Sweetie Belle:Escape from the haunted lair

by Twigal2003pony

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Dark
Length: 2142

Sweetie Belle is held captive by a stallion in a black cloak along with her friends ,will she make it out alive?

For Halloween the Cutie Mark Crusaders go for free cutie marks. It is actually a foal killer's trap and they are held captive. Scootaloo and Applebloom give up and accept their fate but Sweetie Belle stays hopeful. Using some magic she undoes the bounding and hops out. She starts to untie her friends but the Killer comes in and Sweetie Belle saves herself. Will any of them make it out alive? Will they unveil the Killer? Only one way to discover how.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-08-17 17:27:55 UTC

The Hidden Lair

Inside the truck Sweetie Belle saw Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara, she was puzzled at first but then realized they were blank flanks. Before the white unicorn could ask what happened the back opened. The foals looked out and realized it was a trap immediately, they tried to escape through the front but a vacuum appeared. They were all sucked in one by one starting with Pipsqueak. Sweetie Belle and Applebloom were the last to be sucked in, Sweetie Belle got her hoove stuck and sat there until the suction was upped and she was sucked in screaming. The foals were pounding the glass on wheels screaming for help but nopony heard them. They were pulled in kicking and screaming in hope of rescue on their way into the warehouse. They were tied up and thrown against a way when a figure appeared cloaked in black walked towards them. The figure pulled out a knife and flipped back his hood. It was a brown colored stallion with blonde colored hair His eyes were ruby red and his coat drenched with blood, The foals looked up to see a stump where his horn should be, Upon this sight the foals screamed except Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle.

"If Rainbow Dash were here she'd rip your throat out you..." Scootaloo said before the Stallion put a gentle hoove to her mouth to hush her "Hush little filly hush Rainbow Dash isn't here and when she does come it'll be too late." Said the hornless unicorn.

"HELP HELP HE'LL EAT MY BOTTOM HELP." Shouted Pipsqueak.

"QUIET OR I'LL SLICE OUT YOUR TOUNGE AND YOU'LL NEVER BE ABLE TO SPEAK AGAIN!" Yelled the Stallion putting his blade to Pips throat which silenced him.

"Now, I'll be killing you one by one today for fun, I simply love hearing the screams of small foals." Said the psychotic stallion.

The stallion put a knife to a fillies throat everyone reconized as Twist. He chained her down and went over to her cutie mark and cut around it causing her to scream. He pulled it off with a curved blade and then made a cut across her shoulder blades and another across her hips. He made a cut connecting the two and opened the flaps and gazed on her organs. Giving her organs a poke he ripped out her intestines and threw them on the floor as he tore out her kidneys and fed her them. The acid flew out of her stomach into the gap that was her lower body. He pulled out her pancreas and ate it and then yanked out all her organs which killed her. He threw her dead body and hung her by her own intestines along with 12 other foals.

"CANNIBAL" yelled out Pipsqueak.

"SADIST" screamed Silver Spoon.

"MURDERER" cried Applebloom.

"KILLER" screeched Scootaloo.

"YOU MONSTER" shrieked Diamond Tiara.

"STOP IT STOP IT HE'LL JUST WANT TO KILL YOU MORE IF YOU SCREAM AT HIM!" Sweetie Belle loudly announced quieting every pony else.the killer yawned and walked over to his bed that night.

In the night almost everypony was asleep except Sweetie Belle who was thinking of an escape plot. She thought of a levatating spell but kept remembering she couldn't use magic, she still thought to try it out. She finally focused all her attention towards her horn and undid the lock but was incredibly tired out and took a quick nap but woke up an hour later. She used her horn to cut the ropes and escape before freeing her fellow crusaders and using the intestines to write "ESCAPE NOW" before they were awoken by a sublimal message in their dream. Sweetie Belle ran out of the room with a heavy hope the other foals would follow.

The Epilogue

The corpses of the foals were found and Twilight stitched them back, replacing the removed organs with artificial ones. After she brought them back to life with electricity they returned to their families. Lyra took care of her Daughter Tootsie Flute with her husband Noteworthy and best friend Bon Bon. The killer was executed by being gutted as he died as soon as his lungs were removed and before they cut out his heart. The crusaders went back to crusading and eventually got their marks. Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon had their cutie marks earned back. Pipsqueak went back to playing and they all had a great time trick or treating.

FIN

A Halloween Party

On a warm October day the Cutie Mark Crusaders went of to the Halloween fair. They discussed ideas for earning their Cutie Marks while outside of a haunted house, they had pumpkin carving, pie eating, hay tossing, wood painting, plastic molders and apple sellers. Some that didn't get out of the first phase were Halloween probe launching, (By Applebloom, that was deemed to difficult by Sweetie Belle.) Pumpkin recipes, (By Sweetie Belle, Applebloom said it "Could offend Scootaloo.) Firework makers, (By Scootaloo, Called as too dangerous by Sweetie belle.).During pumpkin carving Scootaloo got the tip of her hoof cut and Applebloom got her own hoof stabbed through. After one hour of treating the wounds they tried pie eating, Sweetie Belle was allergic to the pecans and Scootaloo choked on them so Applebloom ended up eating three pies and getting a really big belly and terrible stomach ache afterwards. They next tried hay tossing but ran out with no cutie marks and very itchy. They tried wood painting and plastic molding but got very sticky and covered in paint. They cleaned up and tried selling apple confections but to no avail. Finally the trio of fillies sat and cried.

"At least we had some fun in our attempt!" Stated Sweetie Belle merrily. Scootaloo agreed but Applebloom just sighed.

"We'll never get our Cutie Marks girls, lets stop and get them tattooed on so no one knows our failure." Said a teary eyed Applebloom.She walked off sadly. "Well, maybe we should go to the haunted house a li'l bit though."

"That's a brilliant idea Applebloom!" Scootaloo blurted out happily. "Maybe we'll find our cutie marks there."

The fillies walked into the haunted house and saw many things. Blood covered ponies hanging from the ceiling, bloody organs on the floor and eyeballs on bloody dressers,tables and saws. There was a stallion in a detective coat enjoying a blood margarita and intestine spaghetti. They were frightened by this although they were told by a elderly mare behind her that it was all fake.Eventually the trio was strapped into a metal plate with orange straps of pig leather.A mare in a cloak pulled a lever and it moved slowly upwards and a clear fog sprayed.

"You can no longer feel pain, a good thing since this will be incredibly painful if I hadn't done that." Said a mysterious voice.

It stopped down and a grey surgeon stallion pinned them all down and put an illusion of a dotted line down Scootaloos stomach and pulled the others up.They're eyes were obscured by open eyes watching in terror. The stallion pulled out a fake knife and appeared to cut down Scootaloos stomach causing a holograph of her bowels to appear. the stallion appeared to pull out her organs one by one and make fun facts about it. "Did you know the small intestine is actually longer than the large intestine?" The stallion said in a robotic voice. Scootaloo began to cry. The other crusaders were pulled away and watched it all onscreen. Scootaloo was eventually moved to the other room and the hologram dissapeared. She walked off and told the other crusaders what happened and then they saw a white van with "FREE CUTIE MARKS" written on the side in bright blue. Applebloom and Scootaloo happily walked in but Sweetie Belle questioned its reliability. She was eventually pushed in and saw her friends, Pipsqueak and Orion. She had no idea what was going on but had a very good idea.

Escaping The Lair

Sweetie Belle slowly walked along a silent corner unaware other foals were following her out. She walked about looking for a exit until she saw the killer pleasantly sleeping, she could see his cutie mark was a knife with blood and a heart on the tip. Pipsqueak tripped on a knife and cut his knee causing a loud scream to escape thought his mouth. The murderer awoke and grabbed Pipsqueak by the tail and thrown back. The murderer realized the other foals were gone although he did have plans.

"Hmm little colt maybe I'll practice my killing on you," the killer stated leaning in on Pipsqueak. After this Pipsqueak screamed as he ran into the corner and catching up to the other foals causing the psychotic stallion to scream. Two old small mares walked out.

"Find the brats and kill them and you'll have liver tonight." The cannibal stallion said.

We'll get the brats master for we want liver." Said the servant mares.

"Good and be sure to make sure no one sees them. We don't want any pony knowing what I do." The killer said with a insane grin.

The servant mares ran out to catch the foals licking their lips. Meanwhile the foals were walking around whimpering and sneaking.

"This is like that game Rainbow Dash plays Slenderpony, it's so awesome right now!" Scootaloo said happily flying for a while before falling.

"This is no laughing matter Scootaloo. You saw what they did to Twist, they'll gut us and eat us." Said Sweetie Belle warning her friend.

"Poor poor Twist, her life was so sad. Constantly getting picked on, laughed at, oh her life was so sad." Applebloom cried.

"I hate this stupid stupid killer, he can go die in a pit." Diamond Tiara remarked angerly, Silver Spoon agreed.

"HUSH HUSH HUSH!" Pipsqueak yelled, "Oh no Pipsqueak we're gonna get caught." said Sweetie Belle.

"There they are Gore," said a voice in the distance causing the ponies to hide.Two elderly mares went to the room. They were very hideous and mishappen one with many scars and one with only one eye.

"Nopony is here Blood I may only have one eye but I can see fine." Gore stated showing off her empty socket.

"There was Gore I claim there was." Said the more excitable Blood before being hushed.

The two ponies argued and argued leaving off before they left and none if the foals could hear them. Sweetie Belle peeked out of her clock hiding spot and said "Clear to go friends." In a quiet voice. They all walked off hoping to find the exit. They hoped to find an exit after searching for a very long time.

The Last Part

The young ponies ran out into the long hallway of the warehouse and stared. How long would it take them? Would they escape the clutches? Would they but gutted and killed? Only one way to find out, the foal slowly tip toe out slowly and sneakily down the halls when Blood and Gore hop out of nowhere. Diamond Tiara looks behind herself too find Pipsqueak is missing and being held by the stallion. The fillies run after the colt but he was strapped down by the time they got to him. The psychotic stallion was next to him holding a knife.

"Fillies you must choose, leave and let Pipsqueak get murdered or save him and die yourselves. You must choose or you all die, so what is your option." Stated the kidnapper.

"We are leaving, Pipsqueak may be young but if we spare him we will not damage nearly as much of pony kind as if we died. So do whatever you please to Pipsqueak! You are not letting us die." Sweetie Belle screamed.

The fillies ran off and left Pipsqueak. Alone after tossing him a sharp blade, the killer stallion put the knife near his flank but Pipsqueak flinched and the killer stabbed his own shoulder. He sliced again but undid the strap and cut his leg off. Pipsqueak took advantage and undid the straps, as he ran off and caught up to the other foals the killer chased him. Applebloom bucked him in the jaw snapping it and ran on, the killer tripped and stabbed his own stomach. He got up and continued running after Blood and Gore fell over and tripped knocking off their masks revealing that they are Lyra and Bon Bon, they shake their heads and snap out of their mind control. They ask what happened and Lyra zaps the serial killer stunning him. The group of fillies run off gladly escaping a fate of the certainty of death. The killer was revealed to be Bloody Machete and was gutted as a part of his tortue while Lyra and Bon Bon went home to their family.