The downfall of the rainbow factory

by Megacoll51

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Alternate Universe, Comedy, Adventure
Length: 855

Based off of the wonderful story by aroura dawn, I give you, The downfall of the rainbow factory!

Everything has went well in the rainbow factory since the failures had tried to escape, until somepony decides to try out for the job. because she and rainbowdash are the only ponies insane enough to be outside of the rainbow factory, (or so they think) they let her stay with her family. But can she keep the secret?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-09-16 02:21:06 UTC

Nothing can go wrong today!

The sun Shone through the windows onto moonlight flash's face. She stretched and smiled. Today she would try out for a job at the rainbow factory. First she would have to take her little cousin to school because her other cousin is at her concert. She got up and walked downstairs. "Your late! I need to be at school in 5 minutes!" The filly yelled. Moonlight flash rolled her eyes "get in the cart. Lets go." Moonlight Flash flew to the cart with the filly. She hooked herself up and as she flew off towards the school. Asked "So singsong, what are you learning about in school?" Singsong responded happily "we are learning about rainbows! It's lots of fun! At the end of the semester we get to make our own rainbow out of spectra from the rainbow factory!" She smiled and looked around "we're here already! See ya Moonlight Flash!" And singsong sped off into the school.

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Moonlight Flash knocked on the door to the rainbow factory the door slowly slid open showing a rainbow maned Pegasus by the name of Rainbow Dash. "What do you possibly want?" Rainbow Dash asked "I want to work in the rainbow factory!" Rainbow Dash looked at Moonlight Flash in surprise. "You, want to work, in the rainbow factory?" "Yes mam!" "Are you sure?" "Yes mam!" "Alright fine!" Rainbow Dash let Moonlight Flash in. "Now, you probably want to know what we do here. We take fillies and colts who hadn't passed they're flying test, We call them failures, and grab them with This crane, break their spine, and drop them in Here. After that the machine pumps out the spectra, and we make use of the body one way or another. Got it?"  Moonlight Flash nodded and said quite happily "this reminds me of a daring doo book I read, the bad guy kills

Fillies and colts and daring doo saves them!" Rainbow Dash stared at Moonlight Flash "you aren't the brightest are you?" Rainbow Dash asked Moonlight Flash."you are probably right!" "Well head off to the coffee room and you will meet the ponies you will work with, I have some duties to do." Moonlight Flash snickered "you said dooty! Pfft! BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Rainbow Dash stared at Moonlight Flash thinking 'does she have brain damage or is the just that insane? Is it because of what we do here? No time to think of that now,' "the coffee room, got it?" "YES MAM!" and Moonlight Flash flew off to the coffee room.

Who will I meet?

Moonlight Flash walked into the coffee room, she saw two ponies in the room one was hiding in the corner the other drinking coffee. "Hi! I am new here! Rainbow Dash seemed quite surprised after I asked to work here... I wonder why!" A brown pony with white hair spit coffee in her face. "You, asked to work HERE? I mean everypony here were forced, except one pony who jumped in the machine when he found out what we did, plus You are quite cool about it, what's up with that?" Moonlight Flash wiped off the coffee from her face and said "well I just didn't care what we did, and who the hay are you?" "Sorry the name's builder bot, my sister is bot builder.What is your name?" "Moonlight Flash, my cousin is songlong." "THE Moonlight Flash? Songlong is your cousin? Wow, you're more famous than my sis!" "Meh when I get home-" "home? Nonononononono, you see you stay here for the rest of your life. There is a story you should know though, a filly Rainbow Dash knew failed the test, and she was sent here, she tried to escape but she couldn't and Rainbow Dash herself killed her. Sad day for her, locked that room up." "Wait, so we aren't allowed out? That's not cool-" "I see somepony has an attitude," builder bot jumped the pony in the corner wimpered and Moonlight Flash waved "hi Rainbow Dash!" "Cotton ball, stop your whimpering! Now what wasn't cool?" "We can't go outside it seems so dull and boring in here, plus- ooh a coffee machine! Oh sorry off track, just this place doesn't seem like it needs THAT type of security." Rainbow Dash's frown grew to a smile, "looks like somepony can be trusted, you and ONLY you can be allowed out of this place at night, after you prove yourself with this Bach of failures I just got, lets go." Rainbow Dash walked off and builder bot stared at Moonlight Flash even cotton ball got out of the corner and said "m-m-my your verry b-b-brave." Moonlight Flash smiled. And hopped out following Rainbow Dash.

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Moonlight Flash watched in interest as Rainbow Dash demonstrated what they do to the foals to the foals. Moonlight Flash wasn't at all grossed out or surprised or anything for that matter. She was guarding the doorway stopping foals from breaking through the door. For the most part, they were bunched up In the middle.

But then a colt noticed Moonlight Flash and how distracted she was...