To Kill a Cute, Little Critter.

by Royaltyx

Rating: teen
Tags: Other, Fluttershy, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark
Length: 1582

2nd person horror

Read the darn story.

Published 2012-03-01 10:14:02 UTC
Last updated 2012-03-01 10:14:02 UTC

To Kill a Cute, Little Critter.

To Kill a Cute, Little Critter

To ravage, my friend.

It is a bright, sunshin' day in Ponyville, as you

settle in to your new home. The Mayor visits you and tells you the Mane Six
to visit to make your new hometown as delightful as possible. “ I'm sure you'll have a great time in our little town of Ponyville! Be sure to visit the mane people I told you about!” as she walks out the door. You think to yourself after about an hour of unpacking, “I should go visit the ponies the Mayor told me about!” You walk out the door at decide to visit Rainbow Dash first. She tells you all about How she clears up the skies and how she always makes the day 20% cooler. You also visit Pinkie Pie, Twilight Sparkle, Rarity, and Applejack, And its the last few hours of the day before
sundown. You finally decide to visit Fluttershy, the most shy (as her name conquers to her personality) out of the bunch. You knock on the door and say, “Hello, is anyone home?” Fluttershy opens the door and answers as her eyes beam with joy, “Oh, yes! Hello! Come in, I was just making some tea.”. You take as nice sip of tea just as you sit down. You admire all of the animals she keeps in her cottage. “Gee, you sure do have a lot of animals here.” you tell her as she wraps a bandage around a little crow's wing. “There you go, little fella.” she says to the crow. “So what do you do around here in Ponyville?”
“Oh, well, um, I take care of a lot of sick animals, and I am one of the leaders in the Winter Wrap-Up * Squee *”. “Is it hard?” you ask in curiosity. “Oh no, not at all. In fact, I really enjoy taking good care of all the animals.”. You wow in amazement of how she manages to take care of all the animals. “Oh, um, excuse me, I have to use the little mare's room, I hope you don't mind.” “Oh not at all” you reply with a wink. She walks over to the restroom, but you here clops as if she was walking back. “Oh and, stay outta mah shed...Er, I mean, Stay out of my basement, please.” She then walks back to the bathroom. As you sit down and drink your tea, You look at all the clockwork she has.

TICK, TOCK. TICK, TOCK.

After 5 minutes, you get sick and tired of hearing that sound. You then get up and walk around and explore her house. As you walk down her hallway, you see small, almost trailed for you especially, dots & strokes of blood. As the curiosity intensifies your heart rate, blood pounding through your veins, walking amongst the trail of blood. You feel your heart beating like a drum, almost up to what seems like a crescendo,

BBTIIIIIINGgg.....

You fall to the floor and see small, Little Derpy Hooves flying around you,
letting letters fall out of their bags.
“Oh, I'm sorry, but I told you to stay out of my basement.”
Are the last words you heard before the blackness came over you.

After the last few hours, you finally regain vision and your ability to hear
Once more. You struggle. You look at all of your limbs, cuffed to chains attatched to the ground. You start freaking out. Panicking to your fullest, you start to try attempting to escape. But alas, you fail at your attempt. You hear a
voice in the darkness. Not knowing weather it came from North, South, East, or West, You say, “WHO ARE YOU? WHERE AM I??!!”. You see a yellow figure with pink hair, with a ton of split ends out of the darkness. “In my basement, of course.” “Fluttershy! What kind of sick, twisted joke is this??!”
you yell in frustration. “Wow, if this was a joke, you wouldn't take it very lightly. Of course,” she said again, “It's not a joke.” Your eyes widen in fear and disruption.

Seeming that it is futile to try and escape, you ask “Wha-What are you gonna do to me?” “Oh, not much. Just sit, well, just stay in the air chained to the roof and ground like that.” She walks back into the black, cold darkness.
You barely see anything past the pitch black darkness, but you can still see figures of, tools. Like for gardening! You see a chainsaw, garden scissors,
all the sort. Th-oom Th-oom...your blood paces faster and you think “Okay, you gotta calm down, I might be able to escape.” Then Fluttershy comes out of the darkness. “Ya know, a lot of people think that I'm just a shy pony who lives with small, woodland creatures. But really, its much more than that.” She said as she suddenly turned on the light. You shut your eyes as they adjust to the light, but to your surprise, you see tons of animal skeletons, with their organs hung around them, and their fur skins covering their backs on the wall. And dead-smack dab in the little of the room, is a huge animal, like the size of a Triceritops, Made with small bones and organs. “See him? Yes, oh yes, he is very big. You see, He only needs a few more bones,” She says as she lifts the skin from other animal's furs covering him. “As well as some organs. But you see, this is my grand masterpiece, and the little animals bones aren't going to make the cut. So when I heard about the new pony in town, I knew just who to use.” Oh. My. Gosh. Author: Lol, ur screwed.
“Now, lets begin. As much as I need to kill you, I at least need to numb you so you don't feel pain. I'm not that sadistic.” She then plucks a needle, a very long one at that, into your flank. “Good thing I know acupuncture.” She said with a wink. Suddenly, your legs and hooves start feeling weird, but then you just lose all feeling in them. “This is also good so you won't escape”. Then she grabs a set of surgeon operation tools to get started. “Now lets start on your belly.” She grabs a scapel and makes a large oval vertical to your stomach. You cry and sob, but not in pain, but in fear of death. “Your not afraid of blood, or broken bones, but of death, odd. First person that I've met with a fear like that.” Then she takes out the huge oval of your skin, and puts it gently onto a white table. You look down at your stomach and you can see all of your internal organs, and puke in disgust. “Oh, look what you did to my beautiful red carpet! Now it has a green, mucky stain.” SLAP “Ouch, that hurt!” you say finally. Grabbing a pair of garden scissors, she cuts your stomach out right at the beginning of your small intestine, and cuts the other end as well.

“What made you do this Fluttershy?!” you say in between sobs and tears.
“Oh, haven't I told you already? For my grand masterpiece and then to get
the hookup on potions with Zecora To make my monster come alive! See, I want to take people who made fun of me in high school. “You don't have to do this!! For the sake of other ponies, not just mine!” you yell at her in a begging fashion. “Its just the way things go. I'm sorry. Now can we please continue?” Then grabbing a Razor blade, quite large at that, started to skin your coat, starting at the same place she numbed you at.

As you see your lightly brown-touched coat come clean off, you see your whole body of muscles. “Oh god...” As seeing this, you faint.

“You know, falling asleep while you are guesting at another home is quite rude!” growled Fluttershy, with blood all over her face. “Now your gonna pay the price.”. Going back into the darkness and hurrying to you once more with something huge in her grasp. A Chainsaw. “Boy, isn't this getting corny.”
You think to your self.

“You have some beautiful hooves.” Remarked Fluttershy in amazement.
“ They would look absolutely lovely on my beast. I think I will take them, your not going to be needing them after this, anyway.” She said with a twitch.

VRMM...VRM...VRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRMMM!!!!!!!1

“SHHII- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUGH!”
You yell in agonizing pain. “Aw, these are lovely!” She then attached them
to the beast. There you go. Now for his bones. “Why bother, this is not going well anyways.” You said in your Thoughts. She spreads open the hole she cut into you earlier and started plucking out every bone, one by one. You can barely move, hardly even breathe at that. Feeling like just drifting away into the abyss, its what happens.

“Angel, wake him up please.” “With pleasure madame.” ANGH! “Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!” you yell. “YOU FELL ASLEEP AGAIN?!!! I CANT BELIEVE YOU!” Yelled as loudly as she could. “THAT WAS THE LAST STRAW!” VERRRRRRRMMMMMM..... She got the chainsaw again, and aimed for your neck.

“Oh, crap.”

GASP

You wake up to find your self in your home in Ponyville.
“I don't think I'll visit those ponies The Mayor told me about.”
And you roll back into bed.

FIN