there won’t be any guarantees I won’t just make it worse. The two of them shared a laugh before heading out the front door.
Fluttershy and Twilight spent an hour or two prancing through the beaten dirt paths on the outskirts of Ponyville. The thick autumn air was starting to sprawl through the ski, the smell of broken foliage, the divine natural beauty of it all.
The two admire every second of it, they even occasionally took breaks to sit there and look at the beauty undoing itself right before them.
The two of them resided on one of the benches placed adjacent to a pond, Fluttershy broke the prolong silence the two shared “You know what Twilight, it’s moment’s like this that make me love nature.” Twilight just gave her friend a cheerful “Mmmhmp!” Fluttershy giggled a bit “You know, I honestly haven’t seen angel in the longest time. As much as I hate to admit it, I’m glad he’s gone to. Seeing other bunnies out there, it’s obvious he was just cruel you know.”
Twilight turned her head, “Woah, I never thought you’d down talk an animal like that?!” Fluttershy laughed a bit more, “Twilight Angel wasn’t an animal, he was a beast. I think there’s a difference you know? Even an animal learns from his mistakes. A beast however… a beast is too filled with pride, too filled with envy, want, greed…”
Twilight said curiously, “Then what makes an animal civilized?” Fluttershy grabbed Twilight's and sighed, “An animal that’s civilized is caring, it give’s without asking and it helps without concern.” Fluttershy closed her alicorn friend into a hug and with a tear said “Thank you Twilight”.
Twilight hugged back brushing her friends mane with her fore hoof, “I umm, I think we need to head to the doctors. Not to break the mood, I just… it’s getting late.” Fluttershy opened her left eye which was about to tear, “Oh my; Haha, let’s be on our way!”
The two mares galloped the rest of the way to the hospital, eventually they arrived at dusk. Fluttershy weakly kicked the ground in a fit of frustration. Fluttershy’s dress was a mess, dirt kicked up on it made it and the diaper underneath of it, have a slight brown tint. The both of them themselves were hot, sweaty, and exhausted.
` In front of the non ER department of the hospital the two ponies panted furiously. Twilight broke into a grin, “It probably… the best… idea… for two ponies… who haven’t… been out of… the house in a week to run…” Fluttershy started giggling between inhales.
The two of them paced slowly to the checkout desk, Twilight turned around to see Fluttershy half-awake panting rapidly. Twilight smiled, “Fluttershy dear, please just sit down I can handle the specifics for you.” Fluttershy cracked a grin “Thank you!”
Nurse Goodheart smiled, “So what’s your business here?” Twilight thought a second, “Fluttershy needs to have a checkup, she’s been having a bit of trouble with her nerves, like physical ones.” Nurse Goodheart looked concerned, “Oh my; has the dear had a stroke?! Does she need to be sent to the ER?”
Twilight awkwardly chuckled a bit, “Uh, no she’s just been a bit numb.” The nurse brushed her ruby red hair out of her matching red eyes, it revealed a cotton white face, “Does she require immediate assistance of any kind? This, this would definitely be unique, what kind of numbness are we talking about?”
Twilight looked embarrassed and signaled for the nurse to move ark over her gray granite counter top to hear a secret. Twilight did a double take around the room, “My friend here, she’s wearing diapers. She can’t feel anything that happens in, around, or close to her vagina, now would you kindly get Dr.Feelgood to see her promptly?”
The nurse stared at Twilight for a moment, “Woah, no need to get aggressive Princess Sparkle, we just needed to know the severity of the case to determine the urgency. It’s turning Winter and we need to start taking care of major issues our cliental has before we fry the small fish. Also yes, due to the ‘uniqueness’ in your friend’s bladder issues she’ll get immediate medical attention.”
Twilight smiled “Thank you doctor, you don’t know how nice it is to see you cooperate!” The doctor waved goodbye checking the clock, “The doctor will be ready in room 4, in 10-20 minutes alright?” Twilight turned around again and smiled “Thank you Ms.!”
Twilight and Fluttershy both sat nervously on the flat black plastic school chairs. Twilight was visibly sweating and fidgeting while Fluttershy was rapidly tapping her bottom right hoof.
Fluttershy looked around the mostly chrome and black marble building walls until she finally made eye contact with the descending sun glistening the large Window wall.
Fluttershy’s anxious face faded a bit, “Hey Twilight!” The Yellow Mare said. Twilight turned to look at Fluttershy’s eyes expecting the need for comfort asked “What’s wrong dear?” Fluttershy’s grin grew even wider, “It’s just that… Twilight… why didn’t we just fly here?”
The both of the stared smiling at each other, they couldn't keep a straight face. Both of them gave really quite and really adorable chuckles as Twilight set her arm on Fluttershy. Twilight smiled a bit more, “You know why Fluttershy? I don’t know” The two of them continued to chuckle.
Fluttershy rested her head on Twilight's right shoulder and asked “You want to know something Twilight?” “What Fluttershy?” Twilight asked with a grin. “I love you,” Fluttershy said hugging her friend. Fluttershy felt an Twilight’s hoof maneuver it’s way around the back of her head, “I love you too Flutters”
Author's Note
The new chapter is done! I'm a big fan of tender moments, and I really enjoyed writing the first part in particular although, there will be quite a bit of drama in the next chapter which I'm also excited about! The next chapter will as always be out in 5-7 days, until then I hope you lads and lasses have be enjoying the story, and I will post the next chapter as soon as possible :D
Also; I'm going to recommend this story, "Twilight and Rarity go to a Spa" as it's extremely well written, and it's one of the sweetest things I read on this site so far!
Twilight and Rarity go to the Spa: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/132077/twilight-and-rarity-go-to-the-spa
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