Eric’s strange adventure
Chapter 1
The Beginning

I awoke in a forest clearing to the sound of a woman yelling something.

I opened my eyes to find a pink woman with very curly magenta hair kneeling next to me, but as I studied her I saw what looked like a tail.

It was the same color and curliness as her hair and on her face was will I think is muzzle.

She had tears in her eyes, and what I think was blood covering her arms and shirt. Her face showed nothing, but concern.

She must have noticed that I was staring because she said with a concerned tone that matched the look on her face. “Hold on Twilight will be back soon with help! Just…hold…on!”

I tried to talk back, but I just couldn’t. My body was frozen to the spot.

My thoughts became frantic ‘Why can’t I move, why is she crying, and why does she have blood on her?’ it all came to me ‘I’m was dying!’

Using the all my strength I mouthed the words “what happened to me”, but as I mouthed the last word a wave of pain shot through my body causing my vision to start to fade, and a ringing in my ears, but those concerns were dwarfed by the sheer magnitude of the pain I felt.

It was like I was being ripped apart, but just as quick as it started it ended. Then another waved started and ended, and as it did I could hear her saying “I don’t know; I found you like this!”

Then another wave even more intense then the last one started, causing the ringing to start again even louder this time, and my vision to start to fade even faster.

As the ringing started to die down again I was left feeling cold, and the last thing I saw before my vision was gone was the women with tears in her eyes as she exclaimed “NO! NO! JUST HANG ON A LITTLE LONGER! PLEASE!!!!”

then the world faded to back.

I was roused from my daze with the sound of gunfire and explosions. Growing more alert and griping my rifle tighter, I looked over my cover to see the enemy. A few were running from cover to cover. I readied my rifle and aimed at one of them, then “bam, bam, bam.”

The three quick shots left the three dead on the ground.

As more fire hit my cover I quickly ducked, ready to run when I needed to, but as I sat there I heard moaning from behind me. As I turned I saw a one of my squad members was crawling towards the forest with his leg bleeding badly.

“Shit!” I said in a low voice.

I stead crouched as I made my way over to him.

As I grabbed his shoulder he looked up to me with fear clear in his eyes.

“CAPTAIN! I don’t want to die!” he said in a quivering voice.

“You’re not dying on me today! You have your handgun right?” he nodded pull it out, and I give him mine.

I flipped him on to his back and locked around his chest and told him “you shoot! You shoot anything that moves! Well get out of here even if it kills me!”

We moved at a very show pace, but after a few feet I noticed that none were came after us. I started to worry, but my fear were confirmed when a grenade rolled out onto the path that we were on.

I quickly ran to it, jumped, hit the ground in a roll, grabbing it, and throw it back in the direction it came from.

I quickly covering my face as a resounding “BOOM!” sent shook me to the core.

I got to my feet and shouted “GUN! NOW!” and my squad member tossed me my handgun.

I found cover behind a tree and heard a twig break over where I throw the explosive.

“Damn! They’re still alive!” I said under my breath.

I stood there until I saw the barrel of a gun. I grabbed it and pulled the wielder with it. I got the gun out of his hands quickly and made him into a human shield.

I ran at his allies and my makeshift shield work perfectly, but as I got to the first it outlived its usefulness. I let it drop to the ground getting my next target in the same position, but was passed out.

‘A little harder to move with the added dead weight, but it still worked fine.’ I thought as I looked around to see two more hiding.

I ran to the closer one while he shot at me which was pointless. I reached him in a matter of seconds letting the body drop like the first, I grabbing my knife from my belt, and stabbing him in the neck.

I looked around for the last one, but I couldn’t find him till I looked for my squad member. He was being held up with a knife at his throat.

I spoke to him in his language saying “let him go.”

He grin widely as he put away his knife and pulled out his gun. He plased the pointed the barrel at my squad member, but I immediately shot him in the head before he could react.

He dropped my squad member as he fell into a pile on the ground.

I made my way over to my squad member and extended my hand to give my gun. He went to grab it with a big stupid grin on his face. BANG! I saw a spurt of blood and brain mass leave his head as the color faded from him, and his eyes rolled back.

Another .shot went through my shoulder “GAH!”

I ran having no time to remorse the loss or think of the pain. I ran until a found myself at a cliff overlooking a river.

I stop only for a second, but a pain hit my chest. I looked down to find a black spot growing on my chest. I placed my hand to it and pulled it back to see blood. my body began to go limp and I fell.

I closed my eyes waiting for the pain, but it never came. They opened only to find a black void. “Am I dead? Is this the afterlife?” I said before I looked around franticly, but black was all that met me.

I started to lose hope as I fell to the ground and said “oh, god where the hell I’m I?.” As I set there, I starting falling into a state of pure terror and misery, but then I heard a very quiet beeping was coming from behind me.

I turned to look to see a dim light returning my hope. I got up and ran to it. As I got closer the light became brighter, and the beeping got louder, until I was lying in a bed staring at the ceiling with that beeping ringing in my ears at a constant rate.

I set up quickly and inspected the now realized hospital room.

As I looked around I found that same pink woman from before sleeping in a cheer in the corner of the room, but with no blood on her.

I tried to get up, but there was resistance on my wrists and ankles. I looked to see why and I saw blue bands on both of my wrists and ankles with a blue wire attached to each and tethering it to some part of the bed.

I was filling confused, but then the door open to show a rather large white women that filled the doorway. She also had what looked like; a horn, a pair of wings, and multicolored hair made of pink, blue, purple, and cyan which looked like it was moving in a wind, when there was clearly wasn’t any.

She was followed by two more just like her. The two consisted of a blue one which was slightly smaller than the white one and the last was the smallest of the three. She was lavender with dark purple hair with a pink strip running downing its length.

One more came in after this it was a brown colored man, and he introduced himself “hello, I’m The Doctor.”

I asked, “Doctor Who?”

Author's Note

this is an edited version of the original.

well i hope you enjoyed my first chapter. if you read through it and didn't like it then thank you for your time, but if did like it i hope to see you next.