Daneroka tik no Merunam: The Godkiller's Lament

I've only tried once, but I suceeded in walking myself into a rather terrible situation. The fic I intended to write is both out of my skill level, and woefully half done, despite the (very) few pparagraphs that actually hold ground, and the over-paced story line.

As much as I would like to keep at it, I think I'll try to make a simpler story, if only in the actual content, rather then the massively flawed scenario in .

I will rewrite and rebuild Daneroka tik no Merunam: The Godkiller's Lament  when I feel I can do 'Reginald' justice, despite his purposely two-dimensionel character.

I will be submitting the Prolouge to my second attempt along side this, and i gize to the few who have shown an interest in , and offer my thanks for giving it a chance.

Any comment on my second attempt would be very appreciated, and would do good to keep me from walking in the same circle I did with Daneroka tik no Merunam: The Godkiller's Lament .

Thank you all again.