Chapter 1: Meeting Celestia
Hey guys, Fire Power here. So i researched some literary devices and what not, so hopefully my story will improve. Here is chapter one. All of this chapter was made while listening to Daft Punk
Brandon woke up in a daze, feeling a hard wind on his face. He very slowly opened his eyes to see that he was soaring over a colorful landscape of rivers, trees, and meadows of green. ( First person from here on out) Wait, i'm FLYING? i started to panic, and shake like crazy, only to have the chariot tilt enough to scare the purple mare beside me. The chariot suddenly glowed a sparkly purple and became still. "What was that?, you nearly killed us!". "I think the more important question here is why you tied me up, and put on a freaking flying chariot!", i exclaimed. "You came out of the sky, and you were surprised to be a pony. I'm taking you to Celestia, and that is that", she retorted. "I'll untie you, but only because i feel bad". That took me by surprise. I felt the rope around me loosen, and the got out of them and started rubbing my wrist.
When we got to Canterlot, i jumped out and felt the cool asphalt on my hoofs. I started walking and fell as soon as i took a step. "I guess you don't walk on four legs", Twilight exclaimed. " Well, how am i gonna get to Celestia then?" "I guess you could lean on me, she said, blushing a little. "It's alright, i uh, i'll learn to walk on my own", i said. We got there eventually (After i fell on my face about 27 times). When we got there, i gawked at the magnificent castle. I gotta admit, it looked a hell of a lot better seeing it from a pony's perspective instead of a computer screen.
We walked up to the main entrance, only to be blocked by the guards spears. "Who goes there!", they said simultaneously. "It's okay, he's with me", twilight said calmly. "What's his name?", one of the guards said. "M-my name? why do you need to know that?" "So we know who comes in and out of the castle, it's mandatory", he replied. I quickly look at myself, i look exactly like my OC, Black coat with a black and green mane and tail, with my own cutie mark of a flame on top of a horn, so i used my OC name. "My name is Fire Power", i replied, hoping he would buy it. "Alright come on in Mr. Power", said one of the guards. "You too ms. Sparkle", the other one said. We walked in the white and yellow castle.
When we walked in, twilight looked at me with a look that said "You made that name up". I nervously looked at all the guards and royalty we past, trying to look at classy as possible. "Here we are, the throne room", Said Twilight as we walked in a room with Beautiful windows. I remember this room from the "Crystal Empire" episode. We saw Celestia walk up to us from her throne. "Hello Twilight, i was wondering when you would bring Fire Power along. "Wait, you knew he was here, how could you possibly know he was coming?", she said a little shocked. "Because she brought me here, didn't you Celestia?", i said looking up at her. "Yes i did, as a matter of fact", Celestia boasted. "But, why? I mean, this is awesome and all, but why just me?". "You aren't the only brony i brought to Equestria". "Wait, what kind of creature is a 'brony'?", said twilight. "A brony is a person wh-" "Studies Equestria, so he knows all about the elements of harmony and equestrian places and things", Celestia said quickly. I realized she didn't want me to reveal my identity just, so i moved on in the conversation.
"OK now that we all know our names and who i am, where am i gonna sleep?", i said. "You could sleep with me, W-well not like that, but i mean in another room in my house", she rambled, blushing. "OK, it seems i should send you two on your way, i got a lot work to do, Celestia said. Before we left she whispered in my ear "Have fun, you can stay here, hopefully happier than before".
I walked outside into the yard of the castle, Going towards the chariot, only to be stopped by twilight. "OK i don't know how you are, if Celestia was telling the truth, but you better not harm anypony, or i will end you got it?" "Whoa whoa chill out i'm gonna harm anypony". i said, feeling her stare rip my soul apart". "OK, just checking she said, smiling". As we went the Ponyville Library, i saw every mare stare at me, so i whispered to twilight, "Why is everypony staring at me, do i look weird or something?" "No you don't, they are staring at you because you look hot", she replied. "Oh, so i look hot, do i?" "No not to me, she said, smirking.
Afterwards, we went inside, and we sat down on the couch. "Okay, rules here are number one, don't get on mine, or spikes bad side. Two, Don't eat all my food. And lastly, you can read as many books as you like", she said. "Okay, can i use this?" i said, pulling out my solar charged phone. "Ya, uh sure, whatever that is", she said. "Awesome". Afterwards we ate dinner with spike (Me and spike are cool) and i took a shower (Twilight wouldn't let me lay in her guest bed without cleaning off first), and laid in bed. Twilight came in, leaning on the doorframe, thinking i was asleep and said "i hope he doesn't think i'm mean, i'm just nervous. I hope you don't hate me". "I don't", i said. "OH YOUR AWAKE UH WELL GOODNIGHT", and then she bolted to her room. "Hehe", i muttered, before i dozed off.
Well, That all folks! Come back next time for chapter 2.
Hey guys, Fire Power here, with the second chapter for this story. Sorry for the long wait, school has been killing me, and i got a new phone (the htc one), so i have been messing around on that. So lets stop stalling and continue with the story
I woke up, looking at the white ceiling, when i notice that i wasn't laying on my bed at the library. The library didn't have white ceilings! I jumped out of my bed and looked around, i quickly realized that i was back at my house on earth. "I guess it was just a dream", i sighed. I noticed a few more strange things. There wasn't a floor beneath my feet, but a black void. "What the hell", i muttered to myself. I turned around and saw that my bed was now a giant potato. "What is going on here", i yelled. "Brandon, get up!", i heard come from my closet. I approached the door slowly, still awry about the void of a floor i was walking on. I opened the door and saw twilight sitting there, she then casted a spell on me with blinded me with a bright white light.
"GREAT SCREAMIE JEEMMIES", i yelled as the shot up on my bed.". "What's a screamie jeemmie?", said Twilight with a confused look. "Oh thank god i'm still in Equestria", i thought. "Uh it's nothing, just an expression", i told Twilight. "Well anyways, i'm gonna go to Rarity's to have some tea, you can do whatever you want around town", she said to me. "I think i'm gonna study on some magic spells, seems like the best thing to do right now", i said. "That's great Fire Power i have some books on simple levitation and teleportation if you need some", she said with a smile. " That sounds cool, thanks Twilight", i replied.
When Twilight left i ate a small breakfast of eggs and hay bacon. Apparently i have the taste buds of a horse, so meat no longer would taste good, but hay bacon tastes just as good as pig bacon. I looked at the books she gave me, and in no time i was picking up all objects i could find, and teleporting wherever i wanted to. Theses spells were surprisingly easy, maybe too easy. I started looking up advance spells like age spells and shape shifting spells. "You got this Fire", i said to myself to
as i started the spell up as i pointed my horn at the orange. I felt my magic come out of my horn and blast the orange as it turned into a dog. "Holy hell, i created life, i only meant to make it a fake dog". "IT'S ALIVE!", i yelled as Twilight returned from rarity's boutique.
"Whats alive Fire?", she questioned. "You won't believe it, but i just turned a orange into a dog!", i exclaimed. Twilight stood there spellbound (see what i did there, spellbound? You know because i just did a spell? Nevermind, back to the story) with her jaw dropped to the floor. "How did you do that after a few attempts, i can't do that and i have been practicing magic all my life", she said still surprise. "Really, it was easy all the did was aim my horn at the orange and perform the spell, is there a certain way i was supposed to do, or what?". "Whats with all the commotion", spike said as he came downstairs, our talking waking him from his afternoon nap". "It's nothing spike, just talking about magic", Twilight said. "Do you guys need anything to eat?", spike said, trying to make himself useful. "Can you get us two Daisy sandwiches for lunch", Twilight said. "Ya, coming right up", said spike as he put on his apron while running to the kitchen".
"So Twilight", I said trying to strike up a conversation. "What is there to do around Ponyville?". "Well, you can go visit my friends with me later if you want", Twilight said. "OK, that sounds good". "Wait i almost forgot, i gotta show you something", i said as i ran to my room. I grabbed my phone from the chestnut nightstand and ran back downstairs. "OK check this out, if you think what i did was advance magic, just you wait". I took my phone and went to my music app. I then selected a song from my library called hail to the king by Avenge Sevenfold.
"Watch your tongue or have it cut from your head
Save your life by keeping whispers unsaid
Children roam the streets, now orphans of war
Bodies hanging in the streets to adore
Royal faith will carve a path in chaos
Bringing daylight to the night
Death is riding in the town with armor
They come to take all your rights
Hail to the king, hail to the one
Kneel to the crown, stand in the sun
Hail to the king
Hail!
Hail!
Hail!
The King...
Blood is spilled while holding keys to the throne
Born again, but it's too late to atone
No mercy from the edge of the blade
Dare escape and learn the price to be paid
Let the water flow with shades of red now
Arrows black out all the light
Death is riding in the town with armor
They've come to grant you your rights
Hail to the king, hail to the one
Kneel to the crown, stand in the sun
Hail to the king
Hail!
Hail!
Hail!
The King...
[Solo]
There's a taste of fear (hail, hail, hail)
When the henchmen call (hail, hail, hail)
Iron fist to tame the will (hail, hail, hail)
Iron fist to claim it all (hail, hail, hail)
Hail to the king, hail to the one
Kneel to the crown, stand in the sun
Hail to the king, hail to the one
Kneel to the crown, stand in the sun
Hail to the king!
Hail!
Hail!
Hail!"
"Wow what kind of magical device is that, And what song was that, it sounded so violent", Twilight said blown away. "Violent, but my type of music", i announced proudly. "And also, it's a phone", i said. "It's a device which can take pictures, take videos, play music, like it just did, and call people. But i don't think i have connection in Equestria". "OK, i understood about half of that, put i guess that sounds kinda neat", Twilight responded. After lunch (Which was strangely delicious) , i decided to take a walk outside and explore Equestrian nature a bit.
I was walking on a dirt path, looking at the beautiful countryside, when i heard a explosion from a small metal house. I ran inside to find a brown pony with a dark orange mane and tail, his foreleg burned off. "Hey, do you need help?", i asked. "Yes, set me on that table over there", he said gritting his teeth from the pain. I used my magic to lift him on top of the table, wincing as i heard his burned foreleg crunch. I looked around the place. Many small devices lay around in a messy way. The walls were a strong bright metal and it smelled like sulfur in the house.
"Can you get those bandages, and that antiseptic", he moaned. I took the antiseptic and poured it on the bandages, then i wrapped his stub of a foreleg to stop the bleeding. "Thanks man, i thought i was a goner. Whats your name" "The name's Fire Power, whats yours?", i asked. "My name is Clockwork, and i'm glad you heard the explosion", he answered. "Ya, what blew up in the first place?". "My device i was making, i bumped into the keg of gunpowder, and it rolled into the fireplace, i barely had time to react before it blew", he explained.
I quickly found out that he was an inventor, and made awesome stuff like a chip he put into his brain, so he uses 100% of his brain. That gives him small telekinesis powers and an extremely intelligent mind. He thanked me for saving his life. I made sure i did all i could to help out and then i left. He told me he would have his cleaning robot (I know right? a freaking robot!) to fix the mess the explosion made.
It was really dark outside, so i emitted a light from my horn and made my way back to the library. I made it back to find a worried looking lavender pony walk out the front of the door. "Where were you, i was about to go looking for you", she said, lightly slamming her hoof down. I told Twilight all about the experience i had at Clockworks house. "Wow, it was really lucky that you were there to save him, he might of been a lot worse off without you", she said. "That's nice and all, but i'm ready to take a shower and just go to bed, i'm beat", i replied, walking inside the tree.
After taking my shower, i walked to my room, only to have a thought. I am having a better time here in two days, then i have had my entire life on earth. This thought made me smile. I also thought of another thing, how am i gonna spend the rest of my life here. Should i be looking for a job, a mare friend? These thoughts flooded my mind as i laid in my bed, looking at the moon through my window. "Might as well worry about those things tomorrow, i'm so tired", i muttered to myself as the drifted off to sleep.
So guys, how was that chapter? I am trying to make my chapters longer, and i'm gonna actually make this story only five chapters. I'm gonna make a much bigger one with The musical brony. So ya. Have fun.
In another world – By Fire power
Hey guys, this is my first fimfic, so please, if you have any constructive criticism, please do tell. This is another Human in equestria story, soz. Ya. The prologue will be in 3rd person, the rest in 1st person. So enjoy.
Brandon James was walking down the hall, waiting for another day to go by, and another, and another, and another. Every day, he would get up, get ready for school, learn stuff, get bullied, come home, do this homework and chores, watch mlp, and then repeat. He wished he could just, go to equestria, and be happy for once.
“How was school”? Said his mom. “Fine” was his only reply. “Are you sure”? “Ya mom”. He decided to go outside, and climb his tree. As he was up on his tree, he noticed the side of his house was wavy. “That’s strange”, he thought.
He jumped down to see why the wall was wavy. Was it just a heat wave, it was the middle of summer, was he just seeing things? He didn’t think so. Brandon went up to it and waved his arm around in it, only to feel an immense pull in his arm. He was quickly trying to pull it out, but it wouldn’t budge. He felt his whole body be pulled into the wavy vortex.
5 MINUTES EARLIER…
Twilight was walking in the meadow, going to the edge of the everfree forest to meet the other elements of harmony for their weekly pet play day. “Hey girls, I brought Owlicious”
“I brought Winona”
“I brought Tank”
“I brought Gummy”
“I brought Angel Bunny, if that’s ok with you”
“And I brought Opalescence”
“Ok, is that everyo-“, is all she said before a pony fell from the sky, on top of her. “Uhhhh”, Brandon said as he rubbed his head, with his hoof. “Wait WHAT THE FUCK, WHY AM I A PONY, WAIT AM I IN EQUESTR-“, was all he could say before Twilight hit him with a knockout spell. “Who was that”? Rarity said. “I don’t know, but how did he get into the sky in the first place, he is a unicorn”, Fluttershy said. “And why was he surprised he was a pony”? Twilight thought, looking at the handsome stallion that lay before her. “Who are you”, she whisper.
So that’s the prologue, how did I do? Bad? Good? Leave your comments below on what should happen next, this is fire power, signing off.
