Fluttering Heat

by poizenjoke

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Fluttershy, Sex
Length: 2238

Lost in the Everfree forest, our adventurer wakes up as a colt and stumbles upon a Fluttershy in heat...

A story about how our adventurer suddenly wakes up as a colt in the middle of the Everfree forest, is unfortunate enough to fall into a patch of poison jokes, panics and eventually is found by Fluttershy, who then decided to take advantage of him and has some fun in the forest.

This is my first story/clopfic ever written and it written entirely in second person. Criticism is more than welcome. English is not my first language, so I may have made some mistakes here and there. If you stumble upon a typo or grammatical error, please do tell me, so I can correct it and improve the quality of my work.

Published 2013-08-14 20:10:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-08-14 20:10:02 UTC

Chapter 1

After what seemed to be an endless night, you are finally starting to wake up on your belly to the scent of grass and a gentle breeze tickling your body. You yawn, stretch and feel odd. As you slowly open your eyes, vague thoughts shoot through your mind as it suddenly hits you that you are no longer in your room. Your eyes open up in a split second as the feeling of being lost overwhelms you. You are silently and blankly staring at what seems to be a forest and in front of you. As far as your vision goes, you only see grass, trees, bushes and veins. In front of you, two pony legs are extended forward, resting on the grass, covered by a pleasant shade of medium blue fur. As you try to crawl up, the legs move. Shock and a feint sense of joy go through your mind. "These... are mine..?"

You try to coordinate your new body, first by attempting to lift yourself and stand on your four new legs in an unbalanced manner, and decide to try stand on your hind legs. You swiftly swoop your body up and backwards, falling back into a path of flowers before you realize what is even going on.

As you gaze into a small hole between the foliage of the trees, it suddenly hits you. You have woken up as a pony and you are located in the Everfree forest. Even more so, you have just fallen into a patch of poison joke flowers.

Fear and panic well up in you as you roll over, get up and remove yourself from the patch infamous flowers as soon as possible. In your struggle to move your body, you accidentally land with your face right on the flower petals of a poison joke. The flower has an odd taste, a combination of sweet, sour and bitter. Immediately your tongue tingles like it's slowly being zapped by electricity, nearly not hurting but still being a very unpleasant feeling. You quickly get up and you feel your tongue filling the cavity of your mouth, your tongue swelling up to many times its normal size. It doesn't take long before your tongue forces your jaw open and hangs out of your mouth. You try to scream for help, but there is no sign of life to be observed anywhere around you. All that comes out is a muffled "hmmpfh".

In panic, you attempt to run into the direction you are facing, first trying to do a small step forward while maintaining your balance. As you carefully move your hooves forward, step by step, you get the hang of walking ahead and attempt to gallop. Raising your knees up a bit more with each step, you quickly understand the technique of galloping and attempt to run. You run forward, faster each second, past and through the trees and foliage surround you, not hesitating for a single second.

After what seems to be forever, exhaustion hits you like a brick and you forget to lift one of your hooves properly. You fall over as your hoof gets stuck behind a tree root, you roll over several times as you are suddenly blinded by bright light. Gasping for breath, you slowly attempt to open your eyes, giving them time to adjust to the harsh light of the sun.

A gentle breeze yet again blows itself through your fur, giving you a pleasant little cooldown from the running you have just done, as you finally open your eyes and can observe your surroundings. Just in front of you is a dirt path and in the distance, you see hills everywhere.

"Uhm... excuse me... hello?", a soft voice out of nowhere completely caught you off guard and you hastily look around as of where the voice came from.

"Uh, I-I'm right here..." You look to your right and see four yellow hooves right next to you, and what seems to be a pink, wavy and somewhat frizzled mane. You look up and stare into a face with a cute snout, two blue eyes and a long, yet somewhat messy pink mane. You are staring into the face of a rather worried and confused looking Fluttershy.

"Oh my goodness! Your tongue... are you alright?" she utters nervously. "I've never seen you before... p-please, follow me..." as the raises her wings for no reason.

You know Fluttershy longer than today. Why would she randomly ask someone to follow her, if she is usually too scared and anxious to look someone in the eyes or tell her name? Something about this is seems fishy...

Still exhausted from the marathon through the Everfree forest (thank Celestia you got out of there), you crawl up and follow Fluttershy as the walks right back into the edge of the forest.

She walks on for a little while, suddenly stops and turns around. In her eyes, you can see desperation and frustration as she breaks down out of nowhere and starts crying.

"Please..." she whimpers, "help me. I-I..."

"Mmph?" you mumble, forgetting you are unable to speak.

"Please... forgive me for asking this... but..." she cries out, followed by another moment of her sniveling before she decided to speak again.

"Could you... please... use your t-tongue... to... lick me..?" she whimpers, then immediately backing off and turning her head sideways with another cute but barely audible whimper.

"I beg you... y-you see, I'm in heat and I can't take it!" she almost yells at you. "I'm going mad... I don't want to lose control over myself and hurt anybody..."

This is a dream. You can't believe it. Not only did you wake up as a pony, but you are also asked to lick her junk for her? Almost too good to be true.

With her wings still up in the air, she turns around, her smooth, delicate flank facing towards you. The moment of truth. She still hesitates for a moment, but then lifts her tail, exposing her private domain just for you to caress.

"I don't have any diseases or anything... no... please rub your tongue all over it, from bottom to top, like a lollipop! It burns! Lick me dry, now!" she almost commands with a rather dominant sounding undertone. You obey without question and slowly walk towards her, as you gaze at her delicious looking pussy and adorable little asshole. She is almost dripping and you could swear you could smell her from where you stand.

"Don't just stand there, please do it now! Just once or twice!" she says, as she lifts it up in your face and brings her front body down to the ground, resting on it.

You move your tongue out of your mouth a little bit more and reach for her hind, following her instructions and making contact with your enormous swollen tongue between her thighs first, the slowly bring your face towards her tail as your tongue finds its way to her wet dripping horse pussy. With your tongue covering at least half of both her ass cheeks, you can taste first drips of her warm and sweet juice on your tongue.

As you slide your tongue upwards some more, you notice you have more grip on her as you had expected, slightly lifting her up as you can head a clearly audible "eeep!" coming from the other end. She tastes so good, you can't ever remember a human being this delicious to taste.

As your tongue finds its way further upwards, you lift her a few inches more from the ground, as you can clearly hear and feel her breathe heavily in pure lust and arousal. By now, she is fully embracing your tongue and even accidentally ticking your tongue by winking. Sweet juice is dripping from your tongue. This is the last drop for you and you are as turned on as you have never been before in your entire life.

Continuing sliding upwards, she accidentally winks once more, the tip of your tongue slipping in between her inner lips a little bit. It feels so warm and heavenly, you could swear you feel her throbbing with desire. One final move and you slowly finish by gentle sliding up some more, releasing Fluttershy from your grip as she slides down your tongue, landing on her hooves.

With her sweet juice all over your tongue, you slowly back off while you can hear Fluttershy moaning. She lets out a quiet yell, as she throws her plot into the air even more.

"Fuck me right here and now! That didn't help! Your swollen tongue felt too good!"

And that very moment, you become aware of the rock-hard throbbing member between your legs that seemed to have appeared out of nowhere. At this very moment, your desires are one, and you get lost in the moment as you blankly stare at her winking pussy only a few inches away from your face.

"In Celestia's name, do it now!" she commands, as she is even subtly moving up and down with her flank, only inches away from your face. You follow her order and move your body forward, throw yourself chest onto her body and lock your target.

After a couple small steps, you can feel your cock making contact with her lips, as she continues to wink and slightly bounce with her hips. She's so warm already, and you're not even inside of her yet.

She opens up for you, ready to receive you as you thrust forward a bit, but you find yourself to not be able to penetrate her because she is too tight. You try and give it an extra push, to which Fluttershy lets out a tensed sounding moan.

"Oh... pardon... it seems I'm too tensed up... excuse me..." she almost mutters to herself, as the sighs and you feel her insides widening up. You immediately feel yourself slowly sliding in, and you thrust forward to penetrate her wet pussy. As you feel yourself enter her, she tenses up even worse than before, her moist and heavenly insides covering every single inch of your cock, as you can feel her wet lips wrapped around your shaft. You're half-way in now. The sensation is so overwhelming, both of you gasp and start to breathe heavily.

You step forward a little more, resting yourself more on Fluttershy, as you completely enter her. Fluttershy is gasping for air out pure joy and looks like she has to help herself from going completely nuts. It seems that every little bit of your cock exactly fits inside of her.

"Ohh yes! Your dick feels just perfect!" she says, subtly rocking back and forth with her body. You follow her lead, thrust backwards and slam into her cutesy little flank. She lets out of a moan of pure joy and you can feel her insides throbbing more rapidly as the two of you are synchronized and in rhythm. Followed by another thrust, another and many more, you speed up and every thrust feels like you are already having an orgasm because of how rapidly she is throbbing inside.

Now Fluttershy completely tenses up and nearly screams in euphoria as you feel warm goodness coming all over your bottom belly, thighs, cock and balls, as she demonstrates what an amazing squirter she secretly is. You become completely lost in pure pleasure as you increase in tempo even more and keep going on and on. She comes again and again, proving her talent again and again, as you both become soaking wet in sweat and desire.

And then you feel it coming up. You didn't expect to last so long as a colt, since they are known to finish in a matter of minutes. But you didn't. You go completely mad, clench your teeth and repeatedly slam into her harder every time. She now cums again and actually lets out a scream that can probably be heard through all of the Everfree forest, tightening up once more but so much more than all the other times. It is as if your minds and bodies are one.

You thrust into her one more time as she now completely milks you dry. "Ohh yesss!" she lets out in pure pleasure, as you fill her up completely and are yet again soaked by her. The euphoria is unbearable as you heavily pant and put your front legs around her, holding her tight. It is as if there is no end to this moment, you have never experienced an orgasm this long and intense before. You just keep filling her up and she does not stop milking you. The ecstasy is unmatched by anything you have ever done.

Finally, it begins to stop. Both of you gasping for air once more again, Fluttershy stops moving as you decide to retreat because of how sensitive you have become. After you finally get out of her, you collapse onto the ground, completely broken by the deed. Fluttershy comes lay down to you and gentle kisses you on your lips, after which you put your hoof behind her head and make out with her with pure passion for minutes to come.

She stares you in the eyes with a satisfied look as she puts her arm over your neck. You gentle stroke her perfect mane as you fall asleep, cuddled against eachother.