Criminal Minds-Equestria

by Nuggetmanu2

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"Ok this couldn't be a burglary." Claimed Morgan.

"Why is that?" Asked Prentiss.

"Look the unsub entered through the front door and a back door they could have taken their stuff and leave with out any one noticing but they woke the family instead, so when the dad came out he was knocked in the head, the wife and son tries to run out the back door but the partner was there blocking them." Morgan Explained as she looked at the gash in the father head.

"They also use a crow bar to head the dad."

"So that exclaimed the holes in the wall." Said Reid.

"Yeah there was a safe behind that picture but nothing was stolen no jewelry or money." Said Rossi as he points to the open safe.

"If it wasn't the money then what were they looking for?" Asked Reid.

"Who ever the pony is he decided to clean up the mess, look at the floor it's cleaned with bleach and a mop." Said Prentiss.

"So the unsubs likes to be clean and has a issue with his father." Said Reid.

"Alright call JJ and Aaron and tell them to ask the locals if they saw anything last night and Morgan and Prentiss look around the house and see if anything is out of the ordinary, Reid since your so good with the girls back at Ponyville you can Explain to them what were doing right now." Said Rossi.

"Got it anything else?" Reid asked.

"Take a tour around the city we need to know this place better."

"And we'll meet up at the station in about a hour or so." Said Morgan.

"Got it."

When Reid left the house he saw the girls and a white pony with a diamond cutie marks.

"Hey Reid watcha doing?" Asked Rainbow as she flies to Reid.

"Oh nothing I was just going to wander around the cities." Answered Reid as he starts to walk down the streets.

"Hey I thought we are learning to be like you guys why aren't we going inside?"

"Cause of two reason. One you don't have any profiling experience and second of all were stilling looking for evidence, and there's a dead bodies inside as well.

"Wait some pony died?" Asked Rarity.

"Yeah the whole family."

"Fluttershy started crying.

"Hey don't cry that's lesson one don't let your emotion get to you and your job."

"And how do we do that?" Asked Rainbow.

"Simple just think of the good things like your going to save more ponies lives when the killer is caught and theses stuff happens every day."

"Oh ok then." Said Fluttershy as she wipes of the tears in her face.

"Ok let's find a cafe and get started."

Cream Family house upstairs.

"Look at this the sons bedroom window is open and there's a ladder in the back yard so why didn't the unsub just use that to get in and kill the family while there sleeping?" Asked Prentiss.

"Cause they wanted the family witness each others death." Replied Morgan.

"Also look at the pictures in this room and the hall ways there perfectly lined up."

"So the unsub is OCD and highly organized and this murder was planned to the last second." Claimed Morgan.

"Yeah let's get back to the station." Said Prentiss as they head down stairs.

The girls and Reid found a cafe in the center of Canterlot and they sat down. After a minute a unicorn waiter came.

"Good afternoon and what would yo-" said the unicorn before he stopped and looked at Twilight.

"Princess Sparkles I'm so sorry I didn't noticed you for a second ill get the best chefs right now."

"Don't worry we're just here for some coffee and tea." Said Twilight.

"Sure lets ill be right back." Said the waiter as he walks back to the kitchen.

"So when are we getting starting?" Asked Fluttershy.

"We already did, see that pony in that suit what can you tell me about him just by looking at him?"

"Uh he's stylish he going west and he has a blue mane." Said Rarity.

"Anything else?"

They all shocked there head.

"Well so far your good but here's what you missed, one thing is that the stallions mane it's a bit flat and cully so he forgot to brush his mane and second look at his eyes they have wrinkles so that means he rather having lots of stress lately or he didn't have enough sleep last night. Also he's keep pulling his tie so he's nervous about something and since he levitating a suitcase I thinks he going to present a meeting or some sort."

"You got all of that just by looking at him?" Asked Twilight.

"Yup after a few years in the BAU you notice some things that not every body do." Said Reid.

The tea and coffee arrived and they started talking about their lives but mostly Twilight was asking all the question. Trying speed things up Reid told them he needs to get to the police station.

"Oh sure no problem ill just teleport us there."

Then a purple ball surrounded them and they disappear from the cafe leaving sixteen bits on the table.

(Ok khilleobge Some name since your judging my writing and being a grammar nazi y don't u proofreader and edit for me hmmm. That's right since my proofreader and editor are in school and your such a grammar nazi proofread for me if u don't want to just fucking stop judging and don't read this ok. I'm bad in school for grammar ok then. If not then stop commenting my mistakes please ill try my best to fix them.)

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