A Passionate Afternoon

by FireFlick

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance
Length: 1050

Rainbow Dash is on her way to Fluttershy's, but Fluttershy has other plans. :o

This is an unfinished clopfic. This is the entire first chapter with, hopefully, more to come.
This is my very first story and any critique or criticism is welcomed.
Note: I am also 15 years old, so if there are too many grammatical errors, please inform me so I can improve for future fics.

Synopsis:
As Rainbow Dash gets ready to show off her newly mastered tricks to Fluttershy, Fluttershy is nowhere to be seen. Where might she be hiding? Or more importantly: what is she doing? Find out in the first chapter in this erotic fimfiction.

Ps. I pulled an all-nighter trying to complete this, so pleaas spare me your belittling comments. However, I never turn away helpful criticism!
Thanks!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-08-29 14:09:19 UTC

A Friendly Introduction

Rainbow Dash was streaking through the air, soaring through insurmountable heights during a bright, warm, and pulchritudinous afternoon. She was heading towards Fluttershy’s house to share her newest and finest tricks to her best friend. “I hope Flutters likes them”, Rainbow Dash muttered to herself, “I sure wouldn’t want to disappoint her”. Dash knew that Flutters wouldn’t care if she pulled the tricks off or not, but still wanted to impress her friend. As Dash continued, she began to reminisce about past adventures with her pony compatriots. She thought about the time Fluttershy scared the obstinate dragon out of its gem-filled cavern, and saved Ponyville in its entirety. She recalled the time Fluttershy saved her life when she removed the thorn out of the irascible lions paw, only to reveal the lions true peaceful demeanor. In fact, Dash thought, Fluttershy was an exceedingly intrepid and audacious individual, who sought out justice and friendship whenever she could. Dash blushed as she streaked through the vivid blue and white sky, thinking about Fluttershy’s ethos.

After a few minutes of further daydreaming, Dash located Fluttershy’s cottage near the forest. “How funny”, Dash exclaimed, “Why would Flutters live so close to the periphery of the everfree forest if she was afraid of what wallowed within?” Dash floated down to the ground quickly, eager to demonstrate her new abilities to her friend. Dash skipped towards the tall oak, feeling quite more jovial than usual. Her rainbow-striped tail flicked to-and-fro, revealing a small portion of her cyan colored flank. Dash began rapping at Fluttershy’s door; eager and enthusiastic about the impending fun she would be having. “Fluttershy, I’m here!” Dash hollered, “Remember? We had agreed to meet up today so I could show you some of my new-fangled moves!” There was no response. “What the hey? Flutters, are you there, girl?” Still no retort. Rainbow Dash transcended upwards towards one of Fluttershy’s windows to determine if anypony was inside. Dash swiftly peered inside Flutters bedroom, hoping that Flutters was alright. “Hmmm ohhhhh hnnnng sweet Celestia!” Fluttershy yelled with an abundance of enthusiasm, “Why havened I tried this before?” Dash’s mouth was agape as she looked through the window. Before her, Fluttershy was vigorously stroking her marehood, and was moaning in sync to each of her thrusts. Fluttershy continued to rub herself for a good few minutes before nearing her climax. “Oh…My” Fluttershy moaned as her hoof jammed itself inside her sweet sensitive vagina, rubbing vigorously and intently with each movement of her hoof. Fluttershy could no longer endure the waves of ecstasy that flooded her body. She increased the speed of her rubbing. Due to such fast movements, her bottom hooves heightened into the air, moving her soft, lush plot into view of Rainbow Dash, who was still hidden behind the windows pane. “Ahhhhh!” The yellow pony screamed in ecstasy as white streams of cum careened down her plot, eventually landing onto the beds sheets beneath. Fluttershy continued to rub her wet and juicy pussy for the duration of her lustful orgasm, and when finished, collapsed like a ragdoll on her bed. Fluttershy’s hind legs were sprawled out onto opposite sides of her body, revealing Fluttershy’s glistening pussy to Rainbow Dash. Rainbow Dash, not knowing what to do, blushed. Never before had she seen one of her friends this exposed. Rainbow Dash had before pleasured herself, but it hadn’t occurred to her that her friends undertook such actions for themselves. Rainbow Dash then felt something run down her leg. She extended her hoof, and touched her hind leg to examine what it was. To her surprised, the liquid had turned out to be her own marejuice. “What the…” Dash exclaimed as she realized what the liquid was. She reached down once more to touch herself between her hind legs to confirm her assumptions. Sure enough, it was her very own sticky, clear, and wet cum. Rainbow, still curious, touched herself once again, but this time using the method Fluttershy had just displayed. She inserted the corner of her hoof inside her cyan folds, and began to caress her pussy. She started slow, not wanting to rush her impending pleasure. Rainbow flicked at her clit playfully, and allowed a quiet moan of pleasure to escape her lips. Rainbow soon quickened the pace, moving her hoof up and down vigorously. Rainbow moaned louder and sexier with each one of her hoof movements. Her clit began to moisten, preparing itself for the impending pleasure. Small portions of moisture ran down her spread legs, making the experience 20% cooler. As she reached her orgasm, her moans became louder, and her thrusts became faster and deeper. “Ohhhh boy!” Rainbow Dash cried with extreme fervency, “I’m gonna cum!” A few minutes later, Dash’s body bursted with passion and ecstasy. Thick white juices exploded out of her pussy, soaking her tail and hind legs. Dash’s legs weakened, leaving them motionless in mid-air. Rainbow moaned passionately for the duration of her climax, and finally collapsed to the plush grass below. Rainbow lied motionless, still filled with lust and pleasure.

“Oh, Rainbow dash!” a voiced exclaimed tauntingly. “I hope you’re not finished, because we still have a lot to do.” It was Fluttershy. “I heard you here outside enjoying yourself without me. Forgive me if I forgot our little get together, but I got carried away,” Fluttershy said. Rainbow thought that she sounded a little more promiscuous than usual.

"Uh, hey, Flutters. I was just um..."

“Save your excuses,” snapped Fluttershy, “We have work to do.”

Rainbow Dash followed Fluttershy into her house, still feeling a bit queasy about what was about to happen. Fluttershy motioned for Dash to sit down. Fluttershy looked Rainbow over, scanning every inch of her body from head to hoof. “Oh, Dashie,” Fluttershy said. “Why don’t I show you some of my tricks instead?” With that statement, Fluttershy lied down on a fours right in front of Dashes hind legs. Fluttershy lifted her front hooves, and made contact with the insides of Dashes hind legs. Fluttershy slowly separated Rainbows legs, revealing her moist warm pussy. Juices from her last orgasm were still soaked into her blue coat. Fluttershy moved her mouth in slowly with her tongue extended, ready to taste Rainbows moist pussy.

To be continued