Cover Image

The Scar

by FriendlyTwo3
You've been held prisoner in Chrysalis's dungeon for nearly a year. After a month of freedom, you find that you didn't get the hero's welcome you thought you'd get. Instead, all you got was a permanent reminder of what she di

Growing up, you always thought getting an eye-scar would be cool. Like it would be a symbol of your many victories in battle. Now that you have one, you realize that it's just a testament to your weakness. That you couldn't be stronger. That you failed.

Now you walk the streets of Ponyville alone. The ponies you once called your acquaintances shun you and pay you no mind. All except for one cross-eyed Pegasus who's blatantly unaware of your hell.

Perhaps she's the first in a long time you can call 'friend.'

Here’s a theme I think could work for the story. Got a better one? Let me know in the comments. Take Us Back by Alela Diane.

Hey, if you liked the story, you think you could add it to a group or two?

Teen
Incomplete
Sad
Anthro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
 
QDDOC

13583 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

10 Chapters:

  1. The Mail Mare 2013-08-30 18:12:34 UTC
    2414
  2. Nightmares 2013-09-05 19:28:19 UTC
    992
  3. A Day in the Life 2013-09-08 06:43:33 UTC
    2070
  4. Family 2013-09-10 04:17:50 UTC
    810
  5. Morning 2013-09-13 21:34:13 UTC
    851
  6. Another Day, Another Headache 2013-09-23 03:46:17 UTC
    1436
  7. The Chair 2013-09-26 03:37:52 UTC
    630
  8. Not Going Anywhere 2013-09-29 06:53:13 UTC
    954
  9. Spacing Out 2013-10-07 05:25:03 UTC
    1981
  10. Something's Wrong Here 2013-11-03 05:49:14 UTC
    1445