Rise of the Commander

                                                            Sweet Apple Acres

AppleJack,Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash looked around and saw no changelings on Sweet Apple Acres,nobody was harm,everyone was indoors and none of her family members were hurt or threaten."Ah think it would be good to head back,there's nothing to do here." AppleJack thought.

"All right everpony! let's head back!" AppleJack said.

"Are you sure it's okay to head back?" Rainbow Dash said. "The changelings might plan an attack if we come back to Ponyville."

"What makes you think that Rainbow?" Pinkie Pie said. " I'm pretty sure we would have seen them if they were following us silly."

"I guess your right Pinkie." Rainbow Dash said.

"Of course I am!" Pinkie Pie said excitedly. "Why wouldn't I?" Pinkie Pie giggled.

"Well what are we waiting for?" Let's go!" Rainbow Dash said.

The three ponies head back to Ponyvillie.

Raven,Fluttershy and Rarity were back to Ponyvillie,surprisingly,there weren't any changelings around when they got there.

"Something is wrong here,where are the changelings and why aren't they attacking?" Raven said.

"I don't know,perhaps they gave up or they went back to Queen Chrysalis." Rarity said.'

"They have a queen?" Raven said.

"Yes they do." Rarity responded.

"No wonder there's so many of them." Raven mumbled.

"Hey ya'll!"

AppleJack,Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash walked towards the group.

"How are ya doing?" AppleJack asked.

"AppleJack?" Rarity said in a confused tone. "Aren't you supposed to be at Sweet Apple Acres?"

"There weren't any changelings there so ah decided to come back here and check if ya'll are all right!" AppleJack said.

"Well,we are doing fine but I think there's something wrong here." Rarity said.

"What do you mean?" AppleJack said.

"Well there aren't any changelings around and they're not attacking." Rarity said.

AppleJack looked around and saw Rarity's point,there's no changelings to be found.

"Well,maybe they gave up." Applejack assumed.

"They can't give up that easy." Raven spoke. "There's no way they retreated,they have to be planing something."

"Ah guess your right Raven." AppleJack said. "Ok everpony,watch your back!"

"I think we should get Twilight involve too." Rainbow Dash said.

"Your right,let's go get her quick!" Applejack shouted.

The group went to the small house where Twilight was hiding.

AppleJack knocked on the door.

"You in there Twi?" AppleJack said.

Twilight didn't give a responded back.

"Hold on,Ah'm coming in!" AppleJack shouted.

AppleJack kicked the door in.When they entered inside,they noticed that she wasn't there and the room was very dark.

"What the?!" AppleJack shouted. "Where is she?!"

The door closed behind them.

"What's going on?" Show yourself!" Rainbow Dash shouted.

The room lit up and they saw a large group of changelings and Queen Chrysalis,the group also saw Twilight on the floor,it looked like she was knocked out,the group was shocked at this point.Queen Chrysalis lifted the group with her magic and violently drops them hard to the ground,the group couldn't get up expect for Raven.

"And who are you supposed to be?" Queen Chrysalis said.

Raven points his Nasod arm to Queen Chrysalis.

"Veteran Commander."

Raven releases fire from his Nasod arm,burning Queen Chrysalis,one of the changelings pushes Raven.The fire went out,the queen was still standing."Changelings,attack!" Queen Chrysalis demanded.The changelings charge at Raven.

"Revolver Cannon!" [OVERHEAT]  Raven shouted.

Ten changelings fall to the ground,crying out in pain,and the remaining thirteen tackle Raven,Raven struggled to break free.Raven grabs one grenade from his waist and shows the changelings the grenade,the changelings got scared and backed off,Raven then throws the grenade at their feet,the grenade explodes in fire,three changelings were caught in the fire and burn to death.

The remaining ten changelings surround Raven,Raven knew what he had to do next,Raven raises his Nasod arm into the air,black explosive smoke comes out of his arm which paralyzes the changelings.

"Giga Prominence!" [OVERHEAT]

The changelings lie on the ground,not moving,the floor had multiple giant holes,Raven then proceeds to kill Queen Chrysalis,Raven approaches her.

"What are you doing?!" Queen Chrysalis yelled. "Get back you monster!" Raven walks to her slowly."I'm warning you!" Queen Chrysalis yelled. "Back off!" Raven notices that Queen Chrysalis was to scared to attack,When Raven got closer to her,he jabs his sword into the ground and then points his Nasod arm to Queen Chrysalis."What is the meaning of this!?" Queen Chrysalis demanded. "If you do kill me,I hope you burn in pony hell!"

"Been to hell,now I'm back." Raven's Nasod arm begins to glow."Hellfire Gatling!" [OVERHEAT]Every blast of heat enters her body violently,surprisingly,Queen Chrysalis is alive,barley."I.....will..p-punish....y-you...demon." Queen Chrysalis said.Raven picks out three grenades from his waist."So....this is.....h-how it ends......the hero k-kills off the d-defeated villain..... don't y-you have any m-mercy?" Raven then drops the three grenades on Queen Chrysalis.

"Death is mercy."

The grenades explode in fire,burning Queen Chrysalis to a crisp,Raven watches her burn.Raven didn't feel bad for what he did,he shows no mercy for those who hurt the innocent ones,he's glad he killed her."Well I better take these ponies to the hospital,it looks like they have been hurt pretty bad,I think saw an hospital earlier around here". Raven thought.Raven picks up the ponies and heads for the nearby hospital.