Casually slow re-write in progress!
Chapters completed:
3/10
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(Gift story) Blitz unintentionally becomes the carer of a foal after coming across her burning village in the night. Being unable to return her safely for some time, they form a friendship, it becomes a chance to bring their families together for an alliance and to learn more about each other.

(Looking for constructive criticism on the writing quality more than the actual story since this is a gift for someone who already knows the universe and characters. I'd appreciate any help!)