
The Captain and the Crusaders
The Cutie Mark Crusaders, and Spike, reunite to rescue Babs Seed from vicious pirates, facing temptation of treasure and the fancy of a pirate captain
Greetings and well met to all you Fimfictioneers out there! This is my very first piece of pony fiction, and I hope I do not disappoint!
Times are tough for Apple Bloom and Babs Seed in the coastal town of Hayseed Harbour, but fate has marked them to be swept to sea, in pursuit of dastardly pirates! Apple Bloom takes to the ocean and sky with Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo and Spike to rescue her cousin! Terror rides the gales, and the four friends must unravel the mystery of the Dread Pirate Pip. The lust for treasure draws both parties on to riches and drawn swords!
As a new beginner, I'd be happy to hear constructive criticism and friendly comments from passers-by.





29166 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read
7 Chapters:
- High Winds Upon the Shore 2013-09-17 19:05:27 UTC2552
- Reunion at the Sea Turtle 2013-09-17 22:21:56 UTC3128
- The Attack on Hayseed Harbour 2013-09-19 17:09:28 UTC3250
- Smoke and the Sun’s Rays 2013-09-25 01:01:52 UTC4743
- The Crusaders Take to the Waves 2013-10-01 00:35:38 UTC3713
- Sawlty Towers 2013-10-07 23:47:01 UTC6871
- Dinner with the Captain 2013-10-15 00:53:50 UTC4909