Twilight's Review

by Sage Runner

daring do rainbow dash and teh wonderbolts

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daring do arrived at the temple and rainbow dash was there.  no better yet daring do made her way through the trees of the jungle and saw upon the templ legendary temple she had been looking for.  it was super big and rocky and looked like other temples.  rainbow dash was there.  'who are you' daring do asked rainbow dash. 'i am rainbow dash' rainbow dash said and flew down to see her.  the wonderbolts were doing tricks in the sky above and it was AWESOME.  'so what are you doing here' daring do asked her new best friend.  'just hanging out you know practicing an awesome new trick' rainbow dash said.  'what kind of trick' daring do asked.  'one where I fly up into storm clouds, corkscrew down bringing a trail of them with me then do a sonic rainboom that will make a bunch of lightning go off' is what rainbow dash said.  'that sounds AWESOME you should take a break and hunt treasure in this temple with me'  daring do said.  'if you insist' rainbow dash said.  'i do insist your way to cool too not hang out with the wonderbolts can come to'  daring do said.  'they will because im there captain and they like doing what i say' rainbow dash said.  so daring do rainbow dash and the wonderbolts rainbow dash daring do and the wonderbolts went into the temple and it was full of traps.  all kinds of traps like in other daring do novels and they avoided all of them because they were awesome.  'that was a close call' daring do said.  'more like several' rainbow dash said and the wonderbolts laughed.  they found the main room and there was a really huge crystal or something there and daring do wanted it but was scared of more traps.  'ill get it cause im not scared of nothing' rainbow dash said flying up and grabbing the crystal.  it started a new trap but rainbow dash defeated it and daring do thanked her.  they went outside the temple.  'here you earned this' daring do said giving rainbow dash the golden pegasus.  'thank you im gonna put this in our apartment' rainbow dash said.  oh right they decided to get an apartment together because they liked banging so much.  the wonderbolts were gonna be there next door neighbors.  rainbow dash daring do rainbow dash and the wonderbolts did more tricks before daring do said 'ready for the next temple' and rainbow dash said 'you know it' and so they went and did the next temple and that will be in the sequel.

Gotcha, egghead!