Pikimena's Revenge

by The Great Bronie

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Tragedy
Length: 1298

Pinkie doesn't like the way she's being treated so Pikimena steps in to "help"

Pinkie learns that what has happened to ponyville while she was blacked out. HUGE twist ending

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-09-04 22:39:46 UTC

Chapter 1

Pinkie woke up not in a very comfortable position. She sprung up ready to rush out the door to go meet twilight when she realized she was standing in twilight’s house. She looked around but couldn’t see spike or twilight. As she began up the stairs she fell down to the ground at the top step. She looked up to see the entire top half of twilight’s house burned down. She saw that instead of clouds the sky was covered in smoke. She stepped outside to see Ponyville… in ashes. “Oh gosh. How long was I asleep?”

“Quite a while my dearest pinkie” She whirled around to face a mirror. Only it wasn’t her reflection.

“Who are you?” she asked slightly afraid. The other pony smiled to reveal blood stained razor sharp teeth. She looked just like pinkie only with red eyes full of hatred and anger, and a flat mane instead of a poofy one, she also had slightly more pale coloring.

“I,” she said in a low rumble, “am Pikimena.”

“I feel like I know that name.” Pinkie said.

“You should," the ground seemed to shake as Pikimena spoke ",I am the embodiment of all of your hatred and anger. Every angry feeling and thought you have ever had was powered by my existence. But to kill me would be to kill you.”

“I would never kill.” Exclaimed a shocked pinkie pie.

“Oh really, then why don’t we head over to Sweet Apple Acres and see who nobody is that you killed.” said Pikimena in a cool but dark tone

When pinkie arrived at Sweet Apple Acres there was another mirror propped up against the only remaining apple tree. She walked over to it and saw Pikimena again. Pinkie looked around at the devastation.

“No way I could have caused all this.” She thought reluctantly. Then she spotted it, it was apple bloom pinned under barn rubble. Pinkie ran over

“help… me… please” she whined. Suddenly pinkie blacked out. When she awoke, she saw apple blooms head had been completely crushed and her bones fragments and brain were scattered everywhere. Pinkie threw up.

“What have you DONE!” she shrieked at the mirror. Pikimena smiled evilly.

“Do you really want to know?” She asked

Pinkie breathed in slowly, “yes”

“good”

Fluttershy was out in the flower field playing with her bunny friend when she heard the call for all ponies to report to town square. She flew to town square. Pinkie was standing on a stage with an angry look. Her hair was flat and her flank and mane were paler.

“Oh great what is it this time.” Fluttershy whispered to twilight.

“I will tell you what it is," pinkie shouted ",I am tired of not being taken seriously. From now on anypony who doesn’t take me seriously will be PUNISHED!” Normally Fluttershy would go hide under her bed after a speech like this, but pinkie had already interrupted three other times she was playing with her animal friends so she blew a gasket.

“That is it Pinkie. We have had enough. You just need to stop bothering us with your STUPID SPEECHES!” Fluttershy screeched

A small yelp could be heard as a small piece of metal came out the other side of Fluttershy. Pinkie pulled back the knife and let Fluttershy hit the ground.

“Call me Pikimena.” she said in a low voice. Every pony ran screaming for their home. “Let’s start with Rarities shall we.” she suggested to herself. Spike heard and rushed to rarities house. When he got there Sweetybelle and Rarity were cowering in a corner.

“Hide" he said.

“Too late” bellowed a voice behind as strong hands drug the blade across his throat. He fell to his knees then lied there in a pool of his blood.

“Who’s next?” she said almost amused

“RUN!” Rarity screamed to Sweetybelle. She ran and hid as Rarity turned to face Pikimena. A powerful hoof clomped her in the face. She awoke just in time to have Pikimena push her out the window. A firm rope attached to her dresser and a noose around her neck, she swung there slowly, painfully, choking to death. Sweetybelle was standing behind Pikimena when she yelled

“RARITY!” Sweetybelle screamed. Pikimena turned around and leapt on top of Sweetybelle. Pikimena turned Sweetybelle’s head as far to left as she could when she heard a crack. Sweetybelle’s neck was snapped.

Next she went for Twilight’s. But Twilight was prepared ready to strike Pikimena with a spell the moment she saw her. What she didn’t expect was what happened next. Spike’s limp dead body was thrown up the stairs for twilight to see. She stared in awe as she looked at her faithful friends limp body. A tear rolled down her face. Suddenly she was hit in the face with a hammer. Pikimena then nailed up the exit and set the house on fire. As twilight panicked realizing she was trapped the fire burned her until she was nothing more than a charred pile of blood and bones. Rainbow Dash and Scootalo saw the fire and went to help. They put it out with their wings but when the smoke cleared Pikimena leapt from the house and tackled Scootalo out of the air. When they hit the ground the impact was too much for Scootalo and she broke her neck. As Rainbow Dash came speeding towards Pikimena, Pikimena spun around and threw a long blade at Rainbow Dash. She was going too fast to turn so the blade impaled her and went all the way through her body. She fell to the ground in a bloody mess.

Pikimena went to Sweet Apple Acres wanting to get this done nice and quick. She set explosives all around the house, barn, and down in the cellar. She detonated them and watched pure destruction happen. Inside the barn were Apple Bloom and Granny Smith. The rubble immediately killed Granny Smith but Apple Bloom wasn’t so lucky. The rubble pinned down the back of her legs shattering that part of her spine. But it wasn’t enough to kill her, so she was forced to be trapped in pain underneath that barn rubble for who knows how long.

Pikimena then one by one killed all the citizens of Ponyville, but that just wasn’t enough. She got on a train and took it to Canterlot. There she assassinated all of the royal guard one by one until she reached the throne room where Princess Luna and Princess Celestia were hiding. Princess Luna charged for Pikimena but Pikimena was too quick. She hopped on her back and dug her razor sharp teeth into Princess Luna’s throat. She then ran for Princess Celestia and pulled out a knife when she reached her she cut the knife deep to leave no bit of life in her.

She then rode the train back to Ponyville where she set up mirrors everywhere and then went to Twilights where she let Pinkie back in control.

“Oh my gosh. You did all that?” Pinkie asked astonished.

“We did all that, Pinkie. But now you have something for me. You have hatred for me. Therefore I no longer need you!” Pikimena leapt out of the mirror and onto Pinkie.

“Sir, she is almost back to us.” said a quiet voice

“Are you sure.” said the voice next to him

“Yes sir.”

“Good.” He said not quiet happy but relived

“Oh no, not good. She just had a relapse.”

“What do you mean?” he began to worry

“I mean she is going back through all the events in that world of hers.”

A tear rolled down his face. “At least she’s happy.”

The girl sat in the corner repeating the words, “Hi, I’m Pinkie Pie!”