Getting Better

by Star Racer

Rating: mature
Tags: Comedy, Romance, Random, Slice of Life
Length: 347

A little revenge from Alexstrazsa for not posting my story, it's my version of it.

[size=10]Revenge from Alexstrazsa[/size]

[size=20]Meet Ecaxas, a cowpony born in New Ponyxico (Pony version of New Mexico) that had moved to Ponyville, staying invisible for 2 years and a week now, Ecaxas thought that the day was going to be everything the same, but when Pinkie Pie saw him, everything goes wrong………….

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This is a tribute to a MLP story I read back at FanFiction before I joined FiMFiction: "getting better" by wg12990, you should read his story, it has some grammar errors, but fuck that!

WARNING: THIS IS A MATURE STORY WITH LOT OF SEX & HENTAI, I RECOMMEND THAT THOSE WHO DOESN'T LIKE THESE KINDS OF STORY TO GET THE F**K OUT OF HERE NOW! (No offense)

Ecaxas is copyrighted from wg12990

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-09-13 18:28:16 UTC

What went wrong?

Tribute story to wg12990

GETTING BETTER

Chapter 1: What went wrong?

(Ecaxas' POV)

One more day invisible in Ponyville, yep, If ya don't know me, then Good Morning, my name's Ecaxas, I lived here in Ponyville for 2 years and a week now because I hid from this pony here: Pinkie Pie, all you have to do is evade her, don't let her see ya. But today was going to be different...

I locked my house with the keys and went to walk a little, whenever I saw Pinkie, I hid myself for her not to see me, I already met some of the ponies I saw on my trips, there are Roseluck, Daisy, even Trixie, which I heard to be a rival of somepony I keep listening of: Twilight Sparkle, Celestia's personal student, just when I was going to visit a farm I saw here close, suddenly, something (or better, somePONY) landed on me, and I wasn't expecting that it would be...

"Oops... sorry, I was racing with Rainbow Dash and... HEY! You are that new pony that moved into town!" Pinkie... I ran as fast as I could to get away, at least she didn't followed me... I stopped by a lake close to the farm.

What went wrong? I know I can stealth around Ponyville all of the time, but she wasn't capable of seeing me right? So what went wrong? She broke the laws of physics to find me? Uh... OK Ecaxas, now this went a little far and-

"Why are you in my private place?!" I heard somepony speak, I looked everywhere, and when I looked up, I saw a Pegasus staring right at me!

"WAAAA!!!!!!" I screamed "DON'T SCARE ME LIKE THAT AGAIN!!!"

"Sorry about that, is that you invaded my private place here near the lake!" She said, I looked around again and I saw I was beside a wood house.

"Oops... Sorry, I..." I stopped when I saw the girl join up Pinkie Pie and other 4 ponies

Oh... Now I'm busted... I thought...