The Darkness within

by DJ Da5h

Rating: mature
Tags: Twilight Sparkle, Gore, Trixie, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Spike
Length: 2056

My first attempt at writing a fanfic! any help would be great

Published 2012-02-26 06:14:02 UTC
Last updated 2012-02-27 09:22:11 UTC

Chapter one

Please bear with me, this is my first attempt at writing a fanfic, the start is a little boring but stick with it!
Any help or ideas would be great

Chapter 1- The Awakening

Twilight was awoken by a loud “Thump” Knowing it was too late for any ponies to be awake she slowly pulled herself out of bed, she looked over at spike. She could just see the blankets moving up and down
“Figures” Said twilight as she descended down the stairs to the front door, as she got closer to the door she could hear foots steps, they were soft, like someone was trying to sneak around
Knowing the dangers of equestria, applejack had convinced her to keep some sort of weapon in her house, twilight had chosen to keep a baseball bat, she did not think of this choice back then but she was starting to regret it. Twilight picked up the bat from its spot by the window
“Never thought I would need this” Twilights voiced squeaked in a way that showed fear in her voice
Twilight slowly opened the door, just enough to poke her eye out. She looked around but says nothing; she opened the door a little more. Outside a large "Crash" sound could be heard
Not knowing what this noise was, the already scared twilight made a quick jump for the bookshelf, She continued to lean against it, panting hard “Ok twilight, you’ve got this all you have to do is open the door and look around a little, then you can go back to bed” The thought of returning to her soft bed was enough to make the pony continue. As twilight opened the door further she could see a shadowy figure moving, the shape resembled a pony, this calmed twilight enough to allow her to go talk to the pony and see if anything was wrong
Twilight started trotting toward the shadowy pony, as twilight got closer she could see the cape and hat that the pony was wearing. The more twilight thought about this she remembered something
“Trixi..” Before twilight could even finish, some magical force closed her mouth, stopping her from finishing
“Quite you stupid pony” After hearing this voice twilights theory’s where corrected
“Trixie? What are you doing here?” Whispered twilight, softly enough that the unicorn could hear
“I’ve returned to get my cart back, you idiot” Trixie said with a loud snob
“Trixie, your cart got crushed, don’t you remember?”
“The cart its self yes, but stuff inside had a certain spell to keep of greedy ponies” “It all should be slightly under the ground, now if you do excuse me i must find my things, Twilight please don’t not tell any of you greedy friends where my items are”
Something rose from deep inside twilights mind “My friends ARE NOT GREEDY”
“Well well, looks like some pony finally grew some. It’s a shame it took this long” Trixie said with a grin on her face “But I will not take back what I said, because me and you both know they are”
This only made twilight angrier, she looked at the bat she was holding in her hooves, but managed to keep her mind of such things
“The great and powerful Trixie must depart, Twilight you should return to your home, you look disgusting “Trixie said in a such a way to show that she did not care for chatting
Something in twilights mind snapped there and then, something she was keeping out of her mind finally got in
As Trixie was walking away, twilight looked at her bat. She tapped on trixies shoulder “Oh Trixie you forgot something”
Trixie turned, she was about to say something but it was too late, twilights bat had already connected with Trixie head, the young pony was out like a light
Twilight smiled and started giggling, this felt so right and she didn’t want it to end. She picked up Trixie with her magic and started walking back home, She didn’t know what she was gonna do, all she knew was she was gonna do it
Twilight entered the library quietly, making sure not to awaken the sleeping dragon in the upper level
“Now where was that hatch?”
The hatch she was talking off was the entry to the “sound proof” lower level, only she knew it was even there after stumbling onto it during her weekly clean up, she had spent the best of 2 weeks updating and fixing this room to be her private study
But tonight it would be used for something else, something she never intended on using it for This...

Chapter 3

Chapter 3- The end

Twilight pulled up a sharp knife with her magic (No hooves required), She softly rubbed it along trixies neck, Just softly enough that she could feel it, but no cuts were made. This made Trixie even more scared, she started shaking in fear
“Now now, If you move to much this might hurt...” Whispered twilight in an soft voice
Moments after saying this, twilight pulled away. She liked to play with her kill, makes it so much sweeter when she decides to end it. Thinking of This only put a bigger smile on her face
Trixies sighed in relief, trying to think of a way out. Twilight returned with some sort of clamp, it reminded trixie of a bear trap. Twilight carefully layed it under trixies leg, just close enough so if she moved too much it would close up on her. Trixie looked down at the trap, and flinched. The worst thing she could of done. The bear trap closed up on trixies leg, Blood splattered everywhere. If you had listened enough you might of even heard the crack of her bone as the sharp claws nearly snapped her leg in half
All Trixie could do was scream “Mhhhh” and shake uncontrollably. Twilight leaned in for a closer look, seeing this chance Trixie kicked twilight in an attempt to knock her out.
“Son of a Bitch” Twilight Yelled as she pulled her hoof to her nose “You shouldn’t have done that”
Twilight once again leaned in, but held trixies leg with her magic this time.
“Ouch, looks like in gonna have to take it off” Twilight said As she began pulling the bear trap open
Before it could fully open she let go. Another shot of pain shot into trixies leg.
“Mhhhhh” Screamed Trixie
“Opps, Butter fingers” Said twilight
Once again she began pulling the trap open, she managed to open it, She picked it up
“Hmmmm....”
She let go of the trap, it feel in the mess that once was trixies lower leg
“Opps sorry trix, I didn’t see you leg under all that mess” She grinned
She decided to leave the trap there, not only for the pleasure but it was bloody heavy, even with magic.
“Now now, what to do?” Said twilight “Any ideas trix?”
The only thing the pony could mutter under the muffled screams was “Mffffhh”
“What was that? You want me to clean up this mess?” Twilight skipped over to the bench and picked up a saw
“This should do”
As the pony returned, Trixie noticed what she was holding and let out more muffled words. Twilight began investigating the mess
“Hmm... Doesn’t seem too much here” Giggled Twilight “Might as well cut it all off, how does that sound?”
Trixie let out another muffled scream. “Sounds like a yes to me”
Twilight began sawing, the sound was terrible. But twilight seemed to like it, her grin increased into a smile. Trixie was screaming as loud as she could, as tears began rolling down her chest. After about 2 minutes of sawing twilight cut into the bone, The sounds seemed to get the pony excited and she jumped up
“Seems like I could pull the rest off if i tried” Twilight whispered
Twilight started looking through the pile to find the skin still holding the leg on
“Ah ha, Found you” Yelled twilight
Trixie could only watch as twilight began tugging on the only part of her leg that was still attached , More blood began to pour out of her leg as twilight pulled and pulled. Finally the skin gave way as a loud Ripping sound could be heard....
Twilight fell back, and start laughing uncontrollably, she even started snorting. But when she looked up at Trixie. She noticed she had stopped shaking and She was very pale
“Well i looks like you out of blood” Said twilight, still laughing from before “I guess i should finish you off now, don’t wanna be too cruel”
As she said this twilight ripped the knife from trixies hand and plunged it into her heart, Trixie sighed a sigh or relief
Twilight whispered into trixies ear “We had fun tonight” As the poor pony finally lost all the blood she could afford
Twilights smile started to turn to a frown now, She had used up all of her fun
But then she remembered something, someone, who also has been upsetting her
The smile began to rise again as she started laughing
“Im coming for you next” Laughed twilight in delight, as she ran off into the darkness...
The End
Who should die next? Comment below! This story is dedicated to "Chigens" Who enjoys trixies pain

Chapter 2

Chapter 2-The Fear

Trixie awoke to find herself bound and gagged to a table, She Looked around in fear to try to find where she was, the lights were off, but she could just make out twilight laying down some sort of tools on a small bench. Twilight turned to see the pony awake
“Oh the great and powerful Trixie I presume? Not so great and powerful now are you.”
Trixie tried to cast some sort of spell to help her out of these binds
“Oh what’s wrong? Spells not working?” Twilight laughed as she turned to pick up a sharp object “Nothing’s going to help you here” As twilight finished she turned back to Trixie “Are you ready for some real fun?”
Trixie struggled as twilight got closer; she managed to get one of her hooves out. As twilight leaned towards Trixie, she threw a punch at twilight. But her punch didn’t get far away from the table, Twilight quickly but firmly pushed the knife into Trixies hoove, the pony screamed out in pain, it had gone straight through. “You couldn’t keep in your bounds could you?” as twilight said this, she pushed the end of the knife through onto the desk “but i guess now you can have you gift earlier”
Tears started running out of Trixie eyes, she tried to talk but all that came out was “Mhhhn”
Twilight just looked at Trixie and laughed, then she began walking back to the table to where the other tool were layed out on the table, She could see the bat that twilight must of hit her with, instantly after this, her started hurting just as much as her hand
She let out another “Mhhhnn”, Twilight spun around and looked at the pony “Oh Trixie if you love that so much, you will just love what I’ve got in store for the night ahead” Twilight’s expression made Trixie’s heart sink, she stopped crying and tried to focus her mind, the pain of her hand and head were making it hard. She had to think of a way out of here, maybe if she could get her other hoof free she could grab the knife and... Before she could imagine what she to do her body had cut off all thought of the subject, showing that it did not want to go through with it. She looked toward at twilight; she knew something was wrong with her, even though she had only known the pony for a little bit. She noticed something was different with her, just by watching her walk and sway
Suddenly twilight turned to Trixie, in her hand was some sort of sickle, This scared Trixie to the bone
“Mhhhhhh” Was all Trixie could yell, she knew no one could hear her, but out of pure terror she still tried
“This is where the fun begins” Said twilight, with excitement in her voice