love sqaure

by ponygirl1

Rating: everyone
Tags: Romance, Slice of Life
Length: 987

after derpy saw the hug from the doctor and roseluck she breaks up with him,and roseluck wants the doctor but twilight waited for this moment for her life she will have the doctor

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-09-15 14:12:15 UTC

chapter 1 breakup

                                                                   "Roselucks POV"

That doctor would be mine time to act fast for that bubbly twit would be alone like a old bat idiot , Roseluck is a rich pony that lives on the side of ponyville but goes to canterlot a lot but she is a model sometimes .But she loves I mean loves every colt to bare burn to shining armor but her eye is on the doctor ,with his eyes to his coat and mane through ears his eyes give her the shivers he also came out of town out of no where it sends more shivers down her spine thinking about it.That's why she will go out with him and have filly's that derpy is nothing but a mistake a thing god accidentally make in his sleep she does not deserve him.

                                                                       "Docs POV"

                                                                   "Thanks Roseluck for the gift" said the doctor aka time

Today was the doctors birthday but invented his birthday being on this date because time traveler with a fake name but some ponys call him doctor or time .But the first time he met the wonderful mare in his dreams ditzy doo but being his companion and told her he loved her on their first date Muffin planet.

                                                             "Doctor " interrupted Roseluck

                                                           "ohh thanks oooff

Before the doctor knew it Roseluck hugged him then kissed him

                                                                    "Roselucks POV"

Yes omgomgomgomg she looked over at the corner of her eye and saw derpy and about to cry I finally have him she kept the kiss going on

                                                                   "derpys POV"

                                                                       "Doctor " yelled derpy

she can't see him but ponys dancing to ponys making out to ponys drunk and making out with random ponys she spotted him kissing a pony then a shatter her heart broke

                                                          "   after doctor and derpy going home "

                                                                "you made out with roseluck that slut" yelled derpy

she then packed her stuff with anger and crying

                                                          "derpy we bumped into some pony then accidentally kissed" said the doctor

But derpy packed to bags then pulled out some bits out of her pockets (aka cutie mark if anyone watched doctor with assistant)

                                                     "derpy what are you doing?" said the doctor

He calculated bits wait a picture of derpy and ooh sh BANNNGGGG!! slammed derpys suit case then went out side and closed the door loud the world shook the doctor followed derpy out side then saw her pay for a cab

                                                                               "wait" yelled the doctor

                                                    "Derpy please I love you..you Know I Would not do this to you" said the doctor

                                                  "a colt said that to me once and keep cheating on me trust me doctor there are a

                                                  millions of mares in the past and future and why break my heart cab driver to

                                                  cantorlot "yelled derpy

the window went up while doctors went down the cab took off so did the doctors

                                                                        "Cab drivers POV"

Night shifts suck but this one was different he hailed to a hoof in the air then the mare paid him he was about to put his hoof in left to leave but heard a colt

                                                                    "WAIT" yelled the colt

they talked the mare said cantorlot he drove off he checked in the review mirror the colt stood there and felt bad

                                                           "first break up "asked the cab driver

                                                                       "no "  said the mare

He got a good look blond bubbles for cutie mark poor mare

                                                          "break ups are hard who lives up here?" asked the driver

                                                  "princess luna " replied the mare

silence took over me

                                                 "Shes a friend "said the mare

                                                   "whats your name " asked the driver

                                                       (SILENCE FOR 5 MINUTES )

                                                              "Ditzy doo " replied the mare

chapter 2 crying and planing

                                                                       "Luna's POV"

ding dong!

                                                       "Uhh Tia " said luna

she turned her head but got up and went downstairs

                                                        "who could it be (OPENING DOOR)

Silence

                                                           "derpy " that was the only word luna choked out

Derpy clutching miss sweaty ( FROM BUBBLES ; ) sad story) with tears in her eyes with snot about to come out

                                                          "did he but that sentence stopped Luna Because derpy hugged her  and they stayed there until 5 mins

                                                                (10 MINS )

                                    " and I....I wal..k to.. to..find ..him ..kis..sing ..tha..t slut of a mare WHAWHAWHA"cried derpy

poor derpy they became friends when she first saw the doctor and derpy by the window of the nightmare moon incident.They met at the celebration then became instant friends ,poor derpy crying for hours

                                                      "Hey girl....

Tia walked in and saw her heart broken for a second when she saw derpy crying

                                                       'MOMLESTIA ACTIVATE"

                                            " are you ok derpy ARE THOU DID THIS TO YOU 'yelled tia

Before she knew it she put her hoof in the air and twilight got knocked out by tias hoof

                                            " I am so sorry twilight " said tia as she blushed with red

                                                          "Twi POV "

                                                  'wow derpy 'said twilight

She didn't feel bad for derpy she loved this the doctor was hers , after she met him she loved him and now hes single Twilightxdoctor before she knew it her wings pomff

                                           " sorry its hot in here air wings out hehehe" said twilight then she dashed away

She dashed in her new room and pretend to go to bed she heard steps and then bliss of real sleep took twilight

                                                      "IN DREAM"

                                              " I pronounced you mare and colt" said the preacher

then the crowd went to a hole that lead to taurtures (sorry if I spell wrong derp : ) )

                                              "All put derpy in hole of hell say I"said twilight

                                                                  ' I 'said the towns people

  derpy fell in the hole

                                        "everypony go home ' yelled a voice

everypony ran

                                               "I know what you are doing twilight ashamed of you...you hate derpy "said Luna

                                                      OOOOHHH muffins