The Prophets revenge

by GenocidalFox

Rating: everyone
Tags: Adventure, Tragedy, Dark
Length: 2524

its just the story of how deceasedprophet got his cutiemark and avenged his parents

the first part was just a 50 minutes story but the second part is a story that i already wrote on another website and kind of just wanted to get more people to read

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-09-15 19:39:29 UTC

the story

He knew this place. It was the bank, the one where it all happened. The night of their death

He was with his parents at the bank when suddenly a group of ponies changed into hideous creatures . He heard somepony yell changelings. That must've been who or what they where. suddenly they open fired on the ponies magic flew everywhere therye was no way out. Suddenly a bolt his dad he cringed at his skin started to bubble as if hed been sprayed with mustard gas. Prophet could only scream as his mom got hit to. He may have only been 7 but he realized what he needed to do. He ran up to the nearest sign. Now twisted in in pain after a changelings bolt destroyed it. He picked up the post as it seemed like the sharpest thing in the room. Suddenly it hit him, his parents were dead now and so was every pony else in the room. He charged at the things skewering all but one he no longer had mercy. They were all dead now except one. The queen> he writhed in pain as her bolt hit him and the light started to fade.

"wake up my little pony it was only a dream" when prophet awoke Princess Luna was standing above him

"where are we?"

" Remember you came into the forest at dusk to clear your head but you fell asleep."

The memory jumped into prophets head after a bunch of fillies joked him for not having his cutie mark(being 17 and all) he ran into the forest so he didn't hurt them like he did the changelings.

"yes I remember now I had a nightmare about when my parents died"

"That was a tragic night indeed prophet but it is over chrysalis fled after you killed her servants. 39 ponies died that night but you survived"

"I saved the day to late though"

" Don't be so butt hurt about it prophet you we..."

Suddenly 3 green blast hit the tree nearest to Prophet...three  green blast he knew. He pushed Luna to the ground and pulled a knife out. He always carried that knife it was his only protection from his paranoia.

"Not them again" Prophets blade morphed into a sword just in time for another blast to hit it. A group of changelings emerged from the shadows hissing at him.

"hello Prophet I've been wondering when we may cross paths again"

"FUCK you chrysalis this time I'll put your head on a pole" so much venom was contained in his words the queen recoiled almost immediately .

" How dare you speak to me like that. My servants will send you to the deepest pits of hell for that!"

" HA im already therye"

Prophet leaped at the queen, ready to stick his blade down her throat when a changeling teleported in front of him and received it with it's skull instead. Two more furiously ran at him but before they even stooped he had knelt to the ground. When they finally got to him he slit the first ones Achilles tendon and stuck his blade through its throat as is fell. The second died even quicker as Prophet ran it through it's chest completely running through its body. The last ran at him but Prophet could not react quick enough and instead ended sparring with it. The blade clashed with the changelings horn but the changeling was not smart enough to block prophets attack as he slid his blade down its horn and reached such an angle it beheaded the demon.

Prophets flank suddenly began to burn. with a brilliant light a biohazard warning appeared on his flank. He had no time to react before chrysalis was on top of him

"Now i shall take revenge on my servants and give you the pain that you brought to them."

A dark blue ray suddenly blasted her off of him.

"prophet take her life now avenge those ponies!" Luna screamed as if she was watching 2 gladiators fight

he reached his sword and threw it at the queen as she rose back up. It took her brain out of its skull and instead lodged it in the nearest tree

"now my revenge is complete..."

"Uh prophet that fight was amazing but your line sucked" Luna joked

"How could you joke my line right now?"

"Because I'm not the pony covered in changeling blood I guess" Luna shrugged it off like it was no big deal

"whatever"

"I believe an award is in check for you my dearest pony"

The trumpets blared as prophet received his medal

"Prophet after I saved you from a nightmare you saved me from a band of changelings and Queen chrysalis herself. you even earned your cutie mark well doing it. Not only did you save me but You avenged 39 ponies who were massacred by the hoofs of the queen herself. I award you now with the highest equestrian honor and would like to Invite you to join my royal guard"

"princess Luna I pledge to protect you with my life and along with my actions protect equestria herself"

[centerTHE END

I PLAN ON CONTINUING PROPHETS ADVENTURES AS A ROYAL PROTECTOR IF I GET AN APPROPRIATE AMOUNT OF LIKES SO WATCH FOR THAT]

BTW EVERYPONY I WROTE ANOTHER FIC ON FANFICTION.NET CHECK OUT THE 7TH ELEMENT IF YOU WNT IM GONNA POST THE PROLOUGE AND 1ST CHAPTER TO GET YALL INTRESTED {AND FINISH THE WORD COUNT{OKAY MAYBE THE FIRST 5}}

PROLUGE

Long ago before celstia had even used the 5 elements of harmony to imprison nightmare moon in the sky there was a legend…. A story about a 6th element one not required for its already there an element that brought permanent harmony one known as death. But along with the legend came a prophecy whos verses go something like this….

When the first 5 fail the 6th will rise

The final seal to the story's end

Death will come with blades in hand

A vengeance here will reprimand

The weakest link will be broken

Only to replaced by the new gods token

That funny feeling

Deceased prophet hated it when it happened, but for some reason it happened a lot. He got a weird tingle; it happened whenever some pony died which obviously it was often it was the weirdest tingle. And even weirder the next morning he almost always woke up with a new scar and they NEVER fade. And now here he was standing next to one of his best friends watching pinkie pie die she was murdered by a zombie in her sleep her intestines were leaking from her stomach. All he could feel was that tingle running through his stomach now.

It all started when he was 8 her heard a loud scream come from his parents room. when he ran into the his parents room the first thing he saw was somepony holding a bloodied knife he knew that face anywhere it was the cloudsdale killer that's when prophet looked down and noticed his parents laying on the ground dead he got that tingly feeling in his neck where both pony's had been stabbed.

The next morning the scars had appeared. He only had 2 things in mind vengeance and taking care of his little sister rainbow was still only 5 but no one in cloudsdale was a better flyer well except for him. Now prophet is 18 and rainbow is 15. 2 weeks ago celestia had sent a telegram about a virus that eats at pony's brains and turned them in sadistic freaks .

As Prophet paced his room all he could think of was the Summer Sun Celebration. He was planning to attend it for the first time ever. Suddenly there were three knocks at his door. When he answered the door three royal Pegasus guards were standing in front of him, "Um hey," said Prophet, confused.

"Hello we have a telegram for Deceased Prophet," said the first guard.

"Um, thanks I guess," he said, a bit uncertainly, taking the telegram.

"Well, have a good day," said the second guard and the trio left.

"Yeah thanks," Prophet said, opening the telegram. His eyes widened as he read it;

The message read like this;

ON THIS DAY A HORRIBLE EVENT HAS HAPPENED

A VIRUS HAS BROKEN OUT IN CANTERLOT

IT TURNS NORMAL PONIES IN CANNIBALISTIC PONIES

BRING ALL RESIDENTS OF EACH HOME IN THEIR HOUSES

IF YOU ARE BITTEN BY A PONY PLEASE EVACUATE FROM OTHER PONYS AS THE VIRUS WILL SPREAD TO YOU IF NOT YOU ARE NOT DEAD

PLEASE AS A CITIZEN OF EQUESTRIA SAVE YOURSELF FROM THEM!

Suddenly Prophet felt a tingle run down his back. He knew the virus was ready to kill.

"Rainbow Dash is in Ponyville! I've got to bring her back to Cloudsdale!" shouted Prophet.

Prophet ran to the side of his cloud and jumped… He fell four hundred feet at least then twenty… fifteen to *fwoosh* he spread his wings right before his snout touched the ground. He flew faster than anypony before, three…two…..one…. a blood curdling blast made of red black and green followed his trail, "Ha Sonic Deathboom." When he first landed he had no idea where he was, he had never visited Ponyville before…. This could be a problem.

High above him the moon and the stars got into alignment to unleash the nightmare of a thousand years ago.

Xxxxx

Hey people

He zoomed through sugarcube corner when suddenly his eyes met the most beautiful mare he ever saw. She had a gorgeous white coat with the prettiest red and black mane with pink eyes full of the best kind of life. *splash* prophet suddenly found himself head over hoof…in a fountain.

"hello, would you like some help?"asked the unicorn

"um yeah do you know rainbow dash?"

"alittle"

"can you help me find her?"

"last I heard she was at ajs doing a barn raise"

"one more question"

"sure anything"

"can you bring me there im new here?"

"sure but need a hoof?"

"no thanks"

As prophet climbed out of the fountain he couldn't help but stare at the beautiful unicorn.

"im fairy tale by the way"

"uh ok im prophet deceased prophet"

"imtimidating and I see youre quite the lookout"

"oh sorry for staing its just you look amazing"

"thanks so why do you wanna find rainbow so bad?"

" Well shes my little sister"

"seriously no way that's gotta be interesting"

"90 percent of the time yeah"

After walking 20 or so minutes they arrived at sweet apple acres.

"where here"acknowledged fairy "rainbow you gotta a visitor!"

"sweet who?" asked rainbow

"says hes your brother"

"prophet?"

"yep"

"no way"

"hey little sis"

"how did you find me?"

"uh this super beautiful mare helped me"

"seriously bro"

"shut up"

"yeah so why are you here?"

" I got a letter from celestia"

"everyone did but the virus wont be here for a while"

"HHHHHHEEEEEELLLLLLPPPP!" screamed a new pony

"actually its already here"

as the mare galloped towards them at full speed fairy tales heart dropped standing next her was deceased prophet the most amazing stallion she ever met (her life was uh...quite boring in a polite way) but galloping towards her was her best friend since pony high grey rain.

"grey!" she called

"Fairy tale? help me!"

fairy mind kicked into over drive she had no idea how to save grey without getting herself killed as well. after all the look on those ponys eyes screamed murder it was kinda scary.

"um fairy?" prophet asked surprisingly calm for their situation.

"yes that's a mare" fairy knew he was probably commenting on greys overly manly voice

"not my question but great to know"

"oh well can you help her for me "

"that was my question"

"good"

prophet flew into the air.

"wait prophet"

"yeah?"

"be careful"

he had a plan already he always kept the knife from the stallion who killed in parents under his wing like some sort of revenge statement to the world. he pulled it out from under his wing right before he touched the ground almost immediately he was attacked by the first zombie it stabbed at him with its horn but he parried and slit its jugular he felt the tingle across his neck instantaneously

the next one charged at him he fit the blade right in its rib cage the curve made it turn into its stomach yet another tingle before he could react the third one jumped at him he was pinned to the ground by it when suddenly another blade went through its eyebrow

"I told you not to hurt yourself" fairy joked

"why cant I get hurt?"

"because if I have to repopulate equestrian when this is over I guarantee you the stallion that helps me do it better be pretty **ing cute"

"oh celestia save me"

"excuse me but well you guys were having the time of youre lives flirting well murdering zombies the zombies were murdering me so yeah quit before I puke" grey interrupted

"fine"they two ponys said at the exact same time

"yes and bro we need shelter" rainbow also interrupted

"k"

"and bring youre gf to"

" shes not my gf?...yet."

THE GOD PONY

When the three pony's had returned to the group everypon y was already panicking

"Where do we go?"

"Were all gonna die!"

"How many are already dead?"

"who is already dead"

"Why me"

"What about my mane?"

"QUIET!"yelled rainbow dash

She yelled so loud even prophet took a step back."everypony get it gonna make it no matter first we need food,shelter,and weapons" rainbow continued "does anypony know where we can get those?"

"We can use sweet apple acres for food"apple Jack said matter of factly

"And my library for shelter"twilight contributed

"And I have a huge weapons stash"came a new voice"I'm darkstar I used to work for the royal guard" the new pony looked exactly like prophet except instead of green in his mane he had red"by the way your an amazing fighter prophet"

"Hhow do you know my name"prophet stumbled.

"Easy...I'm your godpony"darkstar offered

"No your not if you were you wouldn't have let me and rainbow fend for ourselves all these years!" Prophet had never been as defensive as he was now it scared everypony even fairy-tale was getting nervous

"I was your father best friend in ponyhigh. After we got out he met your mom and started a family he then had you I was the godpony years past until I could see you so I joined the royal guard a few years later I was stationed in a place to Important to mention then your parents were killed I begged celestia to let me go but she wouldn't allow it that's why I never helped I tried but I couldn't. this virus is the only reason I'm allowed to be here because canterlot has already...fallen

THERYE WE GO THANKS AND I BETTER BE AT THE WORD COUNT NOW BUT JUST IN CASE HERES THE LINK

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9402757/1/the-7th-element