More Like Her

by Holy

Rating: mature
Tags: Human, Applejack, Romance, Equestria Girls, Porn, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Sex
Length: 5046

Applejack desperately wants to fit in at Canterlot High, and the winter formal might just be her chance. While she thinks Rarity will steal the show, the two end up getting more intimate than she could ever imagine.

Applejack has spent days stressing about the upcoming winter formal. She can't find a date, and she thinks that she wont be able to have a good time. Her jealousy of the more popular girl, Rarity, only makes things worse.

When she finally makes it to the dance, Rarity fills her night with more than she could have ever hoped for.

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Published 2013-09-11 19:50:03 UTC
Last updated 2013-09-11 19:50:03 UTC

Love Etched Into the Backseat

Applejack walked out of the lunch line and into the cafeteria with her tray. She stopped for a moment to look out into the sea of students to try and find an empty table to try and enjoy her lunch, but she knew she was probably just going to end up tossing it anyway, she wasn't particularly in the mood. Peering over the crowd, she finally spots one and starts weaving through other kids and tables to get to her destination. She looks down for a moment to her boots as they knock along the hard tile of the cafeteria and sighs for a moment, then immediately tries to put on a brave face and walk to her table with confidence. She set her tray down onto the table with a soft rattle as she hit the seat and immediately dropped her act.

She hated to be in such a sour mood, but right now she really couldn't help it. Tonight was the night of the winter formal, and no matter how hard she tried, she couldn't get any guy to want to ask her. She had been trying to weeks to be extra friendly to every boy she came across, and even went as far as to put makeup on for a couple days. But no matter how hard she had tried, none of it ever went past friendly conversation, and none of them even stuck around that long. She sighed again, flicking her water bottle with the hand she didn't move to prop up her face as she stared out at the wall. She looked at it rock for a moment precariously, before settling back into its original position without a hint of interaction.

A cacophony of chatter was ringing out through the lunch room, but one conversation in particular stood out to Applejack as she turned to glance at the full table next to her.

"So was your dad really play for the Baltimare Ravens?"

"Does he really drop you off in a Mercedes every day?"

"How do you get your hair to look so amazing everyday?" A multitude of unfamiliar voices asked.

Applejack knew exactly who they were talking to. She knew her voice by heart.

"Please, please, one at a time. Now, my father was quite the..."

Applejack looked over at the table. It was obviously the popular kids table, only the best athletes and the most attractive kids sat there. She sort of tuned out all the chatter just to focus on the sight of her as she began to tell them the story of her luxurious life.

Rarity. She had to be the most popular girl in school. Everyone wanted a piece of her. It was like some stupid competition every time the girl walked down the hall to get her attention. And Applejack could see why. She wore the most expensive clothes and always had a perfect appearance and an aura of sophistication about her.

Applejack pushed her tray across the table and planted her head into her arms on the table. Rarity must have a line out the door of guys who want to take her to the dance, Applejack thought. Applejack hated to admit it to herself, but she was extremely jealous of Rarity. Not only because of the dates, but that she had to be friends with have the kids in the school as well. And just about everything else about her as well. She didn't hate the girl though, in fact, she kind of wished they could be friends. If only they weren't so starkly different. Now that Applejack thought about it, she really only had three people she cared enough for to really call friends.

One was her sister. The other was Rainbow Dash, but she hasn't had time too much time for anything with all the sports she gets into. The other was...

"Hiya Applejack!" A high pitched voice sang and jolted Applejack out of her pity party.

"Jeez, Pinkie. I gotta say, you scared me a bit." Applejack put a hand on her chest to calm herself a bit, but put on a relieved smile that she had someone to talk to now.

“Oh, sorry. I wanted it to be a surprise! But not to scare you. Anyway, I saw you over here down in the dumps and I thought why would Applejack be so..."

Applejack loved Pinkie like her own sister, but the girl could go on and on for days. Most of the time she just smiled and nodded until the last sentence if it wasn't something important.

"...So I decided that I would come over here to try to cheer you up! So, what's got you so upset." She stopped and tilted her head questioningly to Applejack, eagerly awaiting the answer.

"Well, the winter formal is tonight, and I still haven't gotten a..." Applejack trailed off a bit, not wanting to reveal her problem to her friend so easily.

"The dance? I didn't think that was your thing. What do you need for it? A dress? Shoes? A hat? More shoes?"

"N-No Pinkie. I just wanted to go to this one to try to... Oh, I don't know... show everyone that I'm not some dumb farm girl." And that she could be just as likable as Rarity was. Applejack slouched back down and started idly drawing circles in the table. She definitely didn't want to tell her friend about that problem.

"Oh come on Applejack, tons of people think you're great already, you don't have to go to some silly dance for that," Pinkie tried to assure her, but it wasn't getting through. She only thought about how much she wanted to be over there in Rarity's shoes, telling people about herself who were actually interested.

"Thanks, Pinkie," Applejack told her, mostly because she didn't want to argue with her about this. She felt that she needed to do this, since it felt like she had more people that wanted to tease her accent and choice of headwear rather than talk to her.

"So what did you need? A date?"

Applejack jolted a bit a Pinkie's sudden bluntness, but it seems she wasn't always as aloof as she would lead people to believe.

"Er, yes," Applejack let out, a bit embarrassed.

"You could go as my date," Pinkie said with a big, hopeful smile on her face.

"Heheh, Thanks, but I'll be okay."

"Awh, come on. I only have 16 right now," Pinkie said innocently.

"Dates!?" Applejack jerked her head over to meet her friends implication.

"Yup." She said proudly.

Applejack just stared at her for a moment before they both busted out in a fit of giggles together. Applejack spent the rest of lunch with Pinkie and the crowd that eventually formed around her. Being with Pinkie helped Applejack's mood tremendously, and she went through the rest of her classes feeling much easier about that night.

Later that evening Applejack sat in front of the mirror in her bathroom with a hairbrush and a sharp eye. She inspected every inch of herself, hoping the blue dress she bought would turn a couple heads. She fussed over every last wrinkle and strap, trying to make it look as perfect as possible as she frantically brushed her hair to look as good as she could get it. She never really brushed it in the first place, which made the process even more difficult. She stared at herself in the mirror with a worried expression, inspecting her amateur make up job for any flaws. No matter how good she looked, she couldn't help but feel crushed with nervousness.

"AJ? You better hurry! You're gonna be late!" A deep voiced boomed from down the stairs.

"Sorry! Just- Just give me a minute, Mac."

"Alright. I'm timing you!" He said as Applejack could here the front door shut.

"Oh..." She took a step back to look at herself in the mirror.

Her long, blonde hair laid down over her shoulder in soft curls at the end, and her face shined from the soft layer of makeup. The mascara made her beautiful green eyes shine brighter than ever. Any other person would think that she was a model, but Applejack couldn't help but feel like it wasn't enough and the butterflies in her stomach only amplified the feeling.

She closed her eyes and walked out of the bathroom door down to her brother's truck. The unfamiliar clack of heels against their living room floor filled the room, and Applejack constantly gazed down at her dress for any imperfections. She finally made it out the front door and hurried to her brother's idling truck so they could be on their way.

She opened the door and jumped in, trying not to look nervous, but failing miserably. She pulled her seat belt over her and proceeded to fidget constantly.

"My my, I've never seen my little sister look so adorable before," he said with a low chuckle.

Applejack's face went beet red and she immediately locked eye contact with the windshield wiper and crossed her arms.

"Oh, would you just shut up and drive."

Big Mac put the truck in gear with a smile and drove off down the driveway.

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The truck slowed to a stop outside of the sidewalk leading up to the main door. Guys dressed up in suits and girls with their elaborate dresses walked down the decorated sidewalk together as blue lights cast themselves across the dark treeline and the soft, steady beat of the music could be heard from outside. Applejack took one look out of the window and her nervousness almost doubled. She almost turned to her brother and told him just to take her home, but before she could, she felt a hand on her shoulder. She jumped a little bit, then turned to her brother.

"Look here, there's no need to be nervous. Just go out there and be yourself. Talk to people and have fun. You don't need to worry 'bout a thing," Big Mac said with a reassuring smile.

Applejack took a deep breath and smiled back at her brother. The usual man of few words set her more at ease enough to build up the confidence to go in. She put a hand on the handle and stepped out as she opened the door.

"I'll be back here at 11!" He said as he quickly drove off, leaving Applejack with no means of escape now.

Applejack suddenly reverted back to being a deer in headlights for a moment, but quickly shook it off. With one last inspection of herself, she put on a smile and strode confidently into the decorated building emanating music.

Applejack opened the door and was hit by all sorts of things at once. The building they chose for the dance was massive. Lights from the DJ table danced around the ceiling spectacularly. The beat of the music shook the walls and Applejack could feel the groove as it moved through her. A lot of the kids from school were having a blast dancing and chatting around the punchline, Applejack couldn't see an unhappy face in the whole room. The feeling spread to Applejack instantly, creating a smile that spread across her face as she jumped into the fray.

The night was just like Applejack wanted it to be. Even though she didn't particularly enjoy the music, she danced with all her friends, and danced with some new ones too. She occasionally stole the spotlight when her blue dress shined across someone's eye just right.

A few guys even came up to her to compliment her. All that time in the bathroom paid off, because she definitely saw a few heads turn as she walked around the room. Every time she noticed out of her peripherals she'd blush and feel a flush of excitement at the small victory.

After she got five or six "we should hang out more's" from various people in the crowd, she excitedly pranced over to her old friends to share her happiness with. It turns out Pinkie wasn't lying about having all those dates. She had a posse built up of all sorts of people in one corner of the room, dancing and having a good time. She even got to catch up with Rainbow Dash too.

After a couple hours, Applejack sat down at one of the tables to rest for a while. Things seemed to be slowing down a bit anyway. Applejack couldn't shake the smile from her face. She laughed at herself for being so nervous earlier in the day. She felt like there was one thing that really made it worse. Now that she thought about it, there was one person who she hadn't seen all night. Where was...

"Ah, good evening, Applejack," a smooth, sophisticated voice cooed from beside her.

"Wha- huh?" Applejack turned over with a look of bewilderment.

Not only was this the first time Rarity has sat next to her and talked to her, she actually knew her name.

"Oh, I-I'm sorry, did I startle you? I didn't mean t-"

"N-No, it's alright, I just wasn't expecting you..." Applejack took a moment to enjoy Rarity's voice up close, she couldn't believe how soft it and attractive it was.

Rarity seemed a little hurt, and then Applejack realized the implication of her words.

"O-Oh, I'm sorry, I'll just-" Rarity was about to get up, but Applejack extended a hand to stop her.

"Sorry, I didn't mean it like that, I'd love your company," Applejack tried to say quickly to make up for it.

"Well, I just wanted to come over to tell you how absolutely gorgeous you look in that dress. I don't think I could have picked out a better one myself," she said with the occasional glance down at it.

"Thank you kindly, you look mighty fine yourself." Applejack looked down at Rarity's dress. The mostly white outfit hugged her perfect figure tightly, not leaving any curve to the imagination.

"Why, thank you." Rarity gave a soft smile to Applejack, and suddenly AJ realized she had to keep this conversation going somehow, lest she look like a loser to the most popular girl in school.

"So... Why ain't you with your date tonight, not that I'm complaining, just curious."

"I... didn't come with a date tonight."

That shocked Applejack more than when Rarity sat down next to her. How could the most popular girl in school not have a date?

"W-Why not?" Applejack asked, still trying to wrap her head around the prospect.

"The one person that I wanted to come with doesn't seem to know me very well..." Rarity cast a glance at Applejack before looking down at her hands on the table.

"And who is that? If you don't mind me asking." Applejack leaned in.

"Well... I..."

Applejack looked at her expectantly but Rarity seemed to avoid the gaze.

"Would you like to go outside to get some fresh air?" she answered instead.

"Oh, uh... sure," Applejack responded, not really knowing what else to say.

Rarity got up and pushed her chair in, and Applejack soon followed suit. Rarity wordlessly led Applejack out into the night air, not daring to give Applejack even a glance as they made their way to a fountain on the other side of the building. Once they reached the fountain, Rarity sat down on the concrete edge, and Applejack soon followed suit.

A soft breeze blew through the trees and to the fountain the two sat on, lights on the sidewalk illuminated the scene as the darkness of the woods around them surrounded everything else. They both just stared up into the dark treeline, slowly moving their gaze across it as they sat there with the only sound being the falling water behind them.

"It sure is nice tonight," Rarity said, inching towards Applejack.

"Ain't that the truth..."

"Applejack... I haven't been having the best night tonight..." Rarity cast her gaze down towards the sidewalk.

"Why's that?" Applejack looked over to her.

"I came here tonight to get away from all of those popular kids, and they've done nothing but follow me around and prevent me from having any fun."

"I thought they were your friends?" Rarity only continued to confuse Applejack more and more by the moment.

"All they care about are my looks and how much money my dad makes. They aren't friends to me...

"Wha—" Is all Applejack could get out.

"None of them really want to get to know me, they all just... Oh I dont know..." Rarity sighed. "I just wanted to come here to talk to new people, meet some real friends, have somebody I could really talk to."

Applejack adjusted her position next to Rarity and simply let her continue.

"I want to be with people who aren't so... Stuck up. Someone more dependable, and down to earth, and... and..."

Even though Applejack was looking right into her eyes, she didn't recognize the gaze Rarity was giving her until it was too late.

In an instant, Rarity came toward Applejack and wrapped her arms around her, and pressed her lips into Applejacks. Applejack's world came alive with a multitude of feelings she didn't understand at all. Applejack simply sat back and let it happen, she had never been kissed before, and definitely not by another girl.

When Rarity noticed that Applejack wasn't returning her embrace, she broke away and brought a hand to her mouth with obvious tears forming in her eyes.

"Oh, I just... YoualwaysaresoconfidentandyoudontcarewhatpeoplethinkandyouarealwayssoprettyevenwithouthavingtowearmakeupandIgetthesefunnyfeelingswhenIlookatyouandIjust..."

Tears started to roll down Rarity's face as she choked up for a moment. Applejack sat there perplexed, having no idea what to do, and barely understanding her as she spoke.

"I'm jealous! Alright? I really like you, and I wish I could have a family like yours, and friends like yours, and always be as confident as you can."

"Rarity, I..." Before Applejack could finish, Rarity let out a sob and quickly got up and ran into the darkness back towards the building. All Applejack could focus on was the steady clack of her heels as they grew quieter.

Applejack sat there for a moment trying to take in all that just happened. She slowly raised a hand to her lips and put a finger on them. She could feel some of Rarity's blue lipstick rubbing off on hers. She didn't know what to think of any of this, but she did know one thing.

She liked it.

Applejack thought about how she felt when Rarity kissed her, and felt it all still floating around in her. She didn't know if she loved Rarity or wanted to spend the rest of her life with her like in all the cheesy romance novels, but she did know one thing. She wanted to do that again.

She got up from her seat on the fountain and walked off into the night after her.

It didn't take long before Applejack found her. She could see her styled violet hair shaking from across the parking lot. Applejack ran up to her as fast as she could in her heels, which wasn't very fast. When she came within ten feet of Rarity, she turned around and started to stammer again.

Applejack felt sorry for her right then. Mascara stained her cheeks from crying, and she looked miserable.

"Im so sorry Applejack, I didn't want that to come out so fast, especially not after we first met, I screwed everything up and no you must th-"

Applejack cut her off by putting her hand on Rarity's cheek and going in for a kiss. Applejack wrapped her arms around Rarity and she returned the gesture, sharing a deep kiss in the dark parking lot together.

After a considerable amount of time, Applejack finally left Rarity's lips, leaving a blush and a smile on both girl's faces.

"Rarity, I don't really know what's going on right now... I'm having all these funny feelings too, and... I really liked that."

Rarity dropped her smile and looked a little apprehensive making minimal eye contact.

"W-Would you like to see the backseat o-"

"Yes," Applejack replied without a second thought.

Without wasting a second, the girls opened the door and scurried into the backseat together, closing and locking it behind them. Doing so somehow caused Applejack to be on top of Rarity, the two's faces going an even darker shade of red from the close contact.

Not really knowing what to do at this point, Applejack just went in for another kiss, which Rarity returned happily. What Applejack didn't expect was Rarity's tongue to sneak its way up to her lips as it began lightly caressing her own. The sensation drove Applejack wild with emotion, she could feel herself heating up tremendously. The butterflies in her stomach returned, but this time the sensation was so much more enjoyable.

Rarity dared to go even further when she started to draw one of her soft hands up Applejack's back and up to the straps holding up her dress. Applejack gave a sharp gasp as she felt her velvety skin begin to trace its way under her dress strap and begin to pull it down her shoulder. She could barely contain herself now, she could feel her panties growing wetter and wetter by the minute, if this continued, she'd have no choice but to take them off.

Rarity continued to play with Applejack's tongue as she began to pull the dress off of her. Applejack just kept kissing and let it happen, letting more and more of her freckled skin be revealed in the soft moonlight through the tinted windows. Applejack was going mad with lust as she could feel Rarity's soft fingers lightly dragging across her sides, and start down her own legs as she could feel the dress leaving her.

Once Applejack felt the majority of her warm skin meet the cool air, she couldn't take it any more. She reached back behind herself and unclasped her bra and threw it on the floor, letting her breasts fall out over Rarity. Rarity met this by bringing her hands up and beginning to lightly caress her all the way up from her navel to her very erect nipples. Rarity's soft skin on her own made Applejack moan instantly. She could feel her own excitement start to seep out around her panties onto her thighs.

For a moment, Rarity stopped, eliciting a longing expression from Applejack. Instead of continuing, she simply pushed Applejack over to where she was sitting up against the door. Applejack looked up at her innocently, not knowing what might come next, but Rarity's hands tracing a line down her thighs gave her a pretty good hint.

Her breathing quickened as she felt Rarity lightly tug on the sides of her panties. Applejack quickly lifted her hips to help Rarity along. Once Applejack was wearing nothing but her heels, Rarity moved forward and put her arms around Applejack, keeping her in place. Applejack simply waited for her to continue, and so she did. Rarity began planting kisses on Applejack, starting at her neck and working her way down. Applejack closed her eyes and threw her head back.

She couldn't take the teasing as it seemed Rarity moved slower and slower each time, planting a soft, wet kiss with a small sucking sound as she went. Rarity kissed down Applejacks navel and began nearing her sweet spot. With one hand, Rarity began to undo her own dress, and with the other, she began tracing up and down Applejacks slit. Applejack arched her back at the feeling and had to grab the seats to stabilize herself.

She let out a hushed moan as Rarity began to slowly enter her with one finger; it grew louder as another one found its way in. Rarity slipped out of her own dress and put her face down to Applejack's sweet folds as she began to lightly kiss the drenched labia, causing Applejack to tense and clutch the seats as hard as she could. Rarity then gently pushed her fingers deeper into her, as she watched her squirm and her flared clit shake with anticipation.

Without warning, Rarity dove in tongue first at Applejacks clit, surrounding it with her lips as she teased it with her tongue. Applejack could feel herself melting under the feeling, the whole world around her became nothing but pleasure as Rarity continued licking away, only making little kissing sounds between Applejack's moans of pleasure. It didn't take long before Applejack began to convulse around Rarity's fingers, covering them with even more of her fluids. Applejack arched her back and almost lifted herself off the seat as she continued to twitch from every little movement Rarity would make inside her.

Rarity took her fingers out of Applejack and slowly brought them up to the hazed girl's face. With one hand, Rarity softly urged Applejack's mouth open, putting the drenched fingers inside. Applejack seemed a bit surprised at the taste for a moment, but started to lick the soaked fingers clean for her. Applejack closed her eyes and simply enjoyed the taste of her own excitement as Rarity fed it to her.

Once Rarity thought that she had had enough, she backed away from Applejack and began to undo her own bra. Applejack gazed forward to notices Rarity's supple breasts spill out from her bra, and her consciousness returns to her in an instant. Applejack moved forward with a lust filled smile of her own as she put her hands on Rarity's waist and pulled them together. The feeling of their soft skin rubbing together made both the girls heat up again, moaning into each others mouths as their tongues danced together.

Applejack moved her hands down from Rarity's waist to the sides of her panties, and slowly started to ease them off of her.

Applejack could feel the intense heat emanating from her loins as she drew the thin fabric away from it. Applejack broke the kiss and laid Rarity down against the seat to take them off completely. Once the two were both completely naked, Applejack crawled onto her, resting her own pussy on her thigh, and her hand onto Rarity's well lubricated slit. Rarity began to let a few soft moans out at the simple contact, and her light squirming caused her thigh to rub against Applejack, which caused her to give a slight moan as well.

Applejack leaned down to kiss her yet again, pushing her fingers inside of Rarity this time. Rarity's moan was muffled as the two begin to make out again. Applejack begins to quickly drive her fingers into her again and again, filling the car with a soft shlick sound, mixing with the muffled moans from both the girls in the air already.

As Rarity squirmed and fidgeted more and more from the pleasure, she rubbed Applejack's clit with her thigh with greater intensity. The feelings of pleasuring each other, rubbing their breasts and soft navel skin together, and their tongues caressing each other, the two come too close to the edge yet again. Rarity was the first to go. Her inner walls clenching against Applejack’s fingers as she gasped and squirmed under her intense orgasm. She soon brought Applejack with her as well. Her squirming rubs her thigh up against Applejack, her yearning folds contracting against her soft skin. The two girls separate from the kiss to sing their ecstasy into the interior of the car.

Once the two begin to cool down, they resigned to laying against each other in the backseat, content with the feeling of their skin lightly touching, and the arms that hold them together tightly. Both girls shared a soft smile and a few quick pecks as they begin to drift off in each others arms...

Applejack glanced at the clock on the dash and did a double take when she saw the time.

11:15

Applejack jolted upright with a worried expression and began to search for her clothes as she patted around the floorboard with one hand and tried to put on her panties with the other. Rarity sat up with concern and put a hand on Applejack's thigh.

"What ever is the matter, dear?" Rarity cooed

"My brother was supposed to pick me up 15 minutes ago! He's gonna be so worried!" Applejack said, exasperated.

"Oh, well we must get you dressed. Here, let me help."

Once both girls were back to being fully clothed, Rarity walked Applejack up to the main road by the building. The two could already see the other students trickle out of the building and head out into the parking lot or the main road, where a long line of cars waited for them. Applejack spotted her brothers truck and immediately ran up to it, already formulating the string of apologies that she was going to have to give him.

Rarity was shocked by the sudden absence of her new friend and tried to jog up to meet her, but Applejack had made it to the truck much faster.

Applejack opened the truck door quickly and started to ramble out her apologies.

"I am so sorry Big Mac, we were just having fun and we lost track of time and I-"

"Ah, It's alright sis, I understand." He gave her a reassuring smile, and Applejack gave a sigh of relief and grabbed the handle of the door.

"Applejack, wait!" Rarity let out behind her, extending a hand to try to stop her from leaving so soon.

"Would you like to... Hang out sometime? Like monday after school maybe?" Rarity gave a sad smile, not ready to let her new friend go yet.

Applejack took a step forward and wrapped Rarity up in a hug. Rarity returned the embrace and both girls shared a content smile.

"I would love to."

Author's Note

Don't worry, the sequel to my other story is coming along nicely. I just felt like putting some of my other writing out there for everyone to enjoy.

This is my first step towards some more romantic type writing. I would love to hear what you thought of it.