Chapter 2:Blank

"SURPRIIISE!!!" Pinkie Pie ,along with most of Ponyville, exclaimed. Burst Stream jumped with surprise as he entered the bakery known as The SugarCube Corner and was assaulted by the cacophony of voices. His next action was rather starnge two the few ponies who noticed him , but completely automatic to him. After his initial surprise he thwn immediately studied each pony in attendance with a glare so intense, as if he were trying to peel back some sort of veil with only his eyes. AppleJack noticed and once again wondered how this young stallion came by such odd habits, hardened physique, and incredibly sensitive nerves. Twilight was also asking herself the same questions and wondering what sort of job or lifestyle constituted developing such muscles. After he stopped looking and apparently not finding what he was looking for, began to relax...only to then come face-to-face(literally) with Pinkie Pie wanting to know all about how much he liked the party.

SoareyouhavingfunIknowI'mhavingfunwithallthepartygamesandtheponieshavingfunanddoyoulikethedecorationsIknowyou'refavoritecolorisbluesoImadebluestreamersandconfettiandcake...HUUUAGGGH! Burst Stream quickly did his best to answer Pinkie Pie's questions and after that she calmed down to the pint where you could at least distinguish individual sentences from her. Now, another pony walked over to meet this new stallion. She had a blue coat and a mane the color of a ranbow(need I say more). As Rainbow Dash came up to meet the new stallion she also noticed his physique in a purely competitive sense. She knew muscles and she knew that this guy was one serious runner.

"Hi there, I'm Rainbow Dash, the fastest flyer in all of Equestria."

"Hello, I'm Burst Stream, I've heard about you and you're adventures with you're friends. It sounded pretty cool." This wasn't the response that Rainbow Dash was expecting. She figured that with his body he must be some sort of racing pony. But, maybe she was wrong, and he did something else she'd check his cutie mark and see...what the. Burst Stream had figured this would happen eventually so he thought he might as wel let the truth out. "Yes it's true" he said with a sigh" I don't have a cutie mark."

Rainbow Dash merely stood there in shock as more ponies who had heard Burst Stream beagn to spread the word and check for themselves, including 3 fillies who seemed particularly interested. A pony gaining there cutie mark has always been a happy occasion that occurs at a young age, but when a pony doesn't gain there cutie mark at a young age...well, it's simply unheard of or at least very rare. Now, all attention was on Burst Stream, the stallion without a cutie mark. It may have stayed that way all night until Twilight stepped in and said

"Come on ponies, don't be rude. It's his personal business and It's not nice to stare."

Most of the ponies looked away from the disgruntled pony as Burst Stream walked up to Twilight with a slight blush in his cheeks and got out a"T-Thank you very much."

as she replied "No Problem" and apologized for the ponies being rude. The party continued and Burst only got a few questions, but overall everypony was polite and courteous. As the party came to an end, Burst Stream walked over to Apple Jack.

" Hey, Apple Jack remenber that other question I had for you."

"Oh yeah.. well wha' t'was it you wanted ter ask me?"

Burst nervously replied" Well you see, I was wondering if you knew a place where I could spend the night bec-"

but he was cut off by Apple Jack's reply of " No ned to fuss, you can stay in the guest room up at the farm." And with that they headed off. It was now night as Apple Jack and Burst Stream headed off to Apple Jack's farm" Hey Burst, I was wonderin' if I could do a lil' test ta' see if yer' capable.?"

"Okay, what is it?"

" Ah propose we have ahrselves a little race to the farm." The 2 ponies lined up ready to start( now Apple Jack wasn't prideful. but she knew she was a pretty darn fast runner, however, she had no idea what she was in for). 3...2...1...GOO!! Apple Jack started running at full tilt ready to give this new stallion a run for his money, except...Burst Stream was already halfway to the farm in the span of about three seconds. His speed left Apple Jack flabbergasted and with more amd more wonderings.

Author's Note

I feel like this one was a definite improvement on my first chapter, but I still would appreciate any and all feedback about the stor so far and what I can improve.
I know that I didn't involve all of the Mare Six in the party scene, but I will do my best to incorporate them later in the story.
Next Chapter: memories