Well I will try to keep this pretty short. This is an intro to my story and how I will be doing it.
The story is already 100% completed. I even have a sequel which I actually wrote first. The reason why I wrote this is because I have had a lot of idea and lines in my sequel that I later thought up reasons for. These floated wround in my head for a while until it got annoying I thought "I should just write it all down". I thought the story wouldn't hit no more than 20 or so pages. I was surprised when I hit 14 chapters and 82 pages.
This is a story about my OCs that came about during the whole "Cupcakes" deal. I had never planned to make OCs or anything like I just i was just messing around one day. I started thinking and made some jokes like "heh if you would split pinkie in to two personalities and give each one some logic this story would have been way better". I evenutally thought how good of an idea that could be. It continued on through the months and next thing I knew I had a story and some pretty well developed characters.
"Why aren't I uploading the whole story if it is completed?"
well I suck is the main reason. I have tried the videos and on whim and thought that with my level I wouldn't get any responses on my videos. To my surprise I got a few responses and even 1 subscriber. I went into making videos on a lottery style of thinking. Basically you want to win the million dollars (get on EQD or whatever), but for the most part I would have been happy just to get a 100$ (100 views). Well I got neither I basically broke even with the one sub. I am going into this on the same level. I want to win the one million (get a story that could be on par with other famous stories), but I will be happy enough if I can just get win 100$ or even 30$ (get a bunch of likes basically even if I don't get fame). If I break even that would be cool to (only get a couple of people that like my story).
I am only uploading the first two chapters and depending on the responses I get will depend if I continue uploading the whole or not. So here I go playing the lottery hoping for the best, but if break even whatever then. what ever happens happens
Chapter 1: They met and there was love...
He came from a big family, but they mostly kept to themselves though. He was by himself most of the time which didn't bother him. What did bother him though was the tired feeling he was getting from the hustle and hassle of living in the big city of Manehattan. He was a construction unicorn pony who wanted to work in a smaller quieter town. He decided to leave and head for Ponyville. Once there he was make a new life for himself while enjoying the quietness of the smaller town. He was going to be perfect. He packed up all of his belongings and got the train. He was ready for his new life and any new experience that would come his way.
She lived by herself. She had family, but they were mostly spread out in various parts of Equestria. She saw her family every once in awhile, but never all at once. She felt alone in her home city of Fillydelphia and it was so always so busy. She was an earth pony that was calm and mellow most of the time. The ponies in her city though were not. The ponies of Fillydelphia were always moving and always going. They never seemed to want to stop and take a breath of fresh air. All of their constant motion was making her extremely stressed out which added to her loneliness made her feel miserable. She didn't like being stressed or being alone. She especially didn't like the misery. She wanted some place smaller and quieter. A place close to the open fields and with more forest around. She decided to make a change, a decision. She got a map at the store and took a look at that it. It didn't take long for her pick a place. Ponyville looked like it had everything she wanted and it was then she decided to make her move. She didn't have much, but what she did have she put into her small saddlebag and made her way to the train station. She got a ticket and was off. She was glad to leave Filly. It was her home for most of her life, but it never felt like home. She had a feeling though that Ponyville would not only be her perfect new home, but would also feel like home. She already started to feel like she was heading home.
It was close to summer and the days were getting warmer, but Ponyville still had pretty nice weather. The train entered the station and ponies of all kinds and from various origins got off. Somewhere there to visit, others were there certain reasons, and some were there to make a new life and living. There were many reasons why ponies were there. He got off the train and took a in a deep breath of fresh Ponyville air. It was nice, very nice. He felt calm and eager. He left the station and decided to take look around. He wanted to know about the place he was going to be living in. He wanted to know every nook and cranny, so that way he would never get lost.
She felt the train slowly come to a stop. The whistle blew and she knew she had arrived at her destination. She made her way towards the exit. She passed many ponies there also looked like they were getting off the train. She took her first step on the ground of Ponyville and it was like all of the stress she always felt from her old home was completely washed away. Relief was what she felt now and she liked it. She knew from the beginning she had made the right decision and now as she stood there in the train station with her saddle bag she was happy. She didn't know what she was going to do from there though. She looked around wondering if she should ask for help. She thought about it for a bit before the whistle blew waking her up from her thought. She didn't want to look weird or foolish, so she decided that she would wander around and hope that she could figure something out while looking for a place to stay. It was a nice day out and she was enjoying her new surroundings. She took in all of the new sights and sounds. She came to a small cafe and ordered some food. She decided to eat outside since it was such a nice day. She paid for a meal and went back to basically exploring. The time seemed to go by slow, but daylight was becoming night. She found a small motel to stay for the night. After she got some rest for the night she would continue her exploration and try to come up with a plan for her new life.
After a day of checking out his new town he felt like he knew it quite well, but there were still some twist and turns that seemed to confuse him. He would learn them though. He found a place to stay for the night and got some food and rest. Tomorrow he would head to the construction site he saw earlier and get on with those ponies so he start working again.
She never thought it would be this hard. She sat on her haunches. She felt a bit lost. She wanted to continue on, but she couldn't come up with a good plan. She got up and started to wonder again. She was probably getting herself more lost, but she what else could she do. Should she ask around? Should ask for help? She wasn't a very talkative pony. It wasn't that she was shy or anything, but talking to strange ponies just seemed weird. She was walking through a farmers market. Ponies were all selling their foods and goods. She went behind some tents and sat again.
"maybe this wasn't such a great idea..." she said to herself.
Just then a unicorn also came behind the tents. He had a hard hat for a cutie mark and a orange coat with deep blue mane. He was just sort of looking around like he was lost. He then saw her there. He looked at her for a second. She was grayish blue earth mare with 3 color tone mane and a tree with some flowers on it for a cutie mark. He could tell she need some help, so he asked her if she was new. She nodded. He also being new thought this was great.
"Well maybe we can help each other out then. I am trying to find something places still. Want to find it together?" He asked her hopefully.
She got up and was surprised by his offer, but still not having figured out a plan thought this would be good. They left together and loved started to form between them as this became their first date. Time went by and they went from ponies in love to husband and wife. They got married and made a small house just outside of Ponyville. They choose to live outside of Ponyville because they like the space. The only neighbors around we some rock farmers some ways away. He didn't mind traveling the distance to get to his work in Ponyville and she also didn't mind the distance when she need to get supplies from Ponyville. They were just far enough and it was perfect for the both of them. She finally achieved her goal of not being alone and he now had a love that was now waiting for him every time he came home. They were both really happy.
Author's Note
This and the next chapter are basically just little intros to the main story
It had been a while now about a year and a half. Their lives had been quite peaceful and happy. Now though as he paced back in forth in the Ponyville hospital it was all about to change. He was nervous. He kept looking at the clock on the wall. Only two minutes had passed since he had last looked at the clock. Every seconded felt like days. He looked towards the doors. Nothing. His mare was due any time now. He knew he needed to get a grip, so he tried to calm his self down. He knew that if he could get his mind off the clock the news of his new foal would be there before he knew it.
He decided to occupy his mind with thoughts about his new foal. He started to wonder what it would be. A filly or a colt. If he got a colt he was hoping that maybe he would be able to join him in the construction. If he got a unicorn like him maybe it would be a good magic user. There was of course a chance it would be a earth pony like his mom. Then he started to wonder what it would be like if he got a filly. She would be cute. It would be great if she could be a construction pony like him as well. If she turned out to be a good magic user he might be able to get her into Canterlot and into magic kindergarten. He didn't care though, he would love his new foal no matter what. He would raise it right and be there as much as possible to watch every new experience he or she would go through. The thinking passed the time, but not enough. He looked at the clock again, and fifteen minutes had passed now. He wanted to see his new foal so much. He wanted hold his foal and play with his foal. He had been waiting so long since they day his wife told him she was expecting. Now the time was here, but his foal was not. It was like he or she was already playing with him. A game to see how long he would last before the foal ran out and yelled "Surprise!".
The door suddenly opened. He looked at excitedly expecting a the nurse pony to give him the news. He was about to gallop towards it when he saw it was only a pony cleaning the floor. The waiting game continued. He looked at a magazine. If he reads something maybe that will be enough. He sat on stool in the waiting room and looked at the reading material that was on a table. Most of it was old stuff from months and even years ago. A new looking magazine glowed in as he choose to see what, if anything, it had to could keep his interest and pass the time. He turned the pages and did not see anything interesting. He mainly looked at the pictures and just skimmed through the articles. The wasted another five minutes. He decided to that with all of the reading material even the little pamphlets that were in the stand. He had just about finished reading pamphlet called "Taking care of your feathers for Pegasus" when the door opened again. This time it was the nurse and she looked at him. He didn't have to wait for her to say a word he already knew what she was going to say as he got up and trotted to her as she lead him to his new family.
"There they are sir, your new twin fillies." said the nurse pony.
He looked at them and was happy a brand new fill...
"TWINS!?!?!?!" he exclaimed!
The nurse shook her head.
He couldn't believe it never in his wildest dreams did he ever image having twin fillies. He was ready for a new foal, but the news of twins put his mind into overdrive. A huge smile came across his face. He was just so happy now. He made sure it was okay first before he went to see his mare. She was resting in the hospital room. She was awake, but very tired looking. This was to be expected of course after just giving birth to twins. He went up to her and nuzzled her. She smiled back at him. They were both tired but the birth of their new foals was giving them enough energy to keep them from falling asleep right there.
They both took more after their mom than their dad since they were both earth ponies. She and him both had ideas on what to name their new foals, but neither of them like the names they came up with. He finally decided to combine some of her ideas with his. He gave the fillies the names of Summer Song and Whirly Sprinkles. She like them and agreed. Summer Song had a dark blue coat and a two-tone green mane and tail. Her eyes were about the same shade of blue as her coat. Whirly Sprinkles had a grey coat and a two-tone purple mane. Her eyes were a deep shade of red. It was a uncommon eye color, but they are what made her special. The parents learned quickly their fillies likes and wants. Summer Song leaned toward her mom more. Every time she cried her father couldn't quiet her down, but as soon as her mom came around she would stop. It was vice-versa with Whirly Sprinkles though. Her mom couldn't quiet her down, but as soon as her father came around she would stop her fuss or crying. She was clearly a daddies filly. The sister also seemed to bond with each other from the start. They always were together. Whenever played or got into trouble you could always find them together. Whirly Sprinkles seemed to almost watch her sister like a protector.
The days turned into months and the sister grew up fast. They learned took their first steps, and learned their first words pretty quickly. Summer Song's first word was mommy while Whirly Sprinkles's was daddy. The parents saw that coming. The fillies grew up seemingly quickly and before long they were almost ready for school
Author's Note
The story pretty starts from here. The rating are for in the later chapters.
