Rise of the Commander

                                                            Ponyvillie

Twilight and Spike were inside a small house,hiding from the changelings.

"Oh Spike! This is really bad!" Twilight shouted.

"I know! Spike shouted. "I never thought Queen Chrysalis would come back and attack again!"

"Everypony is in real danger!" Twilight exclaimed "I hope my friends are okay!"

"I hope too Twilight!" Spike said to Twilight. "But we have to think of a plan to save eveypony!"

"I know but how?" Then an idea struck Twilight's head.

"I got it!" Twilight said excited. "I'll use a teleportation spell!"

"Where are you teleporting to?" Spike asked.

"I'm not teleporting myself! I'm going to teleport a creature from another universe! Who can save Ponyvillie!" Twilight responded.

Twilight gets into position.

"I hope this works!" Twilight shoots out a magical blast on the floor.

                                                               Raven's Background

The Nasod arm may be capable of massive destruction, but Raven is alarmed that it is overheating far too often now. The mercenary needs to get it fixed before it fails him in battle, and before long, he approaches the Ponggos for their expertise.

Raven is then sent out to collect rare materials for the repair: Ignis’s arm that blasts out nuclear flames, for greater firepower; the dark steel of Durahan Knight, for better heat resistance; and enchanted, mass-altering golem fragments, for making the usually heavy dark steel easier to carry. Gathering all these from such huge, dangerous monsters is clearly not simple, but Raven succeeds nonetheless.

The Ponggos complete the Nasod arm enhancement, and soon, Raven becomes the distinguished Veteran Commander—a temperamental yet compassionate leader of fighters.

                                                      The Halls Of Water

Raven finally made it to the end,after defeating all of Ran's minions,he came to put a stop to his evil doing.Raven was on a long rectangle platform,he walked to the middle and turn to see Ran on a chair,he was laughing at Raven,his laugh sounded very devilish,Ran teleported in front of Raven.

"So your the warrior who's gonna put an end to me,how cute." Ran spoke.

"I'm giving you one last chance Ran to surrender!" Raven yelled.

Ran chucked.

"I find it hard to believe that you think you can stop me." Ran said in a devilish tone.

"You wanna find out?" Raven said as he gets into a position to charge at Ran.

"Do your worst." Ran said,as he is getting out his sword.

Raven charges at Ran at full speed,Raven got out his sword and did a slash at Ran's face.Ran was knocked down but he hit Raven back with his Shadow Claw.

"Ignition Crow!" Raven shouted.

Raven shoots out a flaming crow at Ran,Ran was on fire and yelling out in pain,Raven didn't seem to care.

Ran went on the ground,still yelling out in pain,Raven walks towards Ran.

"It's time to put an end on you."

Raven pointed his sword at Ran's chest and he was ready to jab his sword into his chest,but Raven suddenly disappears.

The fire went out,Ran got up.

"Where did he go?" Ran said to himself.

Raven was in a room with a baby dragon and a purple pony.

How did I get here? And most importantly,where am I? Raven thought.

"It worked!" Twilight shouted.

Spike went towards Raven."Wow you look really tall." Spike said.Raven just looked at the baby dragon."I wonder if he talks." Spike said.

"Spike! Get away from the creature! I'll talk to it." Twilight said.Twilight went up to Raven."Listen we don't have much time here! we are being attack by changelings and I teleport you here because you are chosen to save Ponyville! My name is Twilight Sparkle and this is Spike,will you help us?"

Raven looked at the purple pony for minute,thoughts began to spin around Raven's head.

Should I help her?

Where am I?

Why are these creatures attacking this village?

Why was I chosen out of all the possible better warriors then me?

Until finally,Raven made his decision.

"My name is Raven and I'll be glad to help you."

Twilight let out a smile."Thank you so much! You don't know how this means to me!" Twilight shouted excitedly."Now,everypony outside is being attacked by changelings,which look like us but in dark like alien form,they can change they're appearance so be careful who you attack,you got that?"

"You lost me at everypony." Raven said.

"It's what we call it here,now are you ready to go out there and be a hero?"

Raven nodded his head in agreement.

"Then go!" Twilight shouted

Raven walked out of the room and saw a huge battle between the changelings and the ponies."Damn,there are loads of these guys everywhere." Raven said to himself.Raven spots five ponies being attacked by changelings."I better go help them!"Raven ran towards the five ponies.

AppleJack,Rainbow Dash,Rarity,Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy were fighting the changelings."There's just too many of them!" Rainbow Dash shouted.

"Ah know! Just keep them off!" AppleJack said.

"Applejack darling! There's a huge creature heading straight towards us!"

Raven saw five changelings flying towards him,Raven jumps into the air and uses Bursting Blade,the changelings fall to the ground."Is it......helping us?" Rainbow Dash said.Raven finally catches up with the five ponies."Move!" Raven shouted.

The ponies got out of the way.The changelings looked at Raven,Raven decides to use his devastating move,Giga Prominence.Every changeling around him got hit so hard that they could barley get up and move.Raven realizes that he overheated his Nasod arm,Raven keeled down to check if his Nasod arm was working fine.

The five ponies went up to Raven.

"You okay there partner?" AppleJack said.

"I'm fine,thanks." Raven said..

Fluttershy slowly went up face to face with Raven.

"A-Are you s-sure? Your a-arm is on f-fire." Fluttershy said nervously.

"It does that when I overheat."

"What in the hay is that supposed to mean?" AppleJack said

"It basically means it makes me more powerful when I do overheat."

"B-But doesn't t-that hurt?" Fluttershy said.

"Yeah,like hell." Raven said.

The ponies looked at him in shock of what he said.

"Whoa,there's no need for that type of language partner." Applejack said

"You guys act like you never cursed before." Raven said.

"We don't,now who are you?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"The name's Raven and I've been sent here by a pony named Twilight Sparkle."

"She's our friend,where is she by the way?." Rainbow Dash said.

"Over there,in that little house." Raven said,pointing to the house.

"Let's go and talk to her!" Rainbow Dash shouted.

"Wait Rainbow Dash!" AppleJack yelled.

"What now?" Rainbow Dash said.

"We can go to her later,we sorta have an invasion going on if you didn't see." Applejack said.

"All right." Rainbow Dash said disappointed.

AppleJack turned to Raven.

"Since your helping us, let us introduce ourselves,my name is Applejack."

"My name is Rarity."

"My name is Rainbow Dash!"

"My name is Pinkie Pie!"

"My n-name is F-Fluttershy."

"Well it's nice to meet all of you."

The five ponies nodded.

Suddenly,a changeling came down behind Raven.

"Look out!" Rainbow Dash shouted.

Raven turned around,the changeling tried to throw a punch at Raven but missed.Raven threw him into the air and before the changeling can hit the ground,Raven used Harpoon Spear.The changeling didn't get up.

The ponies were shocked.

"That was AWESOME!" Rainbow Dash shouted.

"Uh......thanks?" Raven said.

"Do it again!" Rainbow Dash said.

"Rainbow!" AppleJack shouted.

"Sorry." Rainbow Dash said.

"Anyway,we have to make sure everypony is safe so we are gonna have to split up! Me,Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash will go with me and Fluttershy,Rarity and Raven are going on their own."

"What!? But I want to go with Raven he's cool!" Rainbow Dash shouted.

"No time for arguing Rainbow!" Applejack said.

"But--."

"No buts! Your staying with us!" AppleJack said.

"All right." Rainbow Dash disappointed.

AppleJack turned to Raven.

"Make sure Fluttershy and Rarity don't get hurt,i'm counting on you Raven." AppleJack said.

Raven nodded.

"Good,now let's go!" AppleJack shouted.

AppleJack,Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash went to Sweet Apple Acres to check if her family is doing okay,while Fluttershy,Rarity and Raven stay in Ponyvillie to get rid of the changelings and make to make sure everypony is indoors and away from the changelings.