When Life Gives You Vorticies

by Featherprop
It's Helicity's birthday, and Featherprop has whipped up a surprise. No, really, it's Helicity's birthday, and this is the surprise!

When Helicity's research on weather is torn apart by a professor, Featherprop decides to set up a surprise for her birthday. With the help of some Wonderbolts, a few bits of cloud, and a stack of pies, he wants to give her a chance to try the ideas she believes in.

When he springs the surprise, she takes a chance, but will the results be worth the risk? There's danger in storms, and even ponies who know what they're doing get caught unawares sometimes.

Yes yes, I know, there's OCs, but she's still cute, at least! Anyway, you should all read this story and then go wish Helicity (@helicityponi, Helicity here) a happy birthday, 'cause I wrote it for her. There's a little bit of romance, but nothing beyond some kissing. Come on, everyone's seen kissing, right?

If anyone sees typos or other errors, please point 'em out- I went past my deadline on this and I'm ashamed to say I didn't edit as closely as I'd like to.

Everyone
Complete
Romance
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Comedy
 
OS

5114 words: Estimated 26 minutes to read

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