Too Early

(People are wondering why did I put the mane six icons and other icon in the story well ill tell ya why. Remember this stories has multiple cases so the stories travel around ponies will show up and stuff. Also if you want to above any pony such as OC and background characters to be victims or murderers just let me know. Now let us continued the story.)

RING RING

"Uh Rarity can you pick that up I'm to tired to move." Said Rainbow as she hides in her blanket.

"So sorry Rainbow I need my beauty sleep Twilight darling can you be it?"

"Uh sure hold on a second."

Twilight quickly levitated the phone and hold it up in her ear.

"Uh hello? Who's this?"

"Is this Princess Twilight Sparkles?" Asked a low voice.

"Um yes,and who are you?"

"I'm agent Aaron Hotchner I'm calling for Twilight Spakles."

"Uh hi agent Hotchner." Said Twilight as she gets every pony out of bed.

"We need you and the rest of the study team to come to 25 West Hay Street there's been another murder.

"Wait right now it's only 4 in the morning."

"Then get here in fifteen minutes." Said Hotch as he hangs up on them.

"Who was that?" Asked Fluttershy as she get out of her bed.

"Yeah who calls ponies this early in the morning?" Asked Rainbow as she stretches her wings.

"Well apparently the FBI does come on let's go."

THE NEW CRIME SCENE

"Well Reid how did you sleep?" Asked Rossi as he walk over to him.

"Pretty good, the beds here is a bit small but its fine."

"Good, so what did you find?"

"Well it seems like the dad came downstairs first and the rest if the family was shocked seeing the dad tied up likes this so they agreed to be tied up thinking everything well be ok."

"Is anything stolen here?"

"No nothing it's just like to other crime die blocks down."

"We also think the unsubs are very close around here since both murder was only a five block distance." Said Morgan.

"Ok then tell the guards to send more guards in this area and also I want to know when those girls are here yet." Said Hotch.

"There's also one thing we missed during the last scene." Said Reid as he walks towards the group.

"And that is?" Asked Prentiss.

"Both home invasion had two thing in common. One- both house looking highly alike to each other and second the family looks similar to another like the same skin color and age."

"So this means its personal or they practicing on some pony to kill and these aren't the real victims."

"So the problem is who are they really targeting?" Asked JJ.

"I think it's the unsubs own family just look, the dad if course had multiple stabbing and a bullet to the head but for the others it's just a bullet no stabbing or tortured just a silent and painless death."

The Elements had just arrived at the crime scene it and when they entered they saw three ponies tied up dead.

"Uh why is such disgusting things just laid there?" Said Rarity in a loud voice.

The team turned around and saw the ponies.

"Good there here now I want JJ and Reid to take the girls to ask questions in the neighborhood if they saw any thing shades,sudden movements and ponies fidgeting. Also teach them something along the way. Said Hotch. "Morgan and Prentiss drive around and look for a place where is unsubs can spy on their victims.

"Rossi get the guards here we need to tell them about the connection these murder have with the unsub."

Reid, JJ and the harmony left the house and started walking down the street.

"oh shoot I forgot my cell ill be right back." Said JJ as she runs back into the house.

"So what are we learning today?" Asked Twilight.

"Well were going to teach you girls about self control." Replied Reid.

"And how do we do that?" Asked Rainbow.

"Remember how Rarity react when she saw those bodies well you can't do that and also if there's anything that you want from the crime scene you can't have it or your'll be charged with theft and destruction of evidence."

"How will we not think of a dead body right in front of us?" Asked Fluttershy.

"That's for you to find out and decide remember we can only teach you so much."

Morgan and Prentiss are driving around the same pony with the top hat three times before they noticed a apartment complex four blocks near the murder and it had a large windows. They decide to check it out, when they arrived they superintendent wanted a warrant before any of the could entered. So they left.

"Something isn't right abut that place I can feel it." Said Morgan as they entered the car.

"Same thing well come back this afternoon and ask again and hopefully with a warrant."

(Well I feel fucking sick right now :pinkiesad: why you may ask? Well ill tell ya. First fuck school that means I not have time for ponies wait never mind I bronies friends in school. Also I feel said for the people who have school tomorrow my school days is on the ninth. Second-it's really hard to type on the iPad since its a iPad mini and my fingers hurt very much. And finally they third reason is that I need ideas I have writers block so I may not post a chapter every day, P.S I may have longer chapters when my writer block is over. Also I'm sorry for the short chapters and holy shot I forgot to buy my cool supplies I gotta run bye.)

Author's Note

Idk what the fuck is wrong with me. Anyway enjoy. Also I need a proofreader and a editor so please help me out.