Farm Boys

by Ponahkiin

Rating: mature
Tags: Sex, Caramel, Big Macintosh, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance
Length: 3868

Caramel has something to say to Big Mac, how will he react when Caramel tells him his deepest secret

Caramel has had something to say to Big Mac for a while, he's been thinking it over, and today's the day he's going to finally come clean with Mac. How will he react when Caramel tells him his deepest, darkest secret?

Story written by me, Ponahkiin and my good friend Jack

This story was actually written, half on accident. During a chat conversation between me and my friend, we started writing dialogue for a conversation Big Mac and Caramel were having, it didn't even start off as a romance fic, but as we kept writing it soon turned into a clopfic, oh well.

Both the main story and epilogue took us 8 hours to write. (with plenty of breaks)

Published 2012-02-22 23:24:07 UTC
Last updated 2012-02-22 23:24:07 UTC

Chapter 1

"Um, Mac?" Caramel mumbled upon entering the barn

"Eeyup?" Mac replied in his usual manner

Big Mac's tail swept back and forth, allowing Caramel to occasionally glance at the red stallion’s majestic rump, all toned muscle to match his masculine frame.

"Uh, can I help you Caramel?" Mac nervously replied after catching a glimpse of Caramel's prying eyes.

Caramel snapped back to reality. "Um...uh..." Caramel managed to stutter, allowing his dark brown mane to cover his inquisitive eyes and the crimson blush that began to spread over his features. "L-Lovely day..." Caramel murmured "Isn't it?"

"Uh... Eeyup. Sure is... did you, uh, want anything in particular? Jack and Bloom cover the sales."

"Yeah" said Caramel, inching closer to Big Mac. He could see beads of sweat roll down the Stallion's face, a result of his usual hard work on the farm. Caramel had to contain himself, trying to avoid the jade green eyes, half lidded and distant. "I know"

"Know... Know what?" Big Mac sputtered out

Caramel was now inches from Mac. All pretence was gone, he had to act. Caramel raised a hoof and grabbed the Stallion by his scruffy mane, still unsure if he should tell him or not.

"UGH!" Mac yelped, taken aback by the sudden tug on his long orange mane.

"Mac..." he whispered.

"EE-EE-EEYUUUP!?"

Caramel moved his face closer to Mac's, the look on his face bringing Mel some mild amusement, like he had just been show a picture of Apple Bloom doing something she shouldn't.

"I...I..." The words wouldn't come.

"You... what, Mel?" Caramel softly spoke back, now more comfortable with the little distance there was between the two stallions.

Caramel closed his eyes, it was now or never. With one fluid motion he pressed his lips against Mac's. They were rough and unyielding but also extremely comforting to the young Stallion. Caramel's tongue traced Mac's lips, asking for entrance.

"GFFFMPH!?" Mac let out an inaudible muffle while Caramel's lips were pressed so firmly against his rugged face.

The motion let Caramel slide his tongue past Mac's lips and intertwine with Mac's own tongue,
Mac felt his face instantly redden as he felt Caramel's slimy tongue squirm around his own.

Both Stallions let out a soft moan simultaneously

Caramel began to stand on his back hooves, still letting his tongue wrestle Mac's. He tasted so good, like freshly made Apple Butter, rich and velvety to the touch and taste. Caramel's front hooves were now intertwined in the golden orange mane of Macintosh; it's was wet and matted, but still smooth and soft to touch. Caramel continued to run his hooves through the mane as he began to bite Mac's bottom lip, an uncharacteristically cheeky, seductive smile creeping its way onto Mel's still crimson features. As he lost himself more and more to the strong Stallion, he began to lean in, pushing them both onto the hay strewn floor of the barn.

Falling over backwards on to the soft hay pile, Caramel and Big Mac continued their sensual moment, pausing briefly for breath, this time Mac leaned back in swiftly to capture the brown-maned stallion's soft luscious lips, smirking through the kiss after hearing the excited moan on the other side. Caramel's hooves found their former position, locked on to the back of the Red stallion's neck, stroking his mane as they kept going. Mac this time made the first move, attacking Caramel's tongue with his own without hesitation; another soft moan escaped his lips, turning Big Mac on even more.

Mac pulled back briefly, Caramel began to think he had done something wrong; this was his first after all. But the glint of lust in Mac's eyes brought Caramel's theory to its knees. Mac took a firm grip around Caramel's chest and rolled over so that he was now on top, pinning the dazed Caramel to the floor. Big Mac licked his lips still tasting Mel's saliva, and he pushed down on Mel harder, their chests now flat against eachother. Big Mac smirked down at him, a flat droll chuckle escaping his lips.

"What?" questioned Mel? Looking up at the Stallion he had wanted so badly for so long.

"You look so..." Mac trailed on. "Incredible. I've never looked at another pony the same way before."
"You make me feel amazing; I don't want this to end." He softly spoke from above the smaller stallion.

"It doesn't have to." Caramel whispered back up at him

Their lips crashed together once more, tongues almost instantly colliding. Twisting, turning every which way around the other. Neither stallion could not keep their moans contained any longer, letting sexual sound after sound fill the empty barn throughout the session.

Caramel was beyond the point of ecstasy; he was in full blown euphoria. Never in his dreams would he have imagined his first moments with his beloved would be this... fruitful. His hooves moved down Mac's back, heading for the flank that he so desperately wanted. Their tongues still did battle, but it was clear that he would never be able to top Mac.

Big Mac's sexual hunger for the fellow stallion only grew every second their tongues were intertwined. It wasn't long before he wasn't satisfied with just Caramel's sweet lips pressed against Mac's his and tongue wiggling around his cheeks.
It felt like they had spent hours in the barn already, both stallions had become extremely horny and equally as concupiscent. Their throbbing members had arisen throughout their passionate session without either seeming to notice.
Caramel broke the kiss and tentatively licked Big Macintosh’s bottom lip, followed by the neck, moving lower down the stallion's toned, muscular figure until he got to the enormous appendage.

"Ah! It's... It's huge!" Caramel gasped

"Well with a name like “BIG Mac” I thought you would've worked it out, he he." he chuckled.
Caramel was slightly intimidated by Big Mac's huge, throbbing member. He took a quick glance down at his own, somewhat embarrassed when he noticed it was but a fraction of the size of Mac's.

"Yours ain't too impressive, is it?" Mac commented, chuckling at the effect this was having on the yellow Stallion.
Mel shivered as Mac's huge meat pressed up against his stomach, its force a testament to how horny he was.

"Don’t worry, I like em’ small" Mac whispered in Caramels ear before beginning to grind firmly against him.
The two stallions continued to grind forcefully against one another, their cocks rocking back and forth together, soft moans escaping both their lips every few seconds. At this point both stallions were positively rock hard, panting heavily against the others shoulder as they continued to bounce up and down, the two members squashed forcefully together.

Caramel leant down from his position over Mac to the gently kiss the stallion as he continued to thrust up and down against the others dick, pre-cum coating the top of both of them. They continued to moan into each other until Big Mac broke the closeness briefly to get out from under Caramel.

"Do you wanna do this Mel?" Big Mac worryingly asked before he went any further.

"More than anything." Caramel purred back at him

Letting out a snigger, Big Mac flipped the other stallion, so Caramel's back was facing him. The larger stallion paused to admire the beauty of Caramel's firm rump thrusted up at him.

"Hot damn!" Big Mac was practically salivating

Caramel giggled lightly, continuing to face down into the bundle of hay.

Big Macintosh prepped himself, his huge member moved in closer towards the smaller stallion's luscious flank. Mac rubbed his enormous cock roughly against Caramel's tight hole. Both let out a simultaneous moan.

"Ah! So good!" Caramel gasped yet again

With one swift motion Big Mac thrust into the other stallion, his massive cock engulfed entirely in Caramel's warm passage, Caramel let out a passionate cry. Both stallions paused for a moment to let the pleasure seep in entirely.
Caramel began to bounce his flank forward and back, resulting in a loud, horny grunt from Mac.

"You're really good at this Mel." he moaned

"I've been dreaming about it for so long." The stallion replied

Leaning up from the hay pile, Caramel's hooves were now pushing against the barn floor, his entire form tightening as he pushed back against Big Mac's rock hard member. Caramel bit his bottom lip, trying to avoid the screams of lust that were rising in his throat, instead opting to moan in rhythm to Mac's thrusts.

Big Mac loved the feeling inside of Mel's soft, warm orifice. He was definitely surprised at how adept the Stallion seemed to be, given his usual awkward nature. Mac heard Caramel whisper something inaudible. He leaned into Mel more so that his mouth was just next to Caramel's ear.

"What is it?" Mac said in a sensual tone, still slowly thrusting in and out of Mel.

"I don’t want to ever let this end" Caramel replied quietly through the pile of now moist hay.

Big Mac let out a loud moan in to Caramel's ear as he felt the yellow stallion's body tighten and shiver around him.

"I- I feel the same way." Mac softly replied against Mel's ear.

Big Mac's thrusts became faster, as did both the stallion's panting. As much as the two wanted it to last forever, every thrust was bringing Mac closer to the edge, and as he felt the Red hunk slide in and out of him so vigorously, Caramel too was being pushed closer and closer towards orgasm.

"Hmmm, Just what in hell’s horses is going on up in there?" Applejack inquisitively speculated as she stood just outside the looming barn.

Inside the two stallions were oblivious. Ecstasy was all either could feel right now, Caramel's rump quivered slightly, he was loving every second of this. Big Mac's thrusts became harder and harder, his throbbing cock pulsing with pleasure within Caramel's warm entrance.

"Ah! Yes! Yes! Don't- Stooooop!!!" Caramel couldn't contain his pure delight at the larger stallion's quickening pace.

Outside, Applejack placed her ear to the barn door, to investigate the strange noises further.

With a loud grunt from Big Mac, both stallions were pushed over the edge, Mac's warm ejaculate filling Caramel entirely, so much so that the seed started to drip out of Mel's tight anus on to the floor below, As simultaneously Caramel also orgasmed from underneath Big Macintoshes huge frame, his cum coating the hay pile beneath him.

"Mmmmm, that was just so damn incredible." Big Mac moaned, still inside the smaller stallion.

Before they could even get up from their positions, Applejack burst through the massive barn door, having heard Big Mac's last comment.

"Now just what in the heck of the whole of Apple Acres is going on in here, Big Ma-" Applejack gasped loudly, almost a scream, as her eyes gazed at the scene she had interrupted.

“No!” Caramel thought. “No, no, no anything but this.”

The startle of having Applejack break her way into the barn caused Caramel to jump suddenly, removing himself from Mac in the process and flicking drops of ejaculate across the floor of the musty barn.

Mac turned to face Applejack, trying to conceal him cum laden member. Mac was not nearly as fazed as Caramel was but unsettled, sort of like he half expected this to happen.

"W-what!?" Applejack stammered loudly in an incredulous tone.

She absolutely couldn't believe what she was seeing. She looked both the Stallions up and down, grimacing as she noted the sweaty manes and the white seed which now covered most of Big Mac's front. Caramel had quickly scrambled to his hooves and sat down on his wet rump, trying to hide the act as best he could, his hooves still firmly positioned over his crotch poorly attempting to cover his, thankfully, dying down member.

"I'm really, really, really sorry AJ, I'll understand if you never want to see me again or whatever. I'm just really, really sorry and th-" Caramel trailed on hysterically

"I have nothing to say to you right now, Caramel. Just quiet down for a moment." Applejack firmly announced to the yellow stallion.

"Look, sis, just. We're really sorry about everything; we just got, uh, carried away..." Big Mac tried to reason, making no effort whatsoever to cover himself.

"Uh, huh. Carried away?"

"...Eeyup."

"Humph, why didn't you tell me about this Mac!? You'd think you'd tell you only si- uh, one of your sisters about it!" Applejack furiously retorted.

"Hey, I didn't even know! Caramel just, kinda started it, and I really enjoyed it, so we kept going." Big Macintosh blushed
Caramel was smirking in the corner of barn, desperately trying to contain his sniggering.

"Well, I assumed you and your little love bird would've tried to make your way back to your room before you started getting a little too friendly." Applejack exclaimed

Both the stallions gazed down at the barn floor in a mix of guilt, shame and embarrassment.

"Hmph. You two are cleaning this... mess, up right now, AND you're both gonna finish the work I set you two this morning, which is what you should've been doing instead of carrying on like ya'll have done!" The younger pony ordered

"Yes sis." Big Mac calmly responded

"We're sorry Applejack." Caramel followed suit

"Good, you two fags can ravish eachother as much as ya'll want, BUT you don't do it during working hours, ya hear?" she winked at the two of them, her anger dying down after the apology.

The pony waltzed out, content in her commands.

The stallions chuckled at her last comment briefly.

"Well, we should probably clear the hay up; I really should've done that earlier."

"Yeah... Um, Mac?"

"Yeah, what is it Me-"

The yellow stallion pecked Big Mac on the cheek, stopping Big Mac mid-sentence

"I understand if you don't wanna do that again, but thanks for it anyway. I really do love you." Caramel said, gazing up at Mac

"Are you kidding me!? Pfft, don't wanna do it again. I'll meet you in my room tonight, lover" Big Mac winked at the smaller stallion.

Caramel felt his cheeks redden as they both looked at eachother.

"Um, do you have anything to say to ME, Mac?"

"I love you too." The red stallion smirked.

An ear to ear grin appeared on Caramel's soft face, as they continued to clear up the barn.

Life could not be more perfect for the both of them as it is right now.

Fin

Authors note: Don't stop just yet, there's a pretty big epilogue on the next chapter!

Epilogue

Epilogue

10 months later

Caramel gulped, he looked seemingly nervous. Big Macintosh placed his hoof on his. Caramel looked up and smiled as he leant against the red stallion. They had been sitting on the train to Canterlot for a while now; it wouldn’t be too long before they were both in the heart of Equestria.

In the larger booth just behind Big Mac and Caramel, Twilight, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Applejack and Rarity were having their own excited talk about the booming city they were less than an hour away. They were just talking about what they would each do once they had arrived when Pinkie spotted the yellow stallion leaning lovingly against Big Mac in the booth in front of her. Pinkie tried to contain her laughter, poorly.

“HAHAHAHAHA! THEY’RE JUST SO CUTE!” Pinkie Pie burst out.

“Pinkie! You shouldn’t laugh, it’s rude!” Twilight retorted.

“Yeah, yeah. It’s cute I get it; I’m just too excited to get there!” Rainbow Dash inputted.

“Um, it is quite cute Rainbow Dash.” Fluttershy softly replied.

“Well, I for one am delighted about it, especially since it gave me an opportunity to make a suit for once, not quite enough glitz in my dear opinion but alas, it’s been done.” Rarity announced

“How about ya’ll try seein’ that every day for the best part of a year. Not sayin’ it ain’t cute or nuttin’, but it loses its appeal when it’s all you ever see your big bro do!” Applejack huffed.

In the other booth, the entire conversation could be heard by Big Mac and Caramel, who after hearing the inane chatter and friendly squabbles over how cute the two of them were, couldn’t stop laughing, which only egged the six good friends on even more.

“Hey look! You can see it from here!” Rainbow Dash blurted out excitedly.

The beautiful city of Canterlot seemed to glimmer in the distance; it wouldn’t be much longer before they all arrived.

“Wow, would you look at that! That Grand Galloping Gala. It seems only yesterday that we were here last, and yet a whole year has passed! So much has happened since then, but with all that we've imagined, the reality of this night is sure to make this... The Best Night Ever!”

“Yeah! I just can’t help but get a sense of déjà vu about tonight already.” Rainbow Dash pondered for a moment before simply shrugging it off.

The ponies all went their separate ways, in the hope that last night’s unfortunate events didn’t repeat themselves.
Caramel prepped his suit nervously, standing at the door to the great hall. Big Mac standing by his side, Mac stroked Caramel’s arm lightly, as if to tell him not to worry. Caramel replied with a soft smile before pecking him quickly on the cheek as they headed through the open door to the Gala.

When Twilight told Caramel about how Princess Celestia had personally invited Big Mac and Caramel to this year’s Gala he had been over the moon, Big Mac honestly just went to make Caramel happy, but once he got on the train, he felt himself feeling just as excited for the party.

Some kind faces and some snobby faces greeted the couple as they entered the great hall, the same buffet and the same snooty people were talking throughout the large room. The only thing that was different this year was the music playing in the background, for another pony had joined the critically acclaimed Octavia Clef on stage today, but that’s a story for another day.

As the couple danced together in the middle of the room, a few faces turned, but it went mostly unnoticed, as they leant into each other’s open arms, the ambient electro mixed with the classical cello couldn’t fit the mood better, Big Mac lightly kissed Caramel’s forehead as they continued to sway and spin to the music that seemed to fill and swim in the very air around them.

The rest of the Gala seemed to go on without any occurrence; it was a beautiful but uneventful night.
As the group of eight packed themselves back in to the train home to Ponyville, they told their stories of their more-so eventful night.

“The music was way better than last year! Everybody was jumping by the end! With Pinkie on stage I told you guys this would be a real kicker, unlike last year!”

“I couldn’t believe my luck! The princess wasn’t even greeting people tonight! She left it up to her Nephew Blueblood to introduce the guests and I got to talk to her about magic all night! Oh it’s such a shame that Spike was too ill to make it this year, he probably wouldn’t of liked it anyway.”

“OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH!!! Not only did The Wonderbolts recognize me from last year, they actually had time to talk to me! They invited me for a private race next week!!!”

“Oh, it was magical. All the critters actually came to say hello this year, we all sang together and I got to meet all the different kinds of birds and the cute rabbits too.”

“Absolutely INCREDIBLE! I didn’t even know the awful Blueblood HAD a brother, and I especially didn’t expect him to be so utterly charming! A true gentlemen, indeed!”

“Look at all these bits I made! Soarin from tha’ Wonderbolts came again and bought out all of my pies! I made enough across the whole day to upgrade the barn! Mainly though I’m just glad that Big Mac and Caramel enjoyed themselves, even if they didn’t seem to do anything’ other than dance.”

The train continued back home, every pony and stallion alike in completely content with their very own perfect day. Twilight really was right; it wasn’t a day they’d forget in a hurry.

Dear Princess Celestia,

I know it’s only been a day since I last saw you at the Gala, but a lot’s been on my mind lately and I've wanted to share it to you.

Ever since my brother Mac and my friend Caramel started seeing eachother, I haven’t really thought much of it. I like to see him happy, that’s all, he’s happy with Caramel, and I’m happy because he’s happy!

It made me think alot about it though, you see, Caramel is a stallion, and so is Big Mac. I can’t imagine why, but some ponies just don’t like that for some reason, it made me think alot about acceptance, especially of the ones you love.

Maybe what I’m trying to say is, that I learned a lesson today about not turning your back on your family, but the truth it, I didn't! I would never do anything like that to Big Mac or Caramel, whether they like mares, stallions or frogs. It wouldn't
make any difference to me.

If anything, the bond between us in our family, which now includes Caramel, as well as Twilight, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Rarity and Pinkie Pie, has only grown stronger the last ten months those two love birds have been together.

When you love or trust a family member enough to tell them a secret, or something they feel you may not like about them that shows you how much they really mean to you.

Now even though the way I found out about them wasn’t the most... glamorous, I respect Big Mac and caramel none the less for being straight with me about it the next day atleast.

That’s another point about love, when I look at those two I don’t think that’ll ever be broken, I wonder myself if I'll ever find someone like Caramel like Big Mac did, they way they spend their days together, they way they seem inseparable, well, it reminds me of me and my friends.

You see, we never really have our fights, everything we go through, it makes our bond stronger, and I feel the same way when I look at Big Mac and caramel.

I’d like to say I learned a valuable lesson today, but they truth is, My dear brother, and my good friend Caramel, just helped me realise what was right there in front of me, that true love, trust and friendship is something that can come just once in a lifetime.

That that bond that you share with that person, is the strongest thing in Equestria. I guess you can only hope that you get your own happy ever after, just like my brother did with his special somepony.

Thank you for listening,

Applejack

The End