The Cutie Mark Crusader's Trouble

by IceCreamSparkle

Chapter 1: AppleBloom's Dream

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“Ugh! We did everything on the list to get our cutie marks, but nothing!” Applebloom yelled as she flopped onto the floor of the clubhouse of the Cutie Marker Crusaders.

“Do you think we get our cutie marks at all?” a White Unicorn sadly asked to the Young earth pony and the Young Pegasus.

“Of course we SweetieBelle, right, Apple bloom?” said a Young orange Pegasus looking at the other Crusaders

Apple Bloom just groaned then she sat up “I do not know Scoots, do you guys have any other ideas?” she asked sadly.

Scootaloo, SweetieBelle and Apple Bloom just thought for a moment before Scootaloo came up with an idea

“How about we help Fluttershy with her animals?”

“That was Sunday and that didn’t go to well” Apple bloom answered as she sighed

“It was bad; Rarity had to wash me five times when I got to the Boutique, she complained that I had hay in my mane and I smelt like I just came back from a zoo.” Sweetie Belle said as she tapped her hoof on the floor of the club house.

“How about we help Twilight?” asked Sweetie belle

“You’re kidding!” said Apple Bloom

“Boooriinnnggg!!” said Scootaloo with a groan

“I know, we can’t help Rainbow dash, she has a broken leg and broke both of her wings again.” Scootaloo said sadly

    After a while, it seems the sun has set.

“Welllll..It seems it’s about supper time for me.” Scootaloo said as she got onto her hoofs then stretched

“Scoot’s is right, I guess I should go too, Rarity is making my favorite food” Sweetie Belle also got up and stretched

Apple Bloom yawned “Yea, you both are right, see you both tomorrow, then.”

Scootaloo and Sweetie belle was almost out the club house door then they looked at Apple bloom, waiting.

“The Cutie Marker Crusaders’ Meeting is over!” Apple Bloom said tiredly

“Good bye Apple bloom!” said Sweetie Belle

“See you later!” Said Scootaloo

Then they were gone.

Apple bloom rolled over on the floor and yawned again

‘Man why am I so tried?’ Apple bloom thought to herself as she yawn again

‘A nap wouldn’t hurt.’  She thought as she slowly close she eyes and fell in a deep sleep.


Apple bloom woke up and she looked around

It was so dark and sweet apple acres was just gray, no color at all.

‘Why does Sweet apple acres look so gray and why is it dark?’ apple bloom thought to herself and walks over to a tree.

“Hey! I told you to stay away from my farm!” a voice suddenly shouts

Apple bloom turned around to see a familiar orange earth pony running to her

Apple Bloom was suddenly happy to see her big sister: AppleJack and she hopped up and down when Apple Jack got close she quickly stopped when she saw Apple Jacks Face, it was mixed….with Angry and sadness.

“I told you to keep away from my farm…and my f-f-family.” Apple Jack said with tears in her eyes

“Applejack? What’s wrong? Why are you crying?” Apple bloom asked really worriedly

“Get away from here…we do not need you.” Said Apple jack then backs away from Apple Bloom

“W-w-what? What are you talking about Appl-“  Apple bloom started to say but she was cut off with a slap to the face, the pain hurt like a bee sting.

“I told YOU to never come back!” Apple jack yells angrily in Apple Blooms Face

Apple Bloom Whimpered and tears up “w-w-what did I d-d-do?”

“Do NOT play dumb with me! You know what you did! You should be very ashamed of yourself! I HATE YOU!” Apple Jack shouted again and then she ran off.

Apple Bloom just sat on the ground, crying.

“i-i-I am confused, i-i-I didn’t do anything!”  Apple Bloom Sobbed

Suddenly a dark mist was forming around Apple Bloom, a deep heavy mist.

Apple bloom wiped her tears and looks around

‘W-w-what’s happening?’ she thought

The mist forming at her hooves felt like there were on fire

‘Ow! I need to get out of here!” she thought, alarmed

Apple Bloom tried to move her legs but she was getting dizzier then that time where she rode a ride at a Carnival, Apple bloom was seeing double, her stomach feeling sick, the burning pain increased and moved up her body.

‘I-i-it hurts…w-w-will I d-d-die?’ apple bloom thought as she fainted in the middle of the mist


“Apple bloom? Are you ok?” a voice brought Apple bloom back to reality

“a-a-Apple jack?” apple bloom said sleepily and she looks around

It seems Apple Bloom is not in the clubhouse but in her own room

Apple Jack Breathe a sigh of relieve “oh, thank Celestia!”

“Where am I?”Ask Apple bloom as she tries to move her body and for some reason it hurt like she ran 7 miles around Ponyville.

“Your room AppleBloom, You didn’t come inside for 2 hours, Big Mac, granny smith and myself were getting worried about you, and then we found you on the club house floor crying and yelling like you’re in some kind of pain.”  Said Apple Jack

‘Wait what? B-but how? It was just a dream!’ thought Apple Bloom

“Listen, Apple Bloom we made some fried oat and daisies would you like a plate?” Apple Jack Asked worriedly.

“Sure…and a cup of water please?” apple bloom answered the Orange earth bounded pony

Apple Jack was almost out of the room

“Apple Jack, I do not feel so good” Apple Bloom said tiredly.

Apple jack turned around to see her little Sister

“Head ache?” she guessed

“Y-y-yea I think so…it hurts badly.” AppleBloom answered

“Well you better go back to sleep, maybe the sleep can help...” said Apple Jack

“Ok…good night Apple Jack” she groaned in pain and goes to sleep.

Apple jack switched the light off then walked out of Applebloom’s room shutting the door in the process.


“The Master will be pleased.” Said a cloaked pony figure in the Cutie Mark crusader’s Club House

A dark portal opened on one of the walls in side of the club house and a cloaked pony walked out of it.

“Everything going to plan, Sage?” the new cloaked pony said in a smoothing dark voice

“Yes, Storm, everything is going well as planned.”

“Ok good, you know how HE gets when It doesn’t.” Storm said as her horn glowed bright black and wrote down in a notebook.

“We should go and tell him ourselves, isn’t that right Storm?” He said as he looked out the window.

“That is correct.” She stepped out of the way of the portal going back.

Sage stopped looking at the moon then walked to where Storm is and walked in the dark portal Storm followed after him, then the portal shut, leaving nothing behind.