(Note; written on iPod so yeah spell check may mess somethings up plus the fact it's hard to use)
Colonel John Shepard and his team stepped out of the stargate into Atlantis after yet again another successful mission.
They had been to a planet with a civilisation that claimed that they had a stargate code, to a planet that harboured an intelligent civilisation that possessed a unlimited power source. "Welcome back Shepard" greeted the commander of Atlantis, Samantha. "good to see you too Sam" he replied "I trust you have the code?" She questioned. "McKay?" He said. " yes yes right here" McKay said approaching her with his computer. " I don't need it, give it to him" she said waving her hand to some guy sitting at the gate Controls. "but first I think we should check if its safe with a drone, just to make sure" sam said."I'm pretty sure the ancients wouldn't build a stargate on a unsafe planet" McKay interjected "but what if it isn't on a planet, it's in space?" Taylor said, "you would be killed." "good point...I suppose" McKay mumbled " ok dial the gate and and send a rover through" Sam shouted "oh and Taylor your not going to be going" "WHAT?" Taylor replied loudly, slightly angry, slightly disappointed. " there is a problem with your baby" sam said sadly and quietly. "where is he?" She replied quickly, worried and on the verge on tears. "head to the infirmary" Sam barely finished as Taylor rushed off "what's the matter with him?" Shepard questioned, worried for Taylor and the baby, he knew if Taylor's baby died Taylor would never forgive herself for not being there all the time for him as she was off on missions, being part of Shepard's team. "He's been diagnosed with some disease" Sam worriedly replied "I hope he will be ok, Taylor would never forgive herself for not being around" she said "that's what I thought" Shepard muttered
"we can only hope"
"Ready?" Shouted Sam at Shepard's team assembled in front of the stargate. Shepard thought about the events that had just happened. Taylor's baby had some life threatening disease or something, McKay was the only person who understood even a small part of the doctor explanation, and usually McKay was the one rambling on about stuff nobody understood, apart from maybe Zelenca ( <--maybe spelt wrong) but he usually served as Rodney's slave/assistant. Anyway Taylor was staying in Atlantis until her baby was well again which was understandable, so only him, McKay and Ronon were on this mission. Also the drone had confirmed what had been told. "I am" Ronon gruffly replied "I am, i think wait, I'm not su-" But McKay was cut off but Shepard "yes we're ready" Shepard said sighing "alright we are a go, LOWER THE SHEILD!" Sam shouted "here we go" Shepard muttered to himself. McKay, Ronon and Shepard stepped into the gate.
At that moment, thousands and thousands of light years away Celestia shivered in her throne. She had just felt some disturbance in her land. It was like nothing she had felt before. It felt a bit like when discord was realised, a sense of fear, a sense of danger, but unlike discord, there wasn't the sense of evil.If something like discord had been realised, it's intentions were not to cause chaos or despair, she decided this should be noted. She proceeded get up and head over to Luna now. "Princess were are you going" a guard asked as she removed herself from her throne "I wish to speak to my sister" she announced to him "I'll get some guards to es-" "IN PRIVATE" she cut over him. He istantly crumpled "y-yes your highness"
He stuttered. Celestia then trotted out the room, the armor on her hooves echoing in the corridors. "This is too slow" she muttered before teleporting to the lunar wing of the castle, outside luna's quarters. Both guards quarding her door had a bit of shock when the sun goddess appeared in front of them,however they quickly recover and opened the doors at celestias request. "Tia what is the meaning of this" Luna demanded caught sitting on her bed reading something that was quickly shoved out of sigh "Luna what were you reading?" Celestia questioned with a smirk "nuthing" Luna quickly said her eyes looking from left to right "I see" celestia replied the smirk growing even larger "so why are you here?" Luna asked, changing the subject "Luna, you know what I felt when discord escaped?" celestia stated, the smirk now gone and a serious face took its place (ryhmes bro) "yes, you felt it again?!?" Luna asked rapidly become worried "we'll its similar,but less evil, less chaotic" "so a creature may have been realised like discord, but with maybe better intentions?" Luna questioned, clearly surprised "that is what it feels like, however it still can't be trusted" "I agree sister, I think we shall have the elements check it out" "I agree Luna" celestia replied "but I hope they won't been needed" she muttered turning to look at the direction it's prescient was coming from
Shepard, McKay and Ronon stepped out the portal. They were greeted with a dark forest that had a horrible evil feeling to it. There was another thing too, they, and everything around them had a, almost different shade to it. "I don't like it" Ronon stated in a rather blunt manner. "Me neither" Shepard answered in a response "yeah well the sooner we find this so called unlimited energy source then the sooner we get out of here" McKay said " and that's even if its real, it would have to break the rules of-" "hold up" Shepard said suddenly, at the same time put his hand up,signalling to stop. Doing this he manged to hit rodeny in the face. "O-" Ronon's hand stoped him.The 3 stopped and listened. They could hear voices
"This could be it, some people from the civilisation" McKay barely whispered, sounding excited."Shut it" Shepard tried to warn quietly but the voices automatically stop and a 'shush' was heard "now look what you've done" Shepard angrily whispered "what are you talking to me?" McKay shout-whispered in defence, thought by now it was obviously too late to stay hidden and stealthily. "Isn't it obvious that they know we are here now?" Ronon stated in his unique blunt way of talking. "I hope your right" Shepard muttered as he then rise out the bush towards we're they had heard the voices. He really really didn't expect this
