Criminal Minds-Equestria

by Nuggetmanu2

FBI vs UNSUB

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(Ok before you red this chapter I need to tell ever body something. First is that I just realized that this serial killer story is going to be too short so here's what I'm gonna do. I'm going to write multiple stories of the BAU solving serial killer crimes ill tell you if it's the same story by the name. This chapter is the final story for this story but a new killer will emerge in Equestria and the BAU knows how to solve it. Also the change is by episode so this is episode 1. Thank you for reading this and hope you enjoy this story.)

Hotch was driving fast towards Fluttershy house. He could drive faster if the roads aren't made if dirt. He already called the others and there already on the way.

MEANWHILE AT FLUTTERSHY'S HOUSE

"Oh thank you very much for helping me feed my critters would you like to stay for dinner?" Asked Fluttershy as she sets up plates for three.

"Oh we have time so I guess." Said Twilight.

"What are we having?" Asked Rainbow as she sits down.

"Hay macaroni and cheese." Replied Fluttershy.

"Oh my favorite."

ONE BLOCK AWAY FROM FLUTTERSHY'S HOUSE

Clover Leaf has just finish his dinner a simple seaweed salad with ranch dressing he had his pocket knife in his jacket and he has he cap on his head.

"He he he oh Fluttershy I'm coming for you." He said quietly as she walked slowly to the house.

(Ok before I continue Clover voice sounds like Pinkie Pie voice in the Episode Party of One when she was crazy. Also Equestria has changed a lot. There is black top roads in cites and humans tech like phones and some ponies cars also some ponies have guns so that's going to be interesting in other episodes hint hint. Ok back to the story.)

CLOVER LEAF'S HOUSE

Morgan and Prentiss walked up to the house and knocked on e door.

"Clover Leaf this the agent Derek Morgan were with the FBI open up!"

No response

"Open up." Yelled Prentiss.

After ten seconds of no response they grabbed their pistols from their holsters and kicked down the door.

They entered in side and searched the house but they couldn't find him.

"Damn it he isn't here."

'Ill ask the others to see if they know where's he's going." Said Prentiss as she was about to use her cell phone.

"You don't have to do that look at these plates and food there still warm." Said Morgan as he touches the food on the table.

"And looks at theses photos."

Prentiss looked at the photos seeing picture of all the victims in the pictures doing there jobs and being with others and also their house.

"It seem like he stalks his victims for a couple of hours and then he kills them." Explained Morgan.

"And he already found his next one." Said Prentiss as she takes a picture of Fluttershy and her friends at the park.

Morgan quickly called Rossi.

RING RING

"Yeah?" Answered Reid.

"Hey it's Morgan the killer is heading towards Fluttershy's house he may already on his way how far away are you from the house?"

"Two minutes."

"Alright well on our way as well."

ROSSI'S CAR

Reid called Garcia.

RING RING

"Yeah this is Garcia the wonder how can I help you?"

"Garcia what is Fluttershy home phone number?"

"Uh it's 3-516-249-4349."

"Thanks Garcia."

Reid then quickly punched in the number and waited.

(Also don't call that number it's fake I think but it won't go to Fluttershy's house ill just go to some ramdom people in New York an they just gonna yell at you and call you a fucking idiot so I recommend don't do it.)

"Hello? Who's this?" Asked Twilight.

"Twilight is that you?"

"Yes it me who's this?"

"It's Dr.Reid are you and Fluttershy at the house right now?"

"Yeah and so is Rainbow why?"

"We believe the killer is on his way to you girls right now so lock the door and window and don't let any pony in got it"

"And yeah I'll do it right now." Replied Twilight

"Good we're going to be there in a minute so hold on tight."

Reid quickly hang up.

"Rainbow get Fluttershy we need to close all window and door.

"Why?" Asked Rainbow.

"Cause the killer is coming here." Explained Twilight

They locked the door when they heard a whimper noise

"Girls"

They turn around and they saw a red stallion with a four leaf clover as a cutie mark holding a pocket knife to Fluttershy throat.

"Hello there Rainbow Dash and Princess Twilight Sparkle my name is Clover Leaf and I'm going to kill you all today."

They BAU quickly got out of their car when they got to the house. They all had their pistol at their hands and when they reached the door Hotch kicked down the door and entered the house they saw Clover Leaf holding a knife at Fluttershy.

"Clover Leaf in agent Aaron Hotchner and were with the FBI and we want you to drop your knife and come with us."

"Oh yeah and what? Bring me back to the hell hole at the hospital huh huh?"

"No we're going to get you some help."

"NO" yelled Clover.

"I want these people to suffer for what they do to me I want them to die. They didn't listen to me at all."

"Our place they do that all we what you to do is to drop the knife and let her go." Said Rossi.

"No"

"If you put another inch of that blade towards her throat I will blow your heads of." Said Morgan as he enters the room.

"Ok I will." Said Clover as he held tighter to Fluttershy.

Then he quickly let go of Fluttershy and charged at Hotch but all that happen was a bullet in Clover's chest from a fired bullet from Rossi.

Morgan went to check on the body. He shocked his head meaning that the pony is dead.

Reid,Twilight and Rainbow went to check on Fluttershy since she was in shock.

"Are you alright?" Asked Rainbow as she hugs Fluttershy.

"Yes I'm fine." Replied Fluttershy.

One hour later.

"I would like to thank you all for helping our town." Said Twilight.

"Your welcome and when ever you need help just tell us." Replied Hotch.

Then Celestia appear out of nowhere a chariot came with two Pegasus pulling it. When they landed Princess Celestia came out.

"Thank you for stopping this killer from all this killing but we still need your help." Said Celestia.

"What do you mean?" Ask JJ.

"We had a home invasion at Canterlot and we need your help your president knows about this and he wants you guys to help us. Do you accept?" Asked Celestia

They all looked a each other and nodded at each other.

Hotch looked at Celestia and all he said was this "yes well help you ponies."

Quotes-Emerson said, “All is riddle, and the key to a riddle is another riddle.”

End of Episode one.

(Well hope you enjoy and thank you for waiting.)


Author's Note

Well that's the end of episode one and I think ill start the second episode maybe tomorrow so wait and also I will need a MO for a murder and a bio also I need a temporary profile for the unsub and maybe a name as well.

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