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The Time Has Come

by Commissar Rarity
[Humanized] Trixie discovers her family's secret past as demon hunters, and finds herself travelling the same path, heading to the distant lands of Prussia, to save a castle besieged by demons. But who is this mysterious girl following Trixie?

Funny how things turn out. Trixie, disgraced from both her failures in Ponyville, is a vagabond who finds solace in a bottle. Until one day, a griffon shows her the truth behind her lineage: The Lulamoon family were once proud demon hunters. And the griffon nation of Prussia is in bad need of a demon hunter.

One of their sacred castles, Fortnight, has fallen prey to an onslaught of demons. And as it turns out, Trixie's the only demon hunter left in the land of Equestria. Except for the part where she's not really a demon hunter.

As if a castle of horrors isn't bad enough, Trixie also has to put up with a mysterious girl haunting and fighting her every step of the way.


This is being written solely to learn more about action scenes, so please comment on what needs to be done better. It's also inspired by Devil May Cry, Metal Gear Rising, and Bayonetta. Expect references, both subtle and explicit.
Cover art by MScootaloo; used with permission. It's how Trixie looks in the story.
[NaPoWriMo 2013] Entry One
Link to Entry Two.

Teen
Complete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Adventure
Human
 
TS

17471 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

7 Chapters:

  1. Hidden Past 2013-09-01 20:42:19 UTC
    2141
  2. Roar of Anger 2013-09-03 14:56:04 UTC
    2079
  3. Red & Black 2013-09-04 20:28:04 UTC
    2289
  4. Rules of Nature 2013-09-05 18:20:59 UTC
    2458
  5. The Stains of Time 2013-09-09 01:17:21 UTC
    3009
  6. Red Sun 2013-09-13 21:20:13 UTC
    2532
  7. It Has To Be This Way 2013-09-19 19:58:55 UTC
    2963