Prologue

Ponyville 8/27/2013 Twilight's library 4 PM

"Hey Fluttershy are you ready to go yet?" Asked Rainbow Dash as she enters Fluttershy's Cottage.

"Just a second I need to feed the critters.",Replied Fluttershy as she gives some birds seed to the birds and nuts to the squirrels.

"We gotta hurry Twilight's gonna be super mad if we're late again."

"I know Dash I'm just sad that Applejack,Rarity,and Pinkie aren't here right now."

"Oh come on Flutter Pinkie helping Applejack in Applelosa and Rarity is in Canterlot they aren't dead."

"I guess you're right lets go."

They quickly flew out of the door and headed towards town.

PONYILLE GARDEN

Carrot Top was finishing her carrot farm when they was a loud bang.

"What? Who's there? Show yourself!"

"I know someone here."

Then a figure came out

"Oh it's only you. Wait? Why are you holding a knife? Wha- AAAHHHHH!!!

Golden Oaks Library

"Sorry we're late Twilight we were I was just waiting for Fluttershy to Finnish her feeding routine." Said Rainbow

"It's ok girls were only going to Canterlot." Replied Twilight

"Well what are we waiting for let's go" said Rainbow heading out the door.

Then there was a scream.

"AAAAHHHHHHHH!!!"

"What was that?" Asked Fluttershy as she hides behind Twilight.

"It sound likes its coming from the local garden lets go." Said Rainbow "lets go check it out."

They flew to the garden and when they open the door there was no noise what so ever.

"Carrot Top? It's me Twilight. Are you alright?"

"Guys I think we need to see this." Said Fluttershy as she points to something.

"What do you want us to se-AHH."

"I think we need to get Celestia NOW." Said Twilight.

BAU HEADQUARTER QUANTICO VIRGINIA EARTH

"Alright Garcia what do we have today?" Asked Aaron and he sit down.

"Well this is first time were doing this kind of case but the President requested us to go to D.C."

"Why is that?" Asked Reid.

"Well Princess Celestia from the Planet Equine is requesting us to go to her land and help them solve a case involving multiple murder." Explained Garcia

"Equestria wait do we even have jurisdiction over there?" Asked Morgan as he scratches he's head.

"No we don't but the Princess and the President made a agreement that the FBI now has full jurisdiction over there now since they hardly have any murder there in so many years." Said Garcia as she handled out photos

"Now lets get starts JJ explain." Said Aaron as he looked at he's iPad

"Well ok then. Ok we have three victim so far there names are Angel Flour age 24, Sally Green age 24 and our newest victim Carrot Top age 25.

"So our victims are all females with a age in their mid-twenties and are they all near the same area?" Asked David Rossi as he takes a sip of he's coffee.

"Ah yes all of them live in a small town called Ponyville about 30 miles away from any other towns and cities."

"So this mean the killer is local alright wheels up in ten lets go."

Quotes- Winston Churchill said "the farther backward you can look the farther forward you can see."

BAU JET

"Alright then me and Rossi well go to the local station, Reid,Morgan and Prentiss go to the crime scene and JJ try to find out sown facts from the locals.

"Garcia can you send us the pictures from the other murder scenes?" Asked Rossi

"Sure thing just give me a few minutes and ill get right back to ya." Replied Garcia through the computer.

(I'm not going to show the pictures since there's hardly any on the Internet and some pictures I found are kind of too gorey so go picture it yourself oh and these humans characters are for the show Criminal Minds on CBS so I suggest you look it up or watch the show so know the characters also this is before season 9)

D.C PENTAGON BASEMENT PORTAL

"Ok you're allowed to bring the weapons to Equestria and you're badge but there no other humans there yet but the ponies know what human look like." Explained the scientist as he opens up the portal. "I already send in three SUV and a temporary FOB in the crime scene and please be nice to them were the first federal humans going."

"Alright then were ready."

After three minutes of them being in the portal they ended up in a room filled with humans tech and a purple pony with wings and a horn looking right at them and which it seemed two Pegasus ponies at the back with four ponies in which it looks like there wearing some sort of horse armor.

"Hello there my name is Princess Twilight Sparkles and I'm the co-ruler here in Equestria and you must be part of the FBI."

"Ah yes we are I'm SSA agent Aaron Hotchner this is my team SSA agent David Rossi he said pointing at Rossi.

"I'm Dr.Spencer Reid and your are a alicorn yes?"

"How do you know?" Asked Twilight.

"He's our human dictionary and atlas oh I'm sorry in SSA agent Derek Morgan.

"SSA agent Emily Prentiss"

"And I'm SSA Jennifer Joure or JJ I'm the one you were sending the letter to."

"Oh uhh I do suppose you want to see the crime scene now it's all clear from any ponies thanks to the royal guards sent here by
Princess Celestia."

"Oh yes me and Rossi are going to stay here and can you direct Reid,Morgan and Prentiss to the scene." Answered Aaron.

"Oh sure girls guards let take them there."

When they arrived at the scene many ponies where trying to look at the murder and they keep yelling the same thing

"FIND THE KILLER BRING THEM DOWN."

"JJ talk to these ponies and try to calm them down." Said Morgan as he went through the door.

When they came to the room there was no other CSU here just the body on the floor.

"Ok Twilight we need a team who can put the body in disposal and also I need to know did any one here touch the scene." Asked Prentiss

"Ok ill let you get started." Replied Twilight as she walks to the two Pegasus and started talking

"How do we know there good at what they do they could even be murderer themselves." Said Rainbow

"I know what you think of them Rainbow but Celestia knows there the best of the best they solved about more than 500 cases."

"500!" Said Fluttershy "my goodness the humans world is so violent"

"Yeah and now it had spread to Equestria." Said Twilight

(Like I said this story is going to be hard since there's multiple OC and other characters)

Author's Note

Ok I need the readers help I need a name for the murderer and his bio as well leave a comment of it Ty's. And also my proofreader and his family just came back from vacation so he's gonna proofread this and the edit version well be here in about a couple of days sory of u can't read this.