The monsters

by Thegreatninja24

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Dark, Alternate Universe
Length: 1331

The life of Andy is getting creepy he has been scared his whole life about the holes outside but whenever someone looked out there wasn't any

Andy goes on an adventure that changes his life permentaly…

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-08-09 01:19:33 UTC

The hole

I layed down in my bathtub, it has been an exhausting day at school.

"This sleep deprivation is killing me" I spoke out loud

I left the door open because I was alone and my cat was still making up his

Mind if he wanted to stay or leave. I stayed there paralyzed

And I saw my cat getting dragged away, I couldn't move or talk

"This God damned sleep deprivation is making me paralyzed!!

I have to save sprinkles!!" I struggled and pushed with all my strength and I move enough to

Stand up. Suddenly I stop hearing my cat. I trot outside as fast as I can

It's still early  out so every pony is still asleep, but not me I have to find sprinkles kidnapper!

I see something in the distance is kinda looked like slender mare

But it wasn't, it is far more creepy. I get a closer look at it but, it doesn't look pony at all,

It has 4 tentacles on its face, a melted jaw, 6 hooves, no coat and

Twice the size of any pony! I stood back in fear as it looked at me, it looks strangely familiar but

I can't see it. Then it sees me. It runs away In the most scariest way possible. A hole took him.

It was looking at me before he jumped into the hole. I trotted to get a look at the hole.

But as soon as I got close it disappeared. I stood there knowing I can

Never see sprinkles again. But I can't think right now,

I'm really tired. I slept with my face against the bed and my back facing away. I heard a buzzing sound right behind me

I'm to tired so I think it's just a mosquito so I let it suck my blood I didn't really care anyways,

Due to the fact I'm depressed about sprinkles.

But the buzzing is there still after a couple of minuets and I still feel it sucking my blood out

I try to move to swat it but I'm paralyzed, again.

I feel myself becoming weaker maybe it's the loss of blood I hope not. I can't move anymore I can only breath and just then I fall off my bed and get dragged outside I open my droopy eyes

And I see the hole from earlier and the buzzing sound takes me down.

On my day down I see a tunnel of light and I see a dozen giant Mosquitos in a circle and in the middle

There is a black jelly, then the giants Mosquitos gather around me and they tear me apart limb from limb, and they keep me alive. Then right when I am about to go into eternal sleep one of the bugs picks me up and drops me in the black jelly.

Restoration?

I've crawled out of the black jelly with what seemed like,

My hooves! I have my hooves back! All my limbs also! But something feels wrong

I feel like I can see more than before than I realized I had a third eye! Before I can make sure

Everything is all right, the fucking mosquitoes eat me again and drop me in the jelly

I crawl out again hoping they are full but they aren't and they keep on eating, me

And dipping me back into the jelly. After about a couple hours they stop and the break the circle like a hallway

Maybe so I can walk away but when I'm about to finish walking out

They flipping eat me again as if I'm a never ending unhappy meal.

Suddenly I hear another buzzing coming and a mosquito comes back with a nice looking lady

Then they flipping  eat her and dip her in the jelly like they did to me

But they ignored me now so I can escape.

Now I've hidden behind a rock so that they can't see me so I look at my body

To make sure I have no damage in me or anything. But no I'm different know I have 2 entenaii on my forehead

My back has tentacles and I'm have 2 hooves on my same

Leg, my middle leg... I realize what and where I am now in queen crystalys hive the Mosquitos were her minions

They must have given up eating love and started eating ponies instead.

Such a horrible thing but that doesn't explain why they look like Mosquitos

"Maybe they evolved so that they can eat ponies know" like an idiot I said to myself and then the rock

I was hiding behind got smashed. They saw me and ate me quickly and put

Me in the jelly more, and more, and more, I've already lost count but I know I am far

Different than before they've eaten me and changed me so much I don't even look like how

I did before at all but the thing is I can't see myself cause I am partially blind.

Others like me

Now I do not look like a pony at all anymore but then

I see a bigger mosquito coming towards we and then speaks with a

Thunderous voice "he isn't good anymore put him in the piiiit"

The Mosquitos pick me up and throw me down a cliff. "Yes I can finally die!"

Now after falling for what seems like ages I finally touched the ground. All my bones are broken

And probably my main organs are damaged but I don't care I can be with

Sprinkles now but noooo these assholes had to pick me up and put me in the black

Jelly. I didn't want to die again and be relived I wanted to DIE!

But I see a blurry image of some thing that was like me

A mutant! He was one of me! I guess I wasn't the only one down here after all

They talked to me about them and how they lived down here. They took me

To their leader, the most mutated one. He didnt resemble a pony at all he was a blob

With dozens and dozens of eyes and limbs.

The escape

The elder or whatever told me about the plan to escape

Cause apparently only the Mosquitos can open the holes and close them

But they can't stay out for long or else they die. So that means that we can't also

So we can only be up there for 1 hour and we can

Just get some stuff. And come back before we die so the plan is

Since the Mosquitos can only open the holes we will ride them

I had to be timed specifically or else I will fall but not die but be eaten again.

Then I see it the mosquito I will ride out on. I jump on it successfully and know I can ride him up to the surface

But I see beautiful stuff on my ride through the colony to

The top I saw pillars that looked never ending and that black jelly falling off in a waterfall

But I see now the queen she is making the jelly. (Also getting mated)

I try to stay hidden so that I don't get caught but now there

Is the ceiling and a hole opens up and I go to the surface.

Now that I'm here I kill the mosquito and leave it there and I see a house.

I walk towards it and the door is unlocked. It has been so long since I've

Seen something normal and I see a cat I'm happy that I see a

Cat it looks like sprinkles which makes me even more happy

In joy I take the cat outside "I'm taking you home sprinkles."

I walk back to my hole and then I see some pony walking towards me so I look at him.

Then his image slaps me in my face.

It's me.