My Little Pony: Rise of the Eclipse

by Blaze Von Solla

Battle in the field...

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Chapter Four Battle in the field...

On board train to Ponyville...

The train had suddenly stopped and nobody knew what was happening.

"That's funny we're not supposed to be in Ponyville for another hour," said Twilight confused.

Eclipsia immediately felt a strange presence outside of the train.

"Get down," he said, "There is a reason why the train stopped and its not a good one."

Everyone crouched down low except Eclipsia and Rainbow Dash, who wanted to find out who it was.

"Dash I don't think you want to know who it is," said Eclipsia, "the evil the pony is exuding is off the charts." Twilight looked confused at how he could know that when he had no idea how to use magic at all.

"What does it feel like to you?" she asked.

"It feels like love only warped and twisted," was Eclipsia's response, "whatever it is it is evil."

Suddenly a familiar voice spoke outside of the train, "Princess Celestia come out and face me," it said, "I can feel your power in there."

Everypony was confused as they all knew Celestia was still in the castle, but the girls recognized the voice of that of the Changeling Queen, Chrysalis.

Eclipsia not knowing activated the royal Canterlot Voice and said, "Name yourself challenger of Celestia."

By this point he had walked out of the train and was facing the challenger and her army. "My name is Chrysalis," said Chrysalis, "and I am Queen of the Changelings. I will not fight worthless trash like you."

"My name is Eclipsia Von Solla and I am the person you will fight," he said as his horn glowed and a line appeared in the ground, "and you will not pass this line."

Chrysalis sent some drones at him which immediately took on his form while he stood there with his horn glowing a deep maroon color. The girls on the train watched as they got closer to him and he shot a beam of energy at the first one causing it to dispel its disguise. The second one tried to impale him but he immediately threw up a shield around his body which caught the horn and reflected it. Eclipsia then charged an attack on his horn and hit the rest with a beam of red energy while the shield was still up. Chrysalis then decided to fight this battle herself. She charged her horn to create a shield breaking attack and fired it at Eclipsia's shield which broke upon impact. He seized the moment and reflected the energy that was once love into the ground. He was starting to run out of breath as he was not used to casting spells. He just let his new instincts take over as the fight progressed.

"Impressive nobody has ever stood up to me like that except Celestia but even then she was easily defeated, you however have stood your ground against me so I shall kill you quickly," said Chrysalis.

She lunged at him trying to impale him but he brought his horn down to intercept hers and white energy shot from his horn which caused Chrysalis to go flying through the air and Eclipsia to pass out.

Twilight and the girls immediately got off the train and ran to Eclipsia's side.

"What the hell just happened," said Rainbow Dash aloud.

"It seems Eclipsia has a talent for magic," said Twilight, "Whatever just happened he just kicked Chrysalis' ass back to the badlands."

"Hey don't you think we should get him back on the train so we can get him some medical attention in Ponyville," said Vinyl trying to lift him off the ground and back into the train. The other unicorns that were there started using their magic to lift Eclipsia into the train as it got ready to again depart for Ponyville.

In Canterlot during the fight...

Celestia was watching as a fight broke out between Eclipsia and Chrysalis on their way to Ponyville through her spyglass.

"Luna," she called to her sister.

Luna walked into the room, "Yes my sister?" she asked.

"Take a look at this," Celestia said pointing to the spyglass. When Luna looked through she saw Eclipsia in a magic shield devastating an entire wave of changelings. She gasped when she saw how good he was with magic and its use while multitasking.

"When did he learn this?" she asked Celestia.

"That's the part that has me confused," Celestia explained, "he didn't learn anything while he was here and couldn't have possibly learned all this in the short time they have been gone. So it must be his instincts taking over for him."

Luna watched as Eclipsia's horn shot white energy as he passed out. "He just sent Chrysalis flying with a powerful attack," she said to Celestia, "evidently he has much of the same power as Twilight does."

Celestia couldn't believe what she had heard her sister say. She knew Twilight was very powerful alone but that somepony else had similar power was crazy. She felt the nagging sensation that she had heard Eclipsia's name before again and decided to consult the library for the name.

Ponyville two hours later...

Eclipsia woke up in a place he didn't recognize. After a minute he realized he was in a hospital. A nurse pony walked over to his bedside and did a physical check-up on him. Once she was done she helped him sit up.

"How long was I out for," he asked her.

"About two hours," she said, "unfortunately when Twilight brought you in half the nurses here had to be hospitalized for loss of blood."

"What happened?" Eclipsia asked knowing full well that it was probably him.

"Well when you were dragged in here some of the horny, not married nurses tried to get you on a stretcher. Needless to say when they felt your muscles they had massive nosebleeds," she explained, "They had to call me on my day off to just get you in here."

Eclipsia looked at her for a second then apologized for being a pain to her on her day off. After his apology, all of the girls he was traveling with burst into the room and drowned him in a hug.

"Oh I'm so glad you're alright but how did you do that?" asked Twilight.

"Dude that was awesome, you are so learning how to do the sonic rainboom," exclaimed Rainbow Dash.

"Girls, I need oxygen," said Eclipsia in an out of breath voice.

"Uh girls I think you're going to make him pass out again," said the nurse. The girls immediately got off of Eclipsia as he regained the ability to breathe.

"Oh god... I think... If I were human right now I would have just had an orgasm," he said, "and I really don't know how I did that honestly. I just let my instincts take over."

The girls just stared at him for a second. "So... You just went with the flow?" asked Vinyl, "that's exactly what is needed to pass in my profession!"

Eclipsia felt like he learned something new from the fight as they left the hospital to check out the home's of the girls.

Sweet Apple Acres

"This is mah home," explained Applejack, "it's really roomy but we don't really have a lot of time to ourselves bein as we have ta do chores most of the day. But it is fun I suppose."

Eclipsia just stared at the house for a minute. Then he went on to say, "I like space but I'm going to need some time to myself to get adjusted to this world."

Carousel Boutique

"This is my lovely home as well as workplace," Rarity said, "Sometimes customers will come in and browse while others make orders which I fill out to the best of my abilities. You might have to do the same if you live here."

She showed him most of the rooms in the house part of the boutique but he simply said, "I have no time to work on dresses all the time as I have to train under seven tutors but I will see."

Sugar-cube Corner

Pinkie Pie sang as she showed Eclipsia around her home. Eclipsia just listened while being dragged around and by the end of it he just shook his head in a no.

"Well at least I tried... Right Blaze?" she asked me and yes Pinkie you get an A for effort. Now back to the story.

Fluttershy's Cottage

Fluttershy timidly showed Eclipsia around her cottage, "And that is Angel bunny's favorite spot on the couch."

He sighed and said, "I'm afraid if I were to live here I might accidentally step on a small animal if I'm not paying attention, but I will come by as often as I can to help." Fluttershy nodded in understanding. Soon they left for Dash's place.

Underneath Dash's House

"Umm, yeah we're going to need to fly up there," said Rainbow Dash.

Eclipsia looked at all the girls that had shown him their houses and said, "Could all the girls who showed me their houses already just go home I really need some time to think things through before I decide."

Everypony except Twilight left as she had not shown him the library yet. "Could you wait down here while Dash and I check out her place real quick," said Eclipsia accidentally putting some charm into his voice. She nodded blushing and waited as Dash and Eclipsia took off.

With Dash and Eclipsia...

They flew for a minute until Dash's cloud house came into view. They alighted on the doorstep of the house as Dash began the tour. The living room was full of furniture and some junk that Dash was slightly embarrassed by, the kitchen slightly organized with a mess here and there but it wasn't too bad, the bedroom had a big bed in it as well as a small floating turtle bed for her pet, Tank. Another doorway led to a small rainbow pool for swimming, while another led to a bath room.

"Well that's about it," said Dash with a nervous chuckle, "what do you think?"

Eclipsia looked around the slightly messy house and said, "This isn't the place for me but next time I visit we're cleaning this place up."

Rainbow Dash looked a little more embarrassed as she attempted to pick up some of the garbage. She was at least glad to have gotten some alone time with him before he decided. He felt the love for him coming off of her and moved closer to her with a small grin.

"You wanted something to happen didn't you?" he asked her.

"Wh-what... N-no I didn't," she stammered out backing away from him into a wall. He kept her walking backward while getting ready to enact his plan. As soon as she hit the wall and could walk no further he leaned close to her and allowed his lips to lock with hers in a deep, passionate kiss that lasted nearly five minutes before the need for air became to great. Eclipsia wanted to look directly into her eyes afterward but as soon as his horn touched her forehead his eyes turned white and a magic spark shot between them. Eclipsia then backed off, his eyes returning to normal and began apologizing for not being able to control whatever just happened. Dash looked a bit stunned from the sudden surge of magic energy that went flowing through her body and didn't stop when he moved away.

"No problem," she said still feeling weird. Eclipsia then decided to leave with the same strange feeling he had when he left the hospital.

On the surface...

Twilight was waiting patiently for Eclipsia to return when she noticed it getting dark. Where is he, she thought getting worried. She then looked to the sky and saw Eclipsia descending with a small smile on his face.

"Hey what happened up there?" she asked him.

"I think the certain pony Dash likes is me," he replied.

"How do you know that?" she questioned.

"I don't know, honestly," he explained, "I can somehow feel love from anywhere, even from you ever since I landed."

Twilight blushed slightly at the fact that he knew that she loved him but she wanted to know how. She then started walking while saying, "I guess we'd better hurry to the library before it gets dark."

Eclipsia's eyes lit up at the mention of a library. "You live in a library?" he asked starting to break into a run, "I love libraries!"

Five minutes later...

"And that's the whole library," Twilight said finishing the tour.

Eclipsia wasn't listening as he was too busy touching his horn on all the books in the library and gathering as much knowledge as he could about the world. At this point Twilight was giving him a weird look.

"What're you doing?" she asked him.

"Back on earth I discovered I had the ability to absorb knowledge from books just by touching my forehead to them," he explained, "I graduated early and went to college to get a better job. I'm basically an egghead."

Twilight looked at him and wondered if he could learn other abilities from ponies and humans. Just then she heard a knock at the door. Spike went to answer it and found that it was Princess Luna.

"Oh, hello Princess. Who're you here for?" he asked.

Luna just smiled and said, "I'm here to see Eclipsia." Upon hearing his name, Eclipsia walked to the door and saw the princess waiting for him.

He smiled and said to Twilight, "I'll be right back."

He walked outside with Luna and was about to speak when she gestured toward the forest.

He got the hint and took flight in which Luna joined him and spoke first, "Hello Eclipsia how are you this fine night?"

"I am doing fine. How about yourself?" Eclipsia asked.

"I am doing well but I am slightly confused as to how you did that in the fight," she replied.

"Oh," he said, "I just let my instincts take over."

They landed in a small clearing in the forest and Luna turned to him and said, "Come sit with me, I know that you need some form of comfort as you are not yet adjusted to this world."

Eclipsia smiled and said, "Yes I do, but I know I'm not the only one who needs comfort now." He walked over to her and sat down to which she placed her head against his chest. He brought his head down to hers but as soon as their horns touched a flash of white and blue appeared as both of their eyes glowed each color.


Author's Note

I hope you enjoyed that fight scene because I enjoyed writing it. In case you were wondering Chrysalis is my main villain for this story. I realized in this re-write I made this a dialogue heavy chapter. Congratulations you are almost caught up in the entire story so far. If you wrote a bad comment earlier in this week and read this and are now trying to make ammends for it... FUCK OFF YOU ROYAL PIECES OF SHIT SUCKING HELL WHORE MOTHERFUCKERS GOD DAMN YOU MAKE MY JOB DIFFICULT FUCK YOU!!!... Where was I the last two minutes? Anyway, that doesn't matter now as i am a forgiving person. if you sneezed during this story bless you... if you write a bad comment about my writing style and language fuck you... peace off till the next chapter.

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