an oasis fire (Re-Writen)
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an oasis fire

an oasis fire (Re-Writen)

AN:This is my first fanfic and it's a true story how me and my girlfriend and we’ve been friends for years now. I’m not a American or anywhere near I'm from Germany so please understand my grammar is not the best I got help in this story from Blueball-Blitz and Slowbro95

I’m telling this story from the sight of soarin (me) so lets get started.

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"He's going to kill us Spitty!" I said as we flew towards the Cloudhouse from Spitfires parents. I smiled as I thought about my best friend. Spitfire is a pegasus like I am. Her coat is a bright orange only second to her a little bit darker orange mane. But the best are her amber eyes. "W-Wait what do I think?" I shook my head to focus myself. "Yeah he will kill us probably." she said. ~She has such a beautiful voice, Damit Soarin she’s you best friend focus!` I smiled at her "Don't worry I’m going to talk to him."

She smiled at me "Thank you Soar." I smiled back "No problem." I thought about her father silver wing most time I know him he is a normal pegasus, but when it comes to his daughter he's turning into a real nightmare. Her mother Firefly on the other hand is very understandable. We finely arrived at the Cloud House and knocked the door. "Spitty, Soarin." Firefly smiled at us and took Spitty in a hug.......

"You what?" Silver Wing screamed at us. "You hear rigt....." I couldn't finish my sentence as he yelled again. "No way you two will not live together!" I looked over at Spitfire and saw her shaking from anger. "We don't came here so that you could scream at us!" she yelled back. "Come on Soarin we're leaving." she said as she flew through the door. "I-" I sat there paralyzed. "Come on Soarin!" Spitfire yelled from next door. I stood up and walked towards the door. I could feel silver wing starring at me. He's totally gonna kill me. I thought as I felt a hoof on my shoulder. Oh shit. I turned around to see Firefly.

"Hey don't listen to that what Silver Wing says." She smiled at me. I was relieved. Firefly always liked me. "Take good care of my daughter Soarin." I smiled weakly at her "I will."

I unlocked the door to our apartment and step inside. "S-Spitfire I’m sorry fo....." she put her hoof in my face. " You don’t need to be sorry Soarin, it's ok it's not you fault." she dropped her saddlebag at the ground and sit down at couch. "It went better then I expected." she laughed. Such a great laugh ahhh, Soarin focus. "This you call better then expected?" she gave me a big smirk. "You still live don't you?" I looked at her as we both start laughing. "Yeah it went better then I expected too." I said. She looked at the clock. "It’s late I’m going to go bed, goodnight Soar." I smiled at her "Goodnight Spitfire."

*A few weeks later at school.*

"Come on Rapidfire you are slower then a snail." I smirked at my friend Rapidfire. "Shut up!" he looked at me and laughed. "You won't always have luck." My smirk grow larger. "Luck I don't know this word I just have skills." He punched me in the shoulder. "Don't get to high-spirited next time I’ll got you." We arrived at the race filled a mile outside our school. "What’s you have planned today?" I asked Rapidfire "Racing." He answer with a nervous tone. "Buck yeah this is going to be good."

I looked around as I warmed up. Suddenly a bright orange mare catch my eyes. Spitfire looked so mystic and beautiful. "Wow." I let out. Wait did I just say wow? hopefully nopony heard it. I looked around and shied in relief. Good. I looked back at Spitfire again. She was in a talk with her our friend Fleetfoot. Spitfires mane whirled in the wind it gave her something wild.

"On you marks get set go!" I heard Coach Solar Fire yelling. I shook my head to get focused and dashed forward.

I flew through the finish line with over half and round lead to Rapidfire. "Good time Soarin." Coach Solar Fire smiled. "Uhhh thanks Coach." I said as I looked over to Spitfire wave me over. I smiled as I flew over."And how was I." I said as I landed beside her and Fleetfoot. "That was great Soarin." Fleetfoot smiled bright but I didn't really listen to her I wanted to know what Spitfire was thinking. "I don't know you were so fast Soarin." Spitfire said with a coy smile on her face. "H-Hey." I said with played anger. She stuck her tongue out and smiled. "You were good Soar." I smiled back at her as we walked back into

school. Wow that school uniform sure fits her. I thought as we arrived at the main building.

*Two days later Saturday.*

"Soarin." Spitfire yelled from downstairs. "I have to go buy something I’ll be back in 30 minutes." I ground and got up from the bed: "Ok see you then." I yelled back down. I was hungry so I went downstairs to make me some cereal as the phone rang. I walked over and got it with my wing. "Soarins here, who is it?" I said "Oh hello it’s Silver Lightning is Spitfire home?" Who is this? I thought as I answered "Spitfire is out to buy something should she call you back?"

"Yes please thanks then." Silver Lightning said.

"Don't mention it." I put the phone back.

"Who is Silver Lightning?" I asked Spitfire as she walked trough the door. "Oh why did he called?" she asked.

"Yes he did now who is he?" I asked again. "He's my coltfriend." she smiled. "Oh no Celestia damit why?" I thought

"I-I’m happy for you Spitfire." I smiled weakly "Thanks Soar, I’ll go see him now,talk to you later." she waved as she got out of the house. "AHHHHRRGGG!" I yelled in anger. "Why did she have to have a coltfriend? Why didn't I asked her to date before she got an coltfriend?" I screamed in frustration "Now she got a coltfriend!"

*Two weeks later.*

I hear someone cry and walked through the door into our house. My heart broke as I saw Spitfire. Her eyes where red and puffy from all the crying. I was next to her in two seconds flat. "Spitfire what’s the matter?" I asked as I put her in a hug to comfort the crying mare in front of me. "Silver Lightning broke up." She cried in my shoulder. "Pssst. Don't worry I’m here it will be alright." I always hated it to see a mare cry especially if it’s the mare I love. "T-Thanks you Soar." Spitfire looked me into my eyes. "Hey I’m always there for you." I smiled as a thought crossed my mind. "Hey I got an idea so you have fun tonight."

"Where do we go?" Spitfire asked me as we flew trough Cloudsdale. "Club Cosmos." I said as we arrived in front of the best club in Cloudsdale. She looked at me dubiously. "Hey Spitfire I promise we will have fun tonight.” I smiled at her. "Ok." She smiled back at me and we got inside.

Like moths to light. I thought as I watched the crowd of stallions gathering near Spitfire. It's quiet normal every time we go out a crowd of stallions went around Spitfire in ten seconds flat. (That’s an academy record.) I sat on a table as a red pegasus mare came to me. "Hey there Handsome." She said in a flirty voice. I could feel myself blush a little. The mare was quiet attractive but nothing compared to Spitfire. "So are you alone here?" She asked. I looked over to Spitfire to see her starring at us and it was pretty obvious that she was jealous. I couldn't believe it Spitfire was jealous on this mare because of me. I smiled "Yeah I’m here with somepony." I said as I let the mare behind and start walking towards Spitfire. I smiled as Spitfire blushed as I came towards her. "Hey Spitty you want to dance." I asked with a smile on my face. Her smile makes my heart skip a beat. "Yeah that would be great." I smiled as I grabbed her hoof and went to dance with her.

"Tonight was awesome!" Spitfire smiled at me as we entered our Cloudhouse. "Yeah it was great." I said with pure joy in my voice. Spitfire leaned over and gave me a kiss on my cheek. I could feel myself get red as a tomato. "Thank you so much for tonight Soar." She gave me a big smile before she left upstairs. "This evening was awesome." I smiled to myself as I got upstairs and into my room.

"What you got there Soar?" Spitfire asked me as she got into the kitchen. "It's a letter from my brother Lightning Runner he invited me to a BBQ." (Pony BBQ would be with cooked vegetables and stuff like that.) I said as I put the letter on the table. "Oh cool then have fun." Spitfire said with a hint of disappointment in her voice. I smiled at that. "Hey you want to come with me? I’m sure he won't have something against it." I laughed as I see her smile. "So that means yes then?" I smirked as she punched me in the shoulder playfully.

"Nice marefriend Soarin." Lightning Runner teased me. We both sat at a table and eating some cooked carrots. "She's not my marefriend!" I nearly shouted at him. He laughed at that. "But you want her to be right?” He asked me with a smirk spread across his face. "H-How did you know?” I asked with confusion. His smirk grew even larger. "It's pretty obvious when she talks with you. You got this stupid smile on you face." I shied "So what should I do?" "I tell you what." he said as he wrapped a wing around me. "Tonight you tell her what you feel for her." "B-But-" "Hey listen this one time to me you like her and it seems that she likes you two." "Thank you." He smirked "You welcome squirt."

And again this club. I thought as Spitfire and I passed the doorman and got into the club. We were invited from Spitfire’s friend Misty so I had to tell her later. Hmmmm, then make the best out of it. I smiled. "Hey Spitty wanna dance again?" I asked her. She smiled at me. "Yeah."

We danced for almost an hour as I spotted an old friend and went over to talk to him.

*And another hour after I spotted my friend.*

I looked around the club to find Spitfire after my friend left. I could see Hurricane in front of her. Hurricane is an absolute asshole he has no respect towards other pony’s. And now he tried to hassle her. I was by her site in no time. "Don't you dare touch her!" I screamed as I punched him in the face. I could feel his nose broke. A moment later I was garbed by the security.

"I'm going to call the Guards!" The manager of the club yelled at us. "Calm down." I heard a familiar voice saying. It was my old friend. "Why should I? The manager asked him. "Because I know him and he didn't do anything like this without a good reason." The Manager looked at me. "Ok you get away with it THIS time and now go before I change my mind." We went outside and I thanked my friend before I carry Spitfire home. She was pretty drunk so I decided to tell her in the morning.

Spitfire woke up to the smell of fresh pancakes. (Why pancakes you ask? I mean come on who doesn't like pancakes.)

"Hey Soar." She smiled at me. "Thanks for helping me last night." I smiled at her. "No problem, Spitfire I wanted to tell you something." She looked at me an raised an eyebrow. "What's the matter Soarin?" I took a deep breath before I answered.

"Spitfire I-I really like you, you know more then just a friend even more then a best friend I think what I want to tell you is that you are so cool, awesome and beautiful." She sat there and said nothing. SHIT! You messed up, you idiot now she will hate you. I was about to just fly away. But I got stopped as Spitfire pressed her lips against mine. I was surprised but melted in after a second. I smiled at her as we broke the kiss. "How long?" I asked. She smiled and nuzzled my cheek. "You remember the day we were at the Club and this mare was flirting with you?" I nodded. "I was really jealous and I thought about you as we got home." She smirked. "How long you?" I smiled and pulled her into another kiss "It feels like forever, but you remember the day you watched me at the race field? You just looked so beautiful. I had to say “wow.” She smiled. "You said wow? aloud?" I rubbed my head "Uhm yeah." "Why?" She smirked brighter. I cooled feel myself blushing. "Because you are “wow.” "That's the weirdest compliment I ever heard." I laughed nervous. "But I like it." She kissed me again. "And I like you."

I smiled bright. "I like you too."