Comatose

by Queen Cookie

Alternate Ending

Previous Chapter

   "She's going, fast." Nurse Redheart said, "Quick, we can still save her."

   The doctors started scrambling to save Apple Eve. Apple Bloom and Pound Cake just watched, feeling like there was something they could do. They eventually went into the hall.

   "She made it." a doctor said after a few hours, "She's fine."

   Pound slowly opened the door. Still unconscious.

   "Ah'll be leavin' now." Apple Bloom said, "Those apple trees ain't gonna buck 'emselves."

   "Bye..." was all Pound could say.

   "Don't worry, Pound. She'll make it, you'll see." and at that, Apple Bloom left.

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   "Apple Eve?" Pound asked, noticing the mare was stirring.

   '"Pound?" she said, but accidentally rolled onto one of her wings "Ow."

   "Apple Eve! You're okay!" he smiled and hugged her.

   "What happened?" Apple Eve said.

   "There was a storm, you got really hurt." Pound said, "You almost died.

   "Well, at least I got to stay here, with you." Apple Eve smiled, "So, care to go into-" Apple Eve was interrupted when Pound Cake kissed her. She started kissing back.

I didn't realize it until recently, but I'd always liked her. Not just the regular kind. Love. I've alway loved her.

I don't think I ever noticed, but I'd always liked him. Like liked him. It's

Love.