Ticket to Adventure

by Krager

Rating: everyone
Tags: Comedy, Adventure
Length: 1074

comic i wrote and my friend does art for, it is about a couple of ponies going on adventures

comic i wrote and my friend does art for, it is about a couple of ponies going on adventures
link to friends deviantart page

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-09-03 01:49:38 UTC

Enter the snake

Focus back on ticket walking through forest

Ticket looks nervous

Rustling in bushes

Ticket looks even more nervous

Something jumps out of bushes

Ticket screams

Turns out to be bunny

Ticket breaths a sigh of relief

More noises behind ticket

Ticket panics and begins to run

As running Trees look scary

owl hoots

Bats fly into ticket

Ticket blinded by bats falls down a hill

Falls hurting herself

Ticket says "ouch" with eyes closed

opens eyes and see ruins in front of her

nervously gets up and proceed in

enters large dark room

center of the room is a statue of a snake with light from the roof falling on it

Ticket smiles and moves quickly towards it

suddenly she hears a hissing

out of shadows comes huge cobra

Ticket starts to back up only to see that the snake has blocked the door with its body

Ka'ah says " who dare enter my temple?"

Ticket says "My name is Ticket"

Ka'ah says "well well well look what we have here" "you now stand before Ka'ah the snake king" "what brings you to my temple?"

Ticket says "your statue... i... i need it"

Ka'ah says starting to circle Ticket "and why do you need my statue?'

Ticket says "So i can get my stuff back from some bullies"

Ka'ah now beginning to hypnotize Ticket says "i bet they said some mean things to you"

Ticket says yes starting to tear up

Ka'ah begins to coil around Ticket

Ka'ah says "now now no need to cry" "i'll fix everything"

Ticket says now under Ka'ah's spell "really?"

Ka'ah says "yes little pony" "i'll make the pain go away"

Ka'ah now has Ticket in his coils and proceeds to open his mouth to eat her

suddenly Star jumps out of the shadows and kicks Ka'ah in the head

Ka'ah is caught off guard and looses his grip on Ticket

The spell has also worn off

Ticket regains her faculties

Star yells "RUN"

Ka'ah snaps back and tries to bite both of the ponies but they dodge and run out through the open door

They get out of the temple a bit before Ka'ah breaks right through the stones that make you the temple

They continue to run while Ka'ah keeps trying to eat them

suddenly they find themselves on a cliff

they look down to see how far it is down(it far)

they turn around to see Ka'ah in front of them

Ka'ah says "Nowhere to run" and begins to slither slowly towards them

Ka'ah continues "two for the prise of one. this must be my lucky day"

Star facing Ka'ah asks Ticket "Can you fly us out of here?"

Ticket says scared out of her minds "i can't... I can't fly or use magic"

Star looks back at Ticket and says "what? you can't fly or use magic"

Ticket says "i'm sorry i got you into this mess"

Ka'ah now within striking distance says "it's been fun but now it's time for me to eat"

with that Ka'ah lunges at the two ponies, fangs bared

Star quickly uses his magic to make a shield bubble around Ticket and himself

This stops Ka'ah a bit but Ka'ah is biting on the shield, slowly cracking it

Star looks back at Ticket seeing her looking back at him, she is scared

Star eyes begin to glow white

He begins to use his magic to grab the snake

while this is happening his cutie mark appears

with all his might, Star throws the snake over the edge of the cliff

Ka'ah screams as he plummets off the cliff

Star breathing heavily, turns to ticket

Ticket looks at Star

Star looking badass asks "are you ok?"

Ticket immediately hugs Star, catching him off guard and says "THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU"

Star blushing now says "lets go back to school"

Ticket says "yeah i want my stuff back"

Ticket pulls the snake statue out of her saddle bag

Intro

Inside school building

teacher comes in

Teacher says "settle down class we have a new pony in our class"

Ticket walks in

Teacher says "please welcome are new student Ticket"

Ticket says "pleased to meet you all"

class is slightly shocked

Teacher says "please take the seat next to Star sparkler"

Ticket proceeds to move to seat

Star sparkler stares at ticket, enchanted

Star sparkler says " nice to meet you"

Star sparkler blushes

Ticket blushes

Ticket says "nice to meet you too"

Show clock time progression

Bell rings

Teacher says " that time for recess"

Class leaves classroom

Ticket heads to a tree

Pulls out a comic book

Its a Daring Do comic book

Other ponies playing in the distance

To bullies up here next to ticket

One unicorn one Pegasus

Unicorn says "what you got there?"

Takes comic book from ticket

Ticket stands up and says "give that back"

Unicorn says "why don't you make us"

Ticket at times to take comic book back

Unicorn uses magic to throw to pegasus

Pegasus says " why don't you use magic or fly to get it?"

Ticket mumbles "I can't"

Unicorn says "I'm sorry I didn't hear that"

Teaches says louder "I can fly or use magic"

Bullies precede to laugh

Ticket cries a little

Unicorn says "wow you're sad"

Pegasus says "I can't believe an Alicorn is so weak"

Pegasus says " you're so useless"

Ticket stops crying and gets angry

Ticket says "I am not useless"

Unicorn says "why don't you prove it? There is a ruin deed inside that forest with an ancient statue inside it. Bring it back and we'll give your comic back and stop calling you useless"

Ticket stares at forest

Ticket nervously swallows

Ticket looks at comic book and see his daring do on the cover

Ticket gains confidence

Tickets says "you're on"

Ticket runs into forest

Bell rings

Teacher says "recess is over. everypony back in"

Star looks for ticket

Star hears bullies

Unicorn says "she's so stupid. No one goes into that forest and comes back."

Star asks "who are you talking about?"

Pegasus says "the new filly"

An immediate look of shock falls Star's face

Star asks angrily "why would she do that?"

They say "we don't know" with a scruncy face

Bell rings again

bullies headed inside

Star pauses

he looks at school then at forest

Star runs into forest