The mists of Trixie

by CoolKT11

Rating: everyone
Tags: Trixie, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Bon-Bon, Angel, Fluttershy, Adventure
Length: 1271

When Fluttershy and Angel find out BonBon was kidnapped, they find out who did it!

Join Fluttershy and Angel, on a quest to find out who kidnapped Bonbon!
Who Dunit?

Published 2013-08-12 02:30:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-08-12 02:30:02 UTC

The story is right here

(Fluttershy Narrates)

In the warm, sunny, day breeze, Me and Angel hanged out in the trees. What we didn't know was that there was a scream. But after the second scream came, Angel could hear it as if it were behind him, croaking in his ear. So Angel told me this. He showed me where the scream traced. It traced to an old abandoned alley, with old crows howling to the moon. But it was day time, so I decided that Angel needed sleep. It was obviously a fake scream to scare the hay off of us. But as I started to turn, I saw a shred of Bon bon's hair under a hoof print. I also saw some rope that was dirty and worn out.
Then it hit me.

I realized that Bon bon was kidnapped! I had to save her! But who kidnapped her? Was it Discord? No it couldn't be. He was reformed from evil. I had my suspects. But I had to be sure. All I could think was, "I must find Twilight, I must find Twilight." So I went to the Library. I asked Twilight to help me and Angel find out the mystery. She said she could if I help her clean the library. I was determined to do it! So once we did it, Twilight and me and Angel came to the alley and we looked for clues.

"Hey I think I found something! It looks like blue hair!" said Twilight. That measured the suspects down a little. Now the remaining suspects was TRIXIE! I couldn't believe my eyes! Trixie? I thought she was all A OK! But now? After kidnapping Bon bon? How could some pony ever do such a thing? But then my mission was to save Bon bon!

"So, Twilight...Where would I find Trixie?" I asked.

She replied with a "Well, how am I supposed to know? Wait-IS TRIXIE THE ONE WHO GOT BON BON?!"

"Yes, she did do it!" I could tell. I felt my mind telling me I had to believe it not to be true! But it was true. I had to find Trixie.

Twilight then told me she knew where she was. "She is in Trixie Mists. A very popular city!"

So I flew to Trixie Mists. I had no Idea why it was named after Trixie, or if she was named after it, but I had to find Bon bon. As I reached the city, I explored it's continents. Then I saw a big tower that read, 'Bow to Trixie! You are in Trixie Mists.'

"Yeah right. Like I'd ever bow to her." I said aloud.

But it seamed like some pony heard me. There were statues every where that glowed red after I said that. I knew I should've kept my mouth shut, for some Pegasus came up and said, "What did you say, dear?"

"Well-I-I..." I was at my shy point. I get shy often. Especially in front of my friends. I do it to keep a low profile.
"I said, Yeah. I'd always bow to her." and I tried to smile. A very scared smile. I was pretty scared. But deep down I felt like punching those guys to another world.

"Oh, ok. By the way, we are the guards of Trixie mists. If you need help call us. Or if you need to be arrested." the guard said. He was onto me. I could tell. I saw a sleek smile come across his face.

So I went to the ground. I saw a million statues. They glowed green. I guessed that when they glow red that means some pony said something bad...Like if they said something against Trixie under their breath, they would turn red.

The city looked rundown. I couldn't tell why it was so popular. Probably because it had a one of a kind whatever. But then I saw it. They sold ponies here! I saw very famous missing ponies! Jack Flatter, Mary Dancer, Lily Rosana...Wait. Those aren't pony names! Sorry, I meant Cage Rider, Flutthay Siona, and Diamond Heart. I couldn't believe my eyes! Famous ponies everywhere. So soon I got to Trixie Tower. I guessed there I would find Trixie.

As I entered every pony's eyes looked at me, then quickly got back to their business. I could see that the stairs were not the fastest way, but the elevator. That's also the only one of a kind thing it has here! ELEVATORS! But, as I went towards one, a guard stopped me. "Halt! You must pay 12 bits to go to the top on elevator."

I had a bunch a bits in my bag. So I payed him 12 bits. But I gave him another bit. And I told him, "Keep the change, please." And so he did. So I went up the elevator, I could hear the Elevator music. I could feel it moving. Just a few more up till... THE DOOR OPENED! In the room, I could see a dark figure. It's eyes were pure red. And it started walking towards me. And it got closer...And closer...Until, she put on a mask and put on sleeping gas. I quickly fell asleep. I knew it was a trap!

I awoke in a chair. My hoofs were tied to the back of the seat. "So you thought you could save Bon bon, huh Fluttershy?" said Trixie. "Well, here at Trixie mists, we sell ponies! So, we'll sell both of you!" said Trixie.

I could see Bon bon's mouth roped.

I said, "Why did you want Bon bon? What does she have to do with any of this if she isn't famous?"

"I used her as bait. I knew your dear Angel could hear that scream. I made her scream! I made the clues for you! And I put the place you needed to go on Twilight's favorite book!" said Trixie. "Now, Bon bon's a witness, so I can't let her go...unless she keeps her mouth shut."

I knew that Bon bon would tell. so I said, "Bon bon! Don't tell anyone! Promise me?" Bon bon nodded. But she winked. I knew that Trixie hadn't seen it. I knew Bon bon wouldn't TELL any pony. But she can still SHOW. The plan has been set.

So when Bon bon was sent home, I was sent to a shop. The shop had the title that said, 'Ponies for sale!' And I did not like that title a little bit! It gave me the shakes. So I waited. And waited.

Then the next day, I saw a mare. She was mute, and she showed a sign that said, "Can I have that pony with pink hair?" and so, Trixie agreed and the mare bot me. She took me out of the city, and we walked for 2 days. Soon we got to Pony ville! Why would she take me to Pony ville?

Once we got to the Library, I asked, "Why did you buy me, mare?" the mare shushed me, and we got inside. I saw Apple Jack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Pinkie pie. And Bon bon was sitting on a chair, looking at books.

"Who the hay is this mare?" I asked Rainbow Dash.

"Calm down, Fluttershy. That's just old Twilight." Rainbow replied.

And with that, Twilight took off her hood. She told them how Bon bon showed them what happened. "And so, now I own Fluttershy." said Twilight. Every pony laughed. But I didn't. Well at least it's a happily ever after! For now...

Author's Note

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