Revenge
By Doates
It all began on a Thursday afternoon at 3:40 when I was arriving home from my high school. I had a lot of things in my mind. I had to study for a chemistry test and a western civilizations midterm. I also need to pay my parents for my phone bill and I need to think of movie to go to with my date. Needless to say, I had a lot on my mind and I would be lying if I said I was living the life. I was just a regular teenager just trying come by. I tried to apply for a job to make money, but I keep on being turned down and colleges are now giving damn on whether or not they want me. Anyway moving on, I was ready for a full night of studying and I wasn’t ready. So I did what I usually did when I got home. I got a can of sprite and made a burrito so I can try to stay active for the long night.
Only that is as far as I got towards of having a regular day. I opened the can of sprite and placed the burrito in the microwave and waited. Then I began to smell something like sulfur. At first I thought one of the cats got sick again and I had to clean up the mess. That wasn’t the case at all. So then all the sudden a gush of wind sent a dark red flame and sent me airborne and engulfed me. Trying being 17 and all the sudden that happens to you. Yeah, you would be wetting your pants too.
I landed on my back hard on a wooden floor and not the wooden flooring in houses. I mean actual wood. After a minute I slowly got up since I hit my head really hard on the floor. I was still drowsy from the shock of the impact. When my vision cleared, that is when I almost fainted. I was standing in a barn and I saw something staring at me. That thing was a pony named Big Mac. Yep, I was one of the people that became fans of My Little Pony that called themselves bronies. At first I was scared out of my wits since I was in a television show that I liked and then I was giddy like a cheerleader. I was preparing myself to geek out all over the place. Little did I know that I entered a version of hell that I am about to re-enter.
I was stuck there for three months and yet, when I escaped, I was gone for a good twenty minutes. When I returned back home, I was filled with murderous rage. Rage because I was crapped on by a society that is shown to be peaceful. Now, I knew the world I entered was an alternate version of that show, but that doesn’t change a thing. Now it is twenty-three years later and I am ready to have my revenge.
I stood there for a good two minutes staring at Big Mac, who was doing the same thing towards me. I then got out of my trance and studied my surroundings. I was standing what was left of a haystack since it was burned possibly from me materializing in this world. I also noticed it was nighttime, so I must have either materialized in front of the pony or the transport made a flash or a sound that woke him up.
“Who are you?” asked Big Mac. I gave a jot when he asked. I had no idea on how to answer that question. Should I say my name or what species I am? If I answer with the latter, that will ask even more questions, like what is a human? I decided to go with the first one.
“My, uh, name is Fredrick.” I answered. Big Mac cocked an eyebrow at me I could tell he was suspicious of my motives and me. Can’t blame the guy. He then just turns around and goes towards theses stairs. At the bottom of them was the opening towards the barn.
“I believe that you should follow.” he said as he was walking down the stairs. I slowly followed, still grasping the fact that I was interacting with a fictional character. We left the barn and walked towards the town. Even though it was night out, it looked like everyone was up and going on with their business. Maybe there is some kind of event or celebration going on that hasn’t appeared in the show yet.
“Why is everyone up so late” I asked”
“Everypony” he said
“Pardon?”
“You said everyone, not everypony. Also, even though it appears we are up late, it is 11:00 in the morning.” He said.
Oh god, I’m stuck in the beginning of season one, where Nightmare Moon broke out of her banishment on the moon and tried to force eternal night onto Equestria. Possibly by the end of the day, everything is back to normal.
I decided to act like didn’t know that and asked Big Mac why it was like that.
“A tyrant of sorts broke free of her thousand year banishment and forced eternal night upon us. She identified herself as Nightmare Moon. The royal guards are searching for the princess to find her and free her so she can defeat the tyrant that is doing this.” he answered.
“How long has this been going on?”
“For about two and a half months.”
I tried as hard as I could of not showing a completely shocked face. The event lasted a couple hours max in the show, but here it has been going on for a few months. That is when I realized that I wasn’t in the show that I loved. I was in an alternate version of it where Nightmare Moon successfully took over Equestria. A
A part of my brain stated I should go all Rambo on her ass and save Equestria. The other part, which was the smart half, stated that I should get the hell out of here. I chose to go with the latter. Sadly that wouldn’t happen until three months from then. I think to this day on how I could have handled the situation better. I sometimes think I should have told the complete truth. I thought that I should ask for help on returning back home. Instead I inadvertently prolonged my stay here.
“Surely, there must been some kind of resistance? Someone must have stood up against her for what she has done.” Big Mac then made a painful look. It was a type of look of when someone brought up a traumatic event. Something has happened to the Mane Six.
“My sister and others went of to search for something called the Elements of Harmony. One of them stated that the Elements were used to banish Nightmare Moon, so they were going to search for them and repeat the process. They found them, but Nightmare Moon beat them to it. That is all I know so far. I haven’t heard from her so far.” he explained.
I was about to ask more questions until a black mass hit me so hard I went through the window of the nearest building. The hit knocked the wind out of me and the glass impaled my right cheek. Then the shadow came at me again, but this time, it didn’t have wings, but a horn. The horn glowed and I was suddenly floating and I pushed through the wall. There was a family of ponies inside the other room that I was thrown into and they were completely terrified. They were frozen in fear and didn’t dare move a centimeter. That was the give away of the identities of my attackers. They were Nightmare Moons royal guards.
The winged one punched through the glass and hit me across the jaw. I was still weak from the trip her and the beating I was taking was not helping anything either. I was down for the count. There was no way could fight them off.
More guards came in to hold me down so I wouldn’t fight back and escape. It took about six of them to contain me and it took them about thirty-five minutes to bring me to the royal palace. My captors dragged me into the middle of the thrown room. I got sick on the floor from the trip here.
After I was done, I looked up. Nightmare Moon was starring down at me with rage.
“Well, well, well, well, well, it looks like we have a traveler in our midst. Creature, if you speak, please, tell us your name?” she asked.
I stayed silent, staring right into her eyes. There was now way I was going to talk to her. She continued to stare back at me, as if she was literally staring into my soul.
“You know if you remain quite, it would be worse for you. I will make you speak in by means necessary.” she said to me. I was exhausted from the event that has transpired in the past hour and I was in no way in the condition to talk.
“Fine, if you insist. GUARDS! TAKE THIS CREATURE TO THE LOWER LEVELS. LEAVE HIM BE UNTIL I ARRIVE!” she ordered. I was jerked up and dragged out of the thrown room and went through a corridor the lead to an old and rusty door. Behind the door was a long staircase that leads to a dimly lit room with shackles dangling from the ceiling. The guards hooked me up with some of the shackles that were close to cemented wall. I was hung up about a good three feet from the ground wand was chained up against the wall, to prevent me from escaping.
I lost track of time, but it felt like I waiting for hours for Nightmare Moon to come down to get information from me. When she finally arrived, she was accompanied with three other ponies. Two of which I knew. They were Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie Pie. One pinkie Pies back, there was a bag that had knives poking out. Oh, shit, I thought. I am about to go through Cupcakes, aren’t I. I still regret reading that story.
The third pony I didn’t recognize at all. The pony had a complete black hide and pure white eyes, mane and tail. I couldn’t see its cutie mark, so I thought it didn’t earn it yet.
“I will give this last and final chance to talk before we begin the activities. I will assure you, if you do not tell us your name and why you are here and where you are from, you will long for death.” she threatened. I breathed in deeply to prepare for what was to come. There was no way I was going to tell her about Earth for she might try to invade it and I don’t want to imagine the hell that will break loose when that happens.
“Suit yourself. The creature is all yours, my slaves. Make it excruciating for It.” she said with a smile as she went up the stairs. A loud bang was made when she shut the door and a deafening silence followed. After a minute or so, the black unicorn looked up at me and smiled. Then its horn began to glow.
The subjects at first stopped as they heard the screams of the prisoner, but after a while they got used to it. The torturing happened day after day and week after week. Some were wondering and placed bets on how long the creature had to live. They were surprised it made past the first week. The screams always began at 9:00 in the morning and ended at 6:00 in the evening.
Some saw the Queen go down to the lower levels to participate in the torturing of the prisoner and comes back up with blood on her face smiling. Some of the maids over heard that the reason why the prisoner was still alive was because that Queen Nightmare placed a healing curse on it, so it will always heal and because of that, they did the torturing it a slowly as they possibly can.
I longed for death. I gave up my name five minutes into the torturing. I gave up where I was from twenty minutes later. Yet, the pain still continued. I later learned the reason why Twilight and Pinkie were there to participate with the torturing. They are slaves to Nightmare Moon. Cause they failed to stop her by using the Elements of Harmony, Nightmare Moon took on her self to punish them for trying to overthrow their “queen”.
Acid. Knives. Flame. Lightning. Everything was used to make my day a living hell. Whenever Moon has the time, she always comes down and sits back and relaxes and enjoys the sight of me being tortured. At some points, she even joins in and that is when it gets worse. She knew all kinds of old and forgotten magic used to torture and cause pain to others. Hell, at some points she forced Twilight and Pinkie to participate with the torture. I have never seen Pinkie so sad and traumatized in my life. To insure that I don’t die in the process of the “festivities” , Queen Moon placed a healing curse on me, so every time I get cut and burned, I will heal just as fast.
I wanted this to end. I got so desperate that I stole some of the “toys” used on me to do myself in. They always failed and Queen Moon always found out so as my punishment, I get an extra two hours of torture. By the end of the first month of my captivity, I was an utterly broken man. I became a mess of a person and I forgot the way of living. I prayed that the curse would fail and I could finally die and be rid of this hell.
I finally learned the name of the black unicorn and its name was Shadow-catcher. He enjoyed giving me pain and suffering because he was Queen Moon’s second in command. He did every single thing his queen suggested when it came to my pain.
Then came an opportunity that I took up. An opportunity that would soon lead to my freedom. When Shadow-catcher was using the acid on me, the acid hit bits of the shackles that were holding me up and it little push down would lead to my escape. So after a few minutes, Shadow-catcher moved on towards using knives. He used his magic to stab me in my stomach and chest. All I had to do is fake my death and pull my arms down and I would be free. After the fifth knife stabbed into me, I played dead.
“You have got to be kidding me. You know, if you are going to keep on dying, it is going to get worse for you.” Shadow-Catcher said disappointed with that fact his only toy has died for the millionth time. “Maybe you will wake up if I removed some of those sticks inside you?”
When he did, I pulled my arms down. The shackles shattered and I landed on my legs and collapsed. I was still in pain from the multiple hours worth of torturing I have dealt and I was about to pass out. I immediately got up and charged at Shadow-Catcher and tackled him. I started to wail on the pony and my fists were covered with his blood. He was still alive, but barely. A couple guards from outside heard the commotion and came down to investigate.
I quickly looked around for any weapons to use against them and found a mace and I grabbed it and stood next to a wall near the entrance. When the guards came down I swung the mace at the closest on in the face and grabbed the other by the strap of his helmet and threw him across the room hitting the table holding the tools used for my torment.
I then went up the steps and placed my ear against the door. I didn’t hear anything so I slowly opened the door and slowly closed it as I left. I stayed close against the walls to stay out of view and I kneeled to prevent noise from being made as I jogged through the castle. I eventually came across a room that had sign that read:
PRIVATE LIBRARY AND STUDY
I figured inside would hold the key of my way back home. I opened up the door and found more guards. We looked at each other and eventually we charged at each other. I came out victorious, but my some of my ribs were broken since one kicked me in the chest. I was proven right and found a way back home. There was this gem that can be used to go to other worlds and dimensions. It takes about three months to make, so I thought it would be done by now.
“Where is the stone located?” I asked on of the guards that were still conscious.
“In the laboratory in the fifth level.” He answered. Then I punched him the face, knocking him out.
After several skirmishes with the guards, I finally got to the laboratory. Inside was a group of scientist ponies analyzing the gem. I smacked the bloodied mace against the wall and got all of their attention. I then told all of them to get away from the stone. They did as they were told and I grabbed the stone. I turned to one of the ponies.
“Tell Queen Moon this: If I ever return to this world again, I will seek vengeance on those who have tormented me. And when we next meet, she will be mine, or I am hers.” I then pictured home and a green light engulfed me.
Twenty-three years has past since that day. I soon learned that I was gone for twenty minutes in my world’s time. I then vowed to my self that the only time I would use the gem again; it will be used to help me return to that world and make it feel the wrath of my vengeance.
Weeks went by, and I was still having nightmares of the months of my captivity. Sometimes I wake up screaming, but thankfully my parents never heard me. Eventually it got to be too much for me one time and I just grabbed a knife and stared at it. I wanted the dreams to end. I wanted closure. In the end, I dropped the knife and fell the ground crying my eyes out, not having the strength to get up.
After a few months, I eventually got over with my depression, but I still kept my vow in place. I eventually signed up to take karate and boxing classes so I can become a better fighter. I also began signing up for a gym club so I gain some muscle and I also went to the local track and jogged for an hour or two so I can become faster. In fact, because of this, I signed up for sports for the first time. I got a scholarship for track and swimming, so I didn’t need to worry about paying for college. After college, I decided to enlist into the military. I joined the Marine Corps and I was part of them for about fifteen years until I joined the FBI.
Then sadly, my parents died. In their will they entrusted me with all their belongings and the house. I visited it after the reading and found their gun collection. They kept it a secret so I don’t go psycho and cause a massacre in a public place. Can’t say I blame them.
I finally moved up from being a desk jockey to a field officer for the FBI. Then fate turned in my favor. I felt I was ready to exact my revenge on the world that tormented me and scarred me for the rest of my life.
And here I am now. I loaded some of the guns that I chose from my parent’s collection. I also took some knives and one machete. I went to my safe and pulled out the gem. I thought of the world that I needed to get to and the green light engulfed me and transported me towards it.
I chose to teleport inside the Everfree Forest, just outside of Ponyville. I looked up at the sky. It was nighttime, but that still didn’t prove on whether or not Queen Moon was still in power. I marched through threw the forest and came up tot its border. From there, I pulled out by binoculars and scanned the area. From what I have seen, there was no pony in sight. I decided to pay a visit at Twilights house, the town library to see if she was there or her assistant Spike. It took me fifteen minutes to get there since I was silently moving through the town. When I go there, I knocked on the door. There was no answer, so I knocked again. I heard footsteps, but I got my pistol ready if I had to fight.
Luckily it was Spike. At first the dragon was startled to see me, but he calmed down.
“You must be the Fredrick person that Twilight told me about.” he said.
“She told you?” I asked him.
“She told me everything that has happened to you. She even told me about the message you said to Nightmare Moon. She scared out of her mind hoping that you wouldn’t find her and hurt her.” He then stopped and glared at me wondering if I am going to hurt his adopted-mother.
“Don’t worry. I am not going to lay a finger on her or Pinkie Pie. They were innocent in the whole affair. I am going to only hurt the one named Shadow-Catch and the others that participated in my imprisonment.” I reassured the dragon. “But I do want you to send a message to Nightmare Moon. I want it to only state this: I’m back. That’s it. I hope for her sake she’ll figure out it is I. Now I got a question, could she trace it back to you?”
“Maybe” he answered.
“Then I am sorry for this.”
“What do you-” before he could finish, I hit him across the head with the handle of the pistol I was holding. I didn’t want him to go through the same things as I did. I then left the house a quickly as I could and returned back into the Everfree Forest.
After a couple days of hiding, I then traveled to the nearest city, which was Manehatten. When I arrived, I snuck through the alleys, until I saw someone familiar. I looked again to be sure. I was right. The pony that I saw was Shadow-Catcher. I could see that I left a scar on his cheek from the beating he took from me. I kept my distance away from him so he wouldn’t notice me. Now you might be asking, couldn’t the other ponies be seeing me? Good question and here’s why they couldn’t. I dressed my self in camouflage that will mask me in the night.
Anyway, as I was following Shadow-Catcher, I soon found out where he was living. I thought he would live in the castle, with his queen, but he lives in some suite at the top of some apartment complex. I see him go into the building and I soon follow.
Seven Days Earlier
I sat in my desk going through ever possible outcome should I proceed with my vow. Ever time I reach towards Nightmare Moon; it ends with my death or downfall. Regardless if I win the showdown, I would be too weak and injured to return home. If I do follow through with this, I must be prepared of the fact that I will never return from Equestria.
I decided to go through the back door the led towards the basement of the building. I soon went through the vitalization shafts that led to the elevators. I broke into one and pressed the button that led to floor where the suits are located. As the elevator went up, I made sure that I was fully equipped for the coming battle.
The elevator stopped and opened its doors. The hallway following was vast and huge. Luckily for me, all the suites had the residents name on it. At the end of the hall was Shadow-Catchers. I pulled out the pistol and turned off the safety and cocked it. When I got to the door, I knocked on it.
“GO AWAY!” yelled Shadow-Catcher, having no idea I was there. So just to annoy him, I knocked again. He yelled again for me to go away. I knocked again, for a third time.
He then opened up the door.
“How many times do I have to tell you?! GO AWAY!” he yelled. Immediately after that he saw whom he was talking to. He looked absolutely terrified.
“Room service.” I said. He then slammed the door on me. In response I kicked it down and ran in and began to open fire. He ducked behind a couch and used it as cover. Feathers were flying everywhere and the glass of windows and sculptures scattered.
“Took you while to come back. What took you” he asked, still hiding behind the couch. I hid behind a column waiting for his next move.
“If I am to return here and essentially wage war with you, might as well come prepared.” I answered. “O b thee way, how is your nose?”
He got pissed and began firing sparks of fire at me. I had to run and hid in the kitchen because the volley of fire destroyed the column. As I ran toward the kitchen I continued to shoot at the unicorn. He got a lucky shot on my shoulder, but it wasn’t to serious at the time. I ducked behind a counter and checked my ammo. I had about six bullets left. Its time to make them count.
I guess Shadow-Catcher figured I would hide in the kitchen, so he rapid fired at the kitchen sending glass all over me. A large piece cut the lower part of my right arm, but no matter. I got up and fired three bullets at the couch. Then there was silence. I slowly walked towards it still aiming the gun at the couch. When I got there, I looked over the couch and found Shadow-Catcher bleeding. I shot him in the right hind leg and twice in the right side of his stomach. I walked over the couch and aimed the gun right at him. Him and me stared at each other and he grinned and closed his eyes. I pulled the trigger.
I got out of the building the same way I entered. I looked outside and saw royal guards standing outside of the building. I guess the other guests heard the battle and called the police and I only had a few seconds to escape. When I go went down through to the basement, I found more guards. I reloaded the pistol, leaving me with two more rounds, and sneaked around them.
Of coarse they saw me, so I charged at them. I used the butt of the gun as a weapon and I soon knocked them out. I got out as quickly as I could in case someone heard the scuffle. When I got out of the building, I disappeared into the night.
The next day, I took a thrown out copy of the Equestria Daily and read the headlines. Looks like I made the front page. From what was said on the report, the doctors analyzed the body of Shadow-Catcher and found the bullets that I placed into him and they have no idea what could have caused them to go in. The shell casings confused them more since from it looks like bullets haven’t even been invented. The report also stated that the queen has put a five million-bit reward for my capture. I ripped out the report and pulled out a pen that I took from Spike and wrote: “Bring it” and dropped it in the mail fire that led straight to the castle. I then walked away and began my journey towards Canterlot.
The journey there was extremely long. I couldn’t track time because of the eternal night issue. From what my brain thought, I arrived at the mountain the city rests on about five hours into the trip. I began to set up camp and ate a granola bar for dinner. I refused to set up a fire because I would be found and captured. Before I went to sleep, I looked up towards the castle.
Soon, I thought. Soon I will seek my revenge.
Once I woke I tore down the camp and began my journey up the mountain. It was a painful one and once I was halfway up, my fingers were splintered and bleeding a lot, so I had to bandage them up to stop the bleeding and I did the same to the my arm so it won’t get infected. It was in the afternoon when I finally got on to the city.
I saw guards standing at every single entrance towards the city, searching everypony that entered and exited the city. Then I noticed an entrance that they weren’t protecting. The sewer system. I got up to the bars and as strong as I could I ripped them out. I got in and crawled through the pipeline. I was finally able to walk on the side of the tunnel and looked up to see if it was safe for me to head to the surface.
I was about to climb up a ladder that will lead me you an alleyway, but I heard a sound. I turned my head and sparks of lightning came at me. I jumped into the water to avoid being hit and the stone exploded when the lightning hit it. I swam to the other side and ducked for cover. I decided that the pistol wouldn’t help so I pulled out the Uzi that was deeply hidden inside the collection. When I found the gun collection and its inhabitants, I wondered why the police didn’t raise any eyebrows when this stuff was purchased.
I loaded the gun and began to rapid fire across the tunnel, hoping that I hit my attacker or attackers. I soon learn there is more than one when more sparks were fired at me. Who the hell are these guys!, I thought. Then I saw one come charging at me and punched me square in the jaw. I recognized the pony that hit me.
“THE WONDERBOLTS! THE FUCKING WONDERBOLTS ARE ATTACKING ME! THIS JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER!” I yelled angrily. I began shooting and my attacker while still dodging the cover fire of the other ponies. “Wait a minute. I thought you guys are pegasus’ not unicorns. How the hell are you shooting me?”
“Okay first of all, we are the Shadowbolts. The Wonderbolts were killed like the scum they are. Second, We are the unicorn division of the Shadowbolts. The pegasi ones are out Cloudsdale. Now quit talking and fight.” And after that the Shadowbolt shot square in the chest burning me. I went flying into the water and began swimming with the current to get away from the unicorn. From the sound its voice, I guess it was a mare.
I guess she saw because she lounged right at me so I had no choice but to fire at her. She went down into the water and didn’t move. I got out of the water and began to jog around the sewers to avoid her companions. Then I felt a low rumbling and humming that was getting louder and louder. I turn around to look at the direction from where the sound was coming from.
“Oh, shit.” I said before the pulse hit me with full force that sent me across the tunnel and hitting my back hard again the wall. I got back on my feet and reloaded the Uzi. I raised the gun and opened fire. I had to get out of the sewers for my safety. I was fighting a lost battle against these things. I saw a ladder nearby and climbed up as fast as I could. I got up to the surface and ran across the street to get into the alleyway. Some of the nobles saw, me I didn’t care. I had to get away from the Shadowbolts as quickly as possible. I guess Nightmare Moon decided to make them into an organization formed by the best fighters.
I peeked my head out of the alley and saw that I was only a few blocks away from the castle itself. A couple blocks away lies the one that kept me prisoner here and my life hell. I decided to remove some of the weight that was holding me down. I got rid of the med kit, some knives, the bottles of gin that I was planning to use as Molotov cocktails and the rifle. All I had left was the remaining ammo for the pistol and Uzi, a two rounds of ammo for the shotgun, the machete and an army knife. I breathed in and cocked the shotgun and ran towards the castle.
“So, our guest from the other world has come back to seek a little vengeance upon us?” asked the current ruler of Equestria. She was acting like it was no big deal the fact the person that she tortured for months has came back to kill her. “Let him come. I want to ho he has changed and the look on his face when I snuff him out.”
“Yes, your majesty. How do should I handle the guards that are in the castle?” asked the head of the royal guard.
“Call back all guards that are in the city and set up a perimeter around the castle. I want to see if he is worthy enough to do battle with us” The guard was about to speak until loud bangs were heard within the castle.
“He’s here”
For a group of guards meant to protect their ruler, they really sucked at it. The guards from outside entrance of the castle were dealt with very easily and the ones inside were even easier. I had to shells still inside my shotgun and I turned around and saw the pegasus guards were coming down towards me and the rest of the Shadowbolts were running past the outside entrance. I fired the remaining shells at the Shadowbolts and reloaded the Uzi and fired at the winged guards. Some of the guards went down and others were forced to land to avoid the shower of bullets. I was finally out of ammo completely. I hid behind a column while the outside forces began to return fire. Flames started to spread and other columns and windows were shattering.
I was bleeding from the forehead and burned on my chest. Not to forget my hands have been cut by the climb up the mountain towards the castle and the burn and cut on my shoulder and arm from my fight with Shadow-Catcher. I felt beaten, but I couldn’t stop now. Just a few yards away laid the one that I had to kill to end my vengeance. I was happy that I was forced to use the remaining knives and the machete. It will feel more personal.
When I entered the ballroom, I looked up and saw Nightmare Moon standing above me on a balcony, storing down upon me. She smiled at me.
“I see you have made it this far, but are you going to be able to defeat me in combat. I am not going to give up my throne that easily, you know.” she taunted.
“Who said I wanted to take the throne. All I want is to end you and I will be on my merry way.” I answered.
“Yes, but somepony will and I am not going to let that happen.” she said as she flew down to my level. The moment she touched land, she used her magic to sending airborne and smashed me sideways into a glass sculpture. Glass punctured my back, so I couldn’t lie on my back so they won’t go in all the way. I pulled out a long knife and got on my feet.
“PSH! What are you going to do with that?!” she asked. I smiled.
“This.” And so I threw the knife and I went right into her chest. “Bull’s-eye” She snarled and telekinetically pulled out the knife and dropped it to the ground. She then gave a devilish grin at me. Then at full force, she threw me at the wall behind her. The impact broke my nose and shattered my left cheekbone. When I fell on my stomach, the other cheekbone shattered.
I raised my head and saw beam of light hit me in the right eye. Blood and white puss came pouring out. I tried not to think of the pain, but I was semiconscious from the beating I am receiving. My legs were wobbling as I got up.
“Thanks.” I said. “I think you fixed my face to look pretty now.” This only angered her more and she charged at me. I pulled out my machete ready to cut her down, but she did something unexpected. At first I saw a light flash from her horn a light blue light consumed her and she was gone. The very second she disappeared her horn jerked me up and went right through my chest. I vomited out blood. The horn was going threw one of my longs. I had only moments to live.
She unsheathed her horn and I went straight down. I was coughing out blood. She walked over my body and began to chuckle.
“My, my. You are weak. You should stayed in that small and pitiful place you call a world. You would have lived longer. Now you are going to die. I could let you live, knowing you, you would escape and try this again. Any last words?” She was taunting me. She wanted to kill me faster. I obliged. I grabbed the machete and stabbed right into her stomach and twisted the blade. She gave off a yelp and I let go. Her front legs went to their knees, with the blade still inside. I gave a gurgled chuckle. My vision began to fog up.
I knew that I was never going to walk of into the sunset.
….
I knew all along
My….. revenge…. is finally… over.
My Little Pony is owned by Hasbro and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic and characters are owned and created by Lauren Faust.
The story and original characters are owned by I, doates.
