Breaking Her In

by Vagando Baronessa

Rating: mature
Tags: Human, Romance, Original Character, Rarity, Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 4830

Finding a job as a human was a daunting enough task as it was. Now, her new pony superiors teach her about following orders.

Settling into Ponyville hasn't been easy for her. Wary of the creature that popped into Canterlot Castle from who knows where, the mares and stallions alike give her a wide berth regardless of the assurances from the Princesses that she is harmless. If it were not for Rarity, Sofia would find herself alone and destitute.

Sofia soon learns that the Element of Generosity can manifest in so many different ways...

Warnings for:
Mild bondage
Blindfolding
Very mild breath play
A small horse and a human woman engaging in the above acts and more

First in a planned series following Sofia.

Published 2013-09-22 21:20:03 UTC
Last updated 2013-09-22 21:20:03 UTC

Commovente Generosità

I have failed again.

Dull green eyes followed the dancing dust motes highlighted by the rays of the setting sun, spilling over the windowsill of Carousel Boutique. She heaved a shuddering sigh, lifting her eyes to follow the sun's progress with little interest. Her thoughts turned inwards, arms tightly wrapped around her midsection, nails digging lightly into her own sides. So lost in her thoughts she was that she did not even hear the gentle thud of perfectly manicured hooves behind her.

It had been a fairly average day, all told, up until the very last customer. Selling clothing to tiny and colorful horses was not on her list of possible careers prior to this little adventure, but as it was the only job she could find, she threw herself into it with all the gusto she previously reserved for her biology classes and internships. Even though most of the ponies treated her as a potentially dangerous oddity, she had learned to simply grit her teeth and smile.

Until today.

He had been a large, blustering beast of a stallion. Some noble or other, if Rarity's excited prancing was any indication, and one with a lot of bits to spend. Swaggering into the shop with a nearly predatory gleam in his eye, he had set about making life an unreasonably difficult experience for the mare and the woman both. Running Rarity ragged with measurements, color demands, and fetching examples, the mare herself had politely introduced Sofia as her assistant and sent her to retrieve the assorted pre-made suits in stock.

After holding up one suit after another to his slate gray coat and receiving nothing but disdainful snorts in return, Sofia had desperately committed a cardinal sin against them both: she returned with a previous season's design from the clearances waiting to be tagged and set out. Rarity hardly twitched as she lifted the garment in her pale blue magic, smiling as she explained the way the burgundy would surely bring out the sheen of his coat, the black neck trim at a daring contrast with his clear blue eyes. He had eyed it even as Rarity attempted to hold it up to him, lip curling as he backed slightly.

"That scrap is hardly worth clothing me, and that... beast touching it makes it unworthy of clothing even my lowest servant. Make away with it at once, and bring me something clean."

As Rarity stood, aghast at the blatant rudeness to her assistant, Sofia lifted the garment and ran her hands over it once, cheeks flushing with anger as she lashed out for the first time. "Sì, he is correct that this suit is not appropriate for him. This opening for his neck is far too small."

Blinking twice, Rarity had looked up at her. "Whatever do you mean, darling? That should fit him just fine."

"Non, you see, it needs a larger hole to fit over that inflated head of his."

Sofia had found it funny, at the time, that a white horse could still manage to somehow go even paler. The vindictive amusement had drained from her swiftly as the stallion reared back with an angry roar, smashing his hooves down on Rarity's podium and cracking it slightly. "This is an outrage! You call yourself a buisnessmare? None worth her salt would hire a... a beastly thing like her! I can promise that you won't be selling a single thread again, madam."

With an angry glare, he had taken his leave, Rarity spewing apologies and pleas for both sides to just calm down, I'm sure you both said things you didn't mean. Watching him canter to the train station, Rarity's shoulders had slumped as she made her way slowly back into the boutique, flipping the sign on the door over to 'closed'. Helplessly, Sofia had reached out, mouth working but no words escaping.

With a calming breath, Rarity had turned to her, smile brittle and bright like cracked ice on a pond. "I'm going to make some tea, dear. We shall discuss this matter soon."

Gentle breaths on her neck snapped Sofia from her reverie, fingers swiping strands of mousy brown hair from her eyes as she turned to face her employer. Rarity looked down at the kneeling human, an almost thoughtful look in her azure eyes. "Sofia, I am certain you are aware at which point you crossed the line of professionalism, yes?"

Nodding hastily, she fussed with her satin skirt, unable to meet Rarity's gaze. "Y-yes, madam. I apologize."

Clicking her tongue, the unicorn paced around the woman, eying her from all angles. "No, darling. You see, that simply isn't going to be good enough."

Eyes flying up to meet hers, Sofia shook her head. "Please, please... I am sorry, and it will not happen again! Please do not fire me, Miss Rarity. I-I need to work, and..."

A white hoof silenced her gently. "Oh, dear, that isn't what I meant. I simply meant that you clearly need more intensive training." A true smile graced her muzzle, eyes shining as she lowered her hoof, looking at the human with calm expectation.

"Training? I know that what I did was wrong, do I truly need more training to help you sell your fashions?" Sofia puzzled over the suggestion, remembering the two weeks spent studying fashion trends, famous designers, and the history of certain types of cloth.

"Sofia, I meant that you need training to fit into life here. You see, darling, I've said worse to customers myself when they push me too far. Customers may be my lifeblood, but the reason I do so love working for myself is that I can, in fact, fire customers when necessary." Smiling brightly still, she began to pace again, hips swinging in a much more languid fashion than before. Her tail brushed Sofia's arms as she passed, making the woman shiver in a combination of fear and expectation.

Lighting her horn, the unicorn drew down the shades around the boutique with measured, deliberate flicks of her magic. "You see, there are some ponies that you, as a newcomer of a different species living off our goodwill, need to respect more than you do. Nobles are one such example. I am another."

Sofia rose hastily, wringing her hands as she looked down at the pony. "I do respect you, Miss Rarity! You and your friends have been the only ones to show me friendship so far, I would be a fool to not respect you after all you've done for me!" A sharp pain lanced suddenly across her right ear, and she cried out, looking with confusion at the pony regarding her with half lidded eyes.

"If you respected me, Sofia, you would remember that I am your boss first and friend second during business hours. Regardless of our relationship otherwise, working hours are just that. If you respected me, you would show nothing but kindness and patience to all of my customers, given your ignorance of how our social system works." She paced forth again, rearing up to place her forelegs on Sofia's trembling shoulders. Cooing, she leaned up, white lips directly beside the woman's ear. "I will be teaching you respect."

The low purr of Rarity's voice wound through the woman's body, a small flower of heat blooming in her midsection. "Y-Yes, Rarity."

"Good." Pushing off of Sofia gently, she returned to all fours, eyes hardening. "Now. I want you to remove your clothing, fold them neatly, and set them on the podium."

A lance of ice shot through the woman at this order, creeping through her until her entire body trembled. Steeling herself, and remembering that ponies did not see nudity as taboo, she breathed deeply and nodded. Reaching behind herself, she tugged on the strings making up the corset top of her satin shirt, the threads slackening as she pulled the top up and over her head. Her large, full breasts slipped free, swaying slightly as she brought the top back down and folded it carefully, setting it on the podium. Slipping her hands swiftly to her hips, she slid her makeshift skirt off, folding the green satin as she had its mate and putting it beside the top. Turning to Rarity, she smiled nervously, arms wrapped around her body as she shivered still.

Her heart wound up somewhere in the vicinity of her knees as she saw Rarity shake her perfect mane once. "I said to remove your clothing. That means all of your clothing, Sofia." The unicorn's gaze fell over her body, tracing the line of her neck down, resting on her breasts and hardening nipples that swayed with each shiver for a moment before continuing downwards. Sofia felt the pull of elastic against her hip as blue magic tugged lightly at the side of her frilled panties, and her eyes widened.

"I... Miss Rarity, where I come from, that is to be kept covered..." Her hands fidgeted, fussing with the top trim of the panties as she pleaded her case. "It's considered wrong to show it publicly."

"Two things about that, dear," Rarity said, sauntering to the human. "Firstly, we are not in public, are we?" Sofia shook her head slowly, unsure where the unicorn was going with this. "And secondly, I simply don't care. You will remove them because I told you to. Understood?"

Gazing down at the unicorn in mild shock, she swallowed hard, unable to tear her eyes from Rarity's. Those deep blue gems, set so perfectly in her face, half-lidded in a farce of serenity as something more burned behind them. They were not eyes, Sofia decided, that one would say no to. Scrunching her own eyes shut, she slid her panties down her legs slowly, revealing a small, neatly trimmed triangle of public hair. Rarity slipped behind her as she bent to remove them fully, exposing her neat lips below her round ass for a moment before she straightened out and placed the panties with the outfit. Rarity nodded in appreciation, half smile playing at her lips.

"Excellent job. Now, back to your knees, Sofia."

The human did as ordered, blushing furiously as she sank back down, arms still around herself as though to hold that blossom of heat that spread through her at Rarity's gaze. Still, she shivered, back bowing as she leaned forward slightly out of instinct to cover as much of herself as she could. The unicorn noticed this, eyes softening.

"I had thought you were merely cold. What is the matter? Surely others have seen you like this before." Rarity sat before the woman, putting one comforting hoof on her shoulder. "If you truly wish me to stop, just say so."

Biting her lip, Sofia shook her head quickly, looking up. "I do not like how I look unclothed, Miss Rarity. It is a self-esteem problem, and nothing more. I'm sorry." Her head bowed back down as she tried to force her hands to release her waist, but it was a lost cause.

She glanced up again as a chuckle escaped Rarity, who pulled Sofia into a warm embrace for a moment. The woman shivered again, the heat flaring inside her at the feel of soft, warm fur on her skin. "Don't be silly, Sofia, you haven't got a single thing to be self-conscious about. You're utterly lovely, if I may say so."

Pulling back from the hug regretfully, Sofia shrugged. "I am considered to be too large to be attractive where I come from. It has made me very nervous about being nude." She bit her lip again, considering. "Others have seen me naked, and I have had sexual relationships before, but it's always... daunting, in front of a new person. Or pony."

"Then I suppose I shall need to teach you to respect yourself as well, don't I? I can hardly have you saying nasty things about yourself right in front of yourself, now can I? That's utterly rude, dear." The unicorn dropped a wink that set alight a swarm of butterflies in Sofia's gut, and she giggled nervously.

"I suppose that's fair."

"Indeed it is. Now, I want you to sit up straight, and rest your hands on your legs for me." Unfolding herself, Sofia did her best to comply, body still thrumming with nervous energy at Rarity's gaze. "Let's start from the top, shall we?"

Taking a long, thin crop from a side cabinet, Rarity held it aloft in her magic. Trailing it down Sofia's head, she nodded. "Your hair is lush, full, and gleams with the light. Mares would kill for that kind of effortless beauty in their manes." The crop trailed further, landing on her neck and eliciting a small shiver. "Your skin is creamy and soft, and I've noted that it's covered with the most delightful light down. I didn't think humans had body hair, before, but now that I'm looking closely, you do."

"Y-Yes, it's a remnant from when we had full coats of hair like other mammals, and-" She was cut off with a sudden, harsh flick of the crop, hitting her earlobe sharply before resting back on her neck.

"I did not request a history lesson. Please do not interrupt me again." Nodding hastily, Sofia looked back up to Rarity attentively.

"As I was saying..." She trailed the crop down to her breasts, flicking the nipples gently and relishing the small moans it elicited. "Then you have these breasts, as you call them. I find them so interesting as they are on your chest and not your pelvis, and it lends this... strangely alluring shape to your body." Stepping closer, Rarity nuzzled Sofia's neck gently, pressing her chest to the human's. "And the nipples feel just divine rubbing against my coat." The woman shuddered, bringing her hands up with the intention of pressing the pony to her, but Rarity caught the movement from the corner of her eyes and brought the crop down lightly on the back of Sofia's hand. "I wasn't finished, dear."

Sitting before the human now, she took the crop and trailed it further down, over her stomach. "You have a long torso, with this lovely nip of a waist in the middle that leads down in this perfect 'V' shape to here." Smiling deviously, she stroked the woman's pubic hair gently with the head of the crop, reveling in her small whimpers as she fought to keep her thighs together. "And of course, those strong legs of yours, full of muscle but covered with soft skin."

Bringing the crop back up under Sofia's chin, Rarity drew her face close. "There is so much more, Sofia, but I daresay you get the idea, hmm?"

Nodding, Sofia relaxed, smiling back at the unicorn. "I suppose you are right, Miss Rarity."

"Of course I am, dear." The two shared a chuckle at that, Sofia relaxing almost completely before a sound slap of the crop on her breast brought her forcibly back to rigid attention. "Now," Rarity snapped, eyes flashing, "there is the matter of your education on how to treat others. Now that you know to be good to yourself, perhaps you shall do better with this." Ignoring the squirms and whines of the human, Rarity lit her horn once again, drawing a motley assortment of fabrics to her hooves.

Rolling a startling violet silk tightly into a rope, the unicorn glanced down at Sofia. "Did you know that silk is actually quite strong?" The purple rope, held aloft in a blue glow, settled around the woman's wrists as she watched, enchanted. "One wouldn't think so, given how soft and delicate it seems, but I assure you that when used correctly, it's as strong as steel." Tying it off tightly around the woman's wrists to punctuate her point, she smiled deviously as Sofia whimpered.

Heart racing, Sofia twisted her wrists uncomfortably against the sharp bite of the fabric. Long end pieces of silk flowed from her arms down over her thighs to pool gently beside her, shimmering slightly in the glow of magic. Swallowing hard, the woman considered. I need only tell her to stop, and she will. With something akin to bemusement, she came to a sudden realization. But I really don't want her to stop, do I? Her body squirmed, vulva rubbing against her legs as she tightened and loosened her thighs almost unconsciously, feeling the squeeze against her clitoris.

A second silken rope wrapped itself delicately around her neck, a simple slip knot forming at the base of her neck. Rarity smiled, giving the new rope an experimental tug, and was rewarded with Sofia's head rocking back, her body shivering with pleasure. "Don't think I couldn't see what you were doing just there. That shall be your first lesson. Your personal pleasure comes secondary to that of mine and my customers."

The crop flew down, slapping Sofia sharply across both nipples, leaving her breasts swaying in its wake. Crying out, the woman brought her hands to cover herself instinctively, only to have her wrists yanked down harshly by the silken rope. "No. If you do that again, well, I have ways of making you be still." Sofia nodded dumbly, nipples stinging as the air moved across them. The pony grinned, a glint in her azure eyes as she pressed closer to the human.

"My poor darling..." Cooing, the unicorn caressed Sofia's stiff, pink nipples with her magic, drawing a moan from the woman as she squirmed once again. Eyes skipping down to Sofia's hands, clenching and unclenching, Rarity smirked. "You want those fingers working at your own clit, don't you dear?" Nodding furiously, Sofia's green eyes pleaded with the unicorn. "Well, I'm afraid that's simply too bad. You must learn some self-control, after all, or we risk more outbursts like we had earlier, don't we?"

Rarity turned, bringing her rump even with the human's face. Keeping her magic working lightly at Sofia's nipples, the unicorn slowly leaned down to rest on her forelegs, back legs ramrod straight as her dark tail flicked lightly from side to side. Sofia could see with each flick a glimpse of a puffy, white vulva, the smell of Rarity's musk making its way into her nose and through her senses. Leaning forward slightly, she caught a deeper whiff, her own vagina growing wetter at the smell and sight of the pony's slick little slit.

Snapping her tail at the human's nose, Rarity glanced over her shoulder to eye her critically. "Now, what did I literally just say? Self control." Her magic left Sofia's nipples, instead pressing against her shoulders to force her to lean back. Lifting her crop in another tendril of the blue glow, Rarity brought it to her own vulva, flicking her tail aside completely to allow the tip of the crop to press to her lips. Jolting at the touch, she pressed it further to herself, sliding open her lips and dragging downwards to her sizable clitoris. She shuddered, the crop slapping at her clitoris gently before switching to a more gentle circular rubbing motion, and Rarity let out a deep, satisfied moan.

"Do you like this, darling? Do you enjoy watching me rub my pussy?" At Sofia's mute nod, a wolfish grin split her muzzle. "Tell me, dear, why does your body shake so much, hmm?"

Swallowing past the lump in her quite suddenly very dry throat, Sofia's eyes darted from the vulva before her to the one eye visible over Rarity's withers. "I... you are very sexy, Rarity. I do like it, I just... I want to do it for you. To make you moan, to make you cum. I want to be the reason for it." Biting her already sore lips, Sofia looked down, trailing her eyes over Rarity's legs to her hooves.

"Mmm, I see. Do you really think you can do that? Do you really think you deserve to?" The flagging tail teased past Sofia's nose again, rocking her head upright once more.

"I am sorry for earlier. I truly am. Perhaps, then, I can make it up to you through pleasure?" Hopeful eyes shining, Sofia allowed a smile of her own to form.

Rarity considered, tail swishing languidly, before she stood, eying Sofia critically. "I see what you're trying to do, and I assure you, I can do one better." More long strands of silk flew to the unicorn, shaping into ropes identical to the ones around Sofia's neck and wrists. Tying one to each of her ankles firmly, Rarity used her magic to lift the woman to her feet.

Gesturing with her horn to the podium, her magic pressed gently to the small of Sofia's back, making her skin prickle with goosebumps. "Get over on there and lay down on your back." Sofia hesitated for a moment, until she felt the stinging crack of the crop against her exposed ass. "I mean now."

With a whimper, the woman made her way as directed, sweeping her clothing to the side as she laid down hastily, legs dangling off the end. Another sharp crack rang against her stomach, Rarity's infuriated gaze meeting her own confused one. "I made that outfit for you specifically, and you simply toss it on the floor? Have you no respect at all?" The crop came down, again and again, stinging against her breasts, her stomach, and her inner thighs. Sofia curled up defensively, crying out with each hard downswing.

"S-sorry, I..." Fumbling, she reached for the clothing with her bound hands, only to have it snatched away by Rarity's own magic.

"No. If you cannot be trusted to put them away properly, I suppose they're just going to have to go back on you, won't they?" The short skirt was pulled up to her waist once more, while the top moved to her head. Rarity stopped, considering for a moment, before smirking. "I don't want to cover up those lovely breasts of yours, so I think this may be a better use of the top." Magic wrapped the loose satin top around the top half of Sofia's head, covering her forehead and eyes before being cinched tight by the cords in the back. Thus blindfolded, Sofia trembled more, unable to see or anticipate any of Rarity's moves.

A sharp tug to her ankles and bound wrists was followed by them being stretched just slightly too far, Rarity binding the loose ends of the silk to latches beneath the podium's false front. Chuckling lightly, she gave the ropes a tug to assure that they were tight, hefting the crop in her magic once more. "Now, you're going to earn the right to pleasure me."

Nodding, Sofia licked her dry lips nervously. She was amazed at how much smaller the world got while blindfolded, each minute noise making her own ears twitch upwards, her head turning slightly to follow. Ignorant to sight, her world focused down into sensations, each brush of cool air or whiff of musk heightened that much further as her other senses scrambled to make up for the loss of one. Hearing the sharp clack of hooves on tile by her right shoulder, she turned her head slightly before feeling a sudden, searing pain as the crop whipped down onto her lower left leg. Whimpering, she followed the hoofsteps around to the left side of her body, tensing her left side instinctively before another sear of pain shot down her right breast.

With a sudden jolt, Sofia realized that with Rarity's use of magic, her other senses were now wholly irrelevant.

A light chuckle drifted to her ears. "I'm sorry, am I confusing you?"

"N-No. I understand now."

"Good."

The crop trailed its way down Sofia's body, lingering for a bare moment between her outstretched legs. Sofia jolted again, feeling the implement flick at her clitoris before sliding down her legs. Warm, soft fur rubbed on either side of her face as Rarity set her rear hooves on the podium, resting her body against Sofia's as she brought her vulva closer to the human's face. The reaction was immediate; Sofia leaned her neck forwards to follow the smell, only to be tugged back by the scarf around her neck. Airway constricting slightly, she let out a whimper at the feel of blood rushing through her brain, pounding at her temples as her oxygen depleted slightly. Releasing her magic, Rarity allowed Sofia large gulps of breath, her reddened cheeks fading back to a creamy white.

"You need to ask first." Rarity's tail laid across the blindfold teasingly, draping the human's face in a tent of her musk.

"Please, Miss Rarity, may I lick you?" Reveling in the trembling form beneath her, Rarity nipped her inner thigh once.

"Mm, I suppose you haven't been very good, but I must admit that seeing the 'brave, strong human', as Celestia called you, tied up in such a manner has gotten me quite hot. Where you come from, perhaps people ride ponies, but from now on, the pony rides you." With that proclamation, Rarity settled her slick vulva over Sofia's full lips, resting her head on the human's upper thighs.

With a moan, Sofia pressed her mouth to the puffy lips of her boss, tongue working gently to split the folds. At the taste of Rarity's juices, she shuddered, neck straining to rise ever higher as she pushed deeper. Her tongue found Rarity's engorged clitoris easily, sucking the sizable nub and flicking her tongue across it, relishing with some triumph the moan it elicited. Panting slightly, Rarity got her forelegs beneath her, her ass lowering further to cover Sofia's mouth and nose.

Body quivering, Sofia held her breath as long as she could, still lapping and sucking at the shaking unicorn's clit. Rarity moaned, orgasm seizing her, cum drenching the woman's face and blindfold. Breath running out finally, Sofia shook her head violently, trying desperately to suck in some air and getting only marecum for her efforts. Rarity raised her ass at the last moment, the woman panting even as her tongue licked Rarity's juices from her lips. Smirking, the pony glanced back at the blindfolded human.

"You did well, Sofia." Panting slightly, she wobbled her hips once before steadying. "I think you have earned some pleasure for yourself."

The human shivered, smiling. "Thank you."

Rarity's round white ass lowered again, stopping just shy of Sofia's mouth as her own head darted down, teeth nibbling at the outer lips of Sofia's vulva. Hissing in breath through her teeth, the woman brought her head up to lap at Rarity's vagina once more before being stopped by the magical grip on her neck binding. Pushing against it, she continued to flick at Rarity's clit, arms and wrists twisting against their bonds.

The unicorn redoubled her efforts, own tongue snaking down and through the soaking wet slit of the woman, rubbing her sandpapery tongue against the tiny nib of the woman's clit. A hoof came up, pressing roughly to Sofia's vaginal entrance, growing wetter by the second as the woman bucked and moaned against Rarity's own vulva. The heat gathered in her belly, shooting outwards to spread through her midsection and up to her chest, nipples hardening in anticipation as Rarity kept up her relentless assault. As her tongue danced across Sofia's clit once more, a sudden vicious tug to her neck binding cut off her air, followed by a sudden rough sucking and nibbling on her clitoris as the hoof ground harder onto her vagina.

Mouth working, no sound escaping again, Sofia shook in a mix of panic and pleasure at the biting sensations on both her neck and her clit, body vibrating as the heat spread fully and released in a furious orgasm, coating both Rarity's hoof and muzzle in her juices. Panting slightly, the white unicorn rose off of Sofia, removing the blindfold gently with her hooves. Leaning forward, Rarity lapped up her own cum from the woman's face. Moaning, Sofia reciprocated, tasting her own creamy juices mingled with the unicorn's. Undoing her bindings with magic, Rarity sat beside Sofia, the two catching their breaths.

Their eyes meeting finally, both gave a nervous titter at the other. "So, darling, I hope you've learned that ponies are something to be reckoned with, yes?"

Sitting up shakily, Sofia nodded with a shy smile. "Oh, certainly. I won't make that mistake again, Miss Rarity."

The two shared another laugh, this one more relaxed and genuine, as Rarity replaced the bonds of silk and the crop back into her cabinet. "Well, I don't know about you, dear, but I can certainly use a shower now."

Trotting to the staircase, she cast a rakish grin back at the woman. "Care to join me?"

Sofia smiled widely, following the swinging white hips up the staircase.

Author's Note

I hope you enjoyed my story. I plan on doing a small series, perhaps, to follow Sofia through Equestria.